Shayar Sameer : His frustration at Mrs Maheshwari's reluctance

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi All,
Last Friday and yesterday's episodic updates were full of Sameer venting his frustration over Naina in the form of taunts over her middle-class habits.

Meher Di ,this is dedicated to you and your realistic explanations of Sameer's frustration.

Tu woh aftab tha,joh sirf mera laga.
Tune tha jab tanha chhoda,toh khud ka wajood bhi beparwah sa laga.
Khuda se jab inayat hua tera daaman dubara,toh der sahi par Ussne karam farmaya aisa laga.
Tune jab labon ke shabnam chuarane na dia,toh haseen armaanon ke janaaze mein mujhe phir se tanha sa laga
Arson purana hai tere aazmaish ka kissa ,kya tujhe ab bhi main yakin ke layak na laga.

Would love to know your thoughts on the above piece...
Love,
Ria.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This was very beautiful Ria di
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks Suhani,Sadhika and @Saji79