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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Dr. Babloo: Doctor'kka will treat Lashy'kka, because she is the reason for the sindrum. I will ''ssist Doctor'kka..

Ok Lashy akka your patients are waiting for treatment
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Ifakdha

Ok Lashy akka your patients are waiting for treatment


😆 Hayooo!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41


Good morning, everyone! 🤗


😭

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

This reminded me Heera when she visited dungeon she put up a brave face and smiled for Khan Sahib despite being lost her pride and everything.


😭

Originally posted by: Testmytest


Heera put up a brave face and had a fake smile in front of Gauri, people of Parnagarh, and her god parents in Bansi 😭 but she would go to her jiji's room and pour her heart out 😭

She couldn't get Khan sahib out of her mind and felt that void in her heart 😔


I'm supposed to be sad, but I'm finding this utterly romantic!

Originally posted by: Vmanoh


Good Morning BinduP 🤗 - It would be a hard moment indeed when you are forced to smile - that too knowing when you are losing something! Would need guts to do that!

Heera did face a few situations where she was in such a predicament. The one that comes to mind is when she was a reluctant bride of AMK where she knew his dark secret of being the Ustaad and could not share it with anyone else in Parnagarh. She had to go through the Wedding rituals with a smile for the sake of her people while being privy to the truth of his identity & intentions that she had assumed would be detrimental to them.



Originally posted by: Ifakdha

It was hardest for khan Sahib to let go Heera from Aidabad whithout showing his pain to anyone and forcing smile to his group
Same as with all of us also😭


And this analogy steals the biggest part of my heart!😭
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Btw, Rose... do you remember that snippet where Heera saves a woman in labour? (The one that wasn't included in the chapters?) It would be quite a relevant 'throwback' to those good times, posting it now, wouldn't it?


( From Thread 45 Teaser for C50 ; Page 9, 9 June 2018)
The setting
Parnagarh has settled into relative calm following the unexpected wedding of their baisa with the Mansabdar and the influx of many Muslim families into their village, from a few months ago. But the weather is still searing, showing no sign of respite - with monsoons a distant illusion. While the rest of the town thus gazes up at the clouds, eagerly awaiting a welcome shift; there is one pair of restless glances constantly looking onto the horizon instead - wondering if and when they'd chance upon a pair of dark eyes - the owner of which had left the valleys in a hurry 8 days ago, following a awkward misunderstanding of sorts.

Chapter 38

Miracles

'Arrrghhh...'

'Here... please give this to her to drink...' the young lady handed over a cup of freshly brewed concoction to her aide, followed by a small pot of oily balm 'and rub this on her lower back...'

'Baisa...' her voice was hoarse and croaky from having yelled her lungs out 'please care for my family, baisa... I have no hope... I cannot endure this agony any longer...' Her fingers trembled as she made a feeble attempt to reach out to the heiress. But even before she could finish that sentence, a wave of contractions dragged her through another fit of torment, jolting her weakened body right from the top of her swollen belly, to the tip of her toes.

'Arrrgggh...' Her face turned a deep crimson from the unbearable pain. Then, as soon as that surge of contraction faded, the colour on her face faded too, reducing her features to a ghostly white a sign that the ordeal was sucking life out of her, inch by inch.

'I cannot do this... I cannot carry on any longer...' her eyelids slowly folded down, as if she was passing out.

Till a pungent smell under her nostrils and a hard pat on her face forced her to wake up.

'You will not pass out... do you understand? You will stay awake for the sake of your family... for the sake of your foetus that's fighting for life inside... do you understand?'

A fresh worry line had bridged the gap between her brows, but Heera made sure she kept her hands firm as she held the mother's palm so as to not let her fears show 'You will follow the midwife's instructions, as you have been doing for so long, alright?'

'The pain, baisa...'

'That's why I'm here... am I not?'

Instructing the aides to put the pungent smelling salts away, she wiped the sweat dripping down her cheeks with the back of her hand. Then, picking up a few warm drops of the calming oil, she massaged it in the centre of the young mother's palms. 'With Ma Bhavani's name on your lips, do as the midwife says... stay strong...' She chided the lady to snap some strength into her.

However, inside, she was crumbling with sympathy for a young mother who'd been putting up with relentless labour pain for nearly 40 hours now. As it is, it wasn't the most convenient environment to be giving birth in the humidity was at its absolute searing worst and the tiny hut felt suffocating, crowded with ladies young and old. To make matters worse, the many fretful whispers and terror-filled eyes were sapping any hope that the pregnant woman might have - after all, everyone was aware that intensive labours that lasted this long rarely ended well.

Nevertheless, for the sake of the woman and her family, Heera kept the negativity at bay and soldiered on, quietly resorting to the one that could save this mother and baby. Prayer.

'Ma... you're a mother too... you must understand the kind of pain she's going through...' She prayed in all earnest, blocking out the mother's crushing screams'we are your children, are we not? We have faced enough death in this town... please grant us the gift of life... please let this mother have a safe delivery...'

And it seemed the all-powerful Mother decided to hear their prayers. For, in half an hour, the hut was filled with a new kind of echo. The most beautiful cries of life had silenced the cries of pain and terror - the cry of a purplish red-tinged infant, kicking and wailing in the midwife's arms.

'Congratulations... it's a boy...' she announced 'the Goddess has finally showered her mercy upon us!'

As the announcement gave way to a hundred smiles and prayers in and around the small dwelling, the young mother lay in her bed quietly, a tear trickling down the sides of her face. Her arms were too frail to cradle the infant, her eyes barely able to even make out its face. But her blanched lips managed to mouth a 'thank you' to all the forces that'd helped this miracle happen.

And as Heera was finally given this miracle in her arms, she could feel a hard lump forming in her throat.

'Bless him baisa...' the tearful father folded his arms with gratitude as he eventually stepped into the tent to catch a glimpse of his son's face 'please give him a name'

'It's a lucky child...' added the midwife 'it's brought us good tidings after a string of tragedies...' she rotated her wrinkly palm around its little face thrice, before cracking her knuckles to ward off the evil eye.

'It also reminds us of hope' another lady spoke up 'doesn't it?'

'Yes...'

'Until not so long ago, we feared we were going to lose everything... but, here we are, celebrating...'

'We have been blessed with good tidings ever since the new Mansabdar took up his position... ever since our baisa's wedding to him...'

'Yes baisa...' the father wiped his tears with the edges of his shoulder cloth 'This baby reminds us of the hope that you and Khan Sahib together, have brought us all!'

'We want you both to continue to guide us... and protect us...'

'The hope that you and Khan Sahib together, have brought us all'

The lump in her throat growing harder, Heera observed the faces in the surrounding crowd, over and over again, just to be sure.

They all seemed to be in agreement. And they seemed to mean it too. They were unaware of their Mansabdar's true identity, and had no idea that their baisa was lying to hide this huge scandal. But now that they hailed this marriage a symbol of 'good luck', she couldn't find reason to discredit it or disbelieve it in her heart either even though the wedding had been started off as nothing more than a political game of sorts.

'The hope that you and Khan Sahib together, have brought us all'

There was a soft twang in her heart, their words affecting her in a way that she could not describe. 'I'm honoured... thank you...'

'Oh please don't thank us, baisa...'

'On the contrary, we should be the ones who must apologise to you...'

'An air of melancholy had slowly seeped into the gathering, their eyes rife with regret as they exchanged a few short glances.

'We admit baisa... most of us here were not pleased about having a Mughal man as our Mansabdar... but over time, we've learnt it's not true...'

'It is with his help that we're still alive today... it is because of him that we're still living in our homes... feeding our families...'

'Parnagarh prospers under him... like how it used to prosper under your father'

'In fact, if the Mansabdar were here... we would tell him the same words today, baisa'

'If the Mansabdar were here...'

Her eyes glossed over, part of her lost in a brief recollection '8 days... and no news yet'

'Well...' Heera abruptly broke away from that line of thought, since the strange mix of sentiments was beginning to mist the corner of her eyes. She returned her attention to the sight of the adorable infant fussing in her arms instead.

'Amal... Amal Singh' she smiled, naming the baby after prosperity and hope, before tucking a small pouch of silver coins within its fingers, as a gift 'Much as I don't feel like it, little one... I think I must take your leave now...' she caressed its infantile cheeks with affection for a short while, before handing it back to the midwife.

'take care of yourself... and rest well...' offering a few words of advice for the young mother, she then bade the rest of them a quick farewell, before stepping onto the streets amidst chorus of cheers and a steady stream of greetings

'Thank you baisa...'




A note- Mitu, do you remember you'd asked me to post any parts of the story that I'd written but had edited out. Voila! I just stumbled upon such a one today (the one where Heera delivers a baby - I'd mentioned this one before)
And what an opportune time to have found it when the word of the day is, in fact, miracles!!!

It also is quite timely seeing how in Chapter 49 Mohan banna makes a precise reference to such incidents - so imagine my pleasant surprise when I came across this document while clearing my old files in the folder! Ironical too - seeing what an important/respected/selfless figure she was in their midst, and how things have changed now!




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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Paneer paratha... hot off the tava!

Yummylicious paratha yum yum
You know I am so happy to see you online today🤗

Bindu di🤗
Rose di🤗
Patti🤗
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Waiting to see it materialize, Rekha 😳


Btw I already started working on Patti's idea😳
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


AMK and Heera haven't decided yet... let them enjoy this blissful spell first!

Ok

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Paneer paratha... hot off the tava!



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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915


( From Thread 45 Teaser for C50 ; Page 9, 9 June 2018)
The setting
Parnagarh has settled into relative calm following the unexpected wedding of their baisa with the Mansabdar and the influx of many Muslim families into their village, from a few months ago. But the weather is still searing, showing no sign of respite - with monsoons a distant illusion. While the rest of the town thus gazes up at the clouds, eagerly awaiting a welcome shift; there is one pair of restless glances constantly looking onto the horizon instead - wondering if and when they'd chance upon a pair of dark eyes - the owner of which had left the valleys in a hurry 8 days ago, following a awkward misunderstanding of sorts.

Chapter 38

Miracles

'Arrrghhh...'

'Here... please give this to her to drink...' the young lady handed over a cup of freshly brewed concoction to her aide, followed by a small pot of oily balm 'and rub this on her lower back...'

'Baisa...' her voice was hoarse and croaky from having yelled her lungs out 'please care for my family, baisa... I have no hope... I cannot endure this agony any longer...' Her fingers trembled as she made a feeble attempt to reach out to the heiress. But even before she could finish that sentence, a wave of contractions dragged her through another fit of torment, jolting her weakened body right from the top of her swollen belly, to the tip of her toes.

'Arrrgggh...' Her face turned a deep crimson from the unbearable pain. Then, as soon as that surge of contraction faded, the colour on her face faded too, reducing her features to a ghostly white a sign that the ordeal was sucking life out of her, inch by inch.

'I cannot do this... I cannot carry on any longer...' her eyelids slowly folded down, as if she was passing out.

Till a pungent smell under her nostrils and a hard pat on her face forced her to wake up.

'You will not pass out... do you understand? You will stay awake for the sake of your family... for the sake of your foetus that's fighting for life inside... do you understand?'

A fresh worry line had bridged the gap between her brows, but Heera made sure she kept her hands firm as she held the mother's palm so as to not let her fears show 'You will follow the midwife's instructions, as you have been doing for so long, alright?'

'The pain, baisa...'

'That's why I'm here... am I not?'

Instructing the aides to put the pungent smelling salts away, she wiped the sweat dripping down her cheeks with the back of her hand. Then, picking up a few warm drops of the calming oil, she massaged it in the centre of the young mother's palms. 'With Ma Bhavani's name on your lips, do as the midwife says... stay strong...' She chided the lady to snap some strength into her.

However, inside, she was crumbling with sympathy for a young mother who'd been putting up with relentless labour pain for nearly 40 hours now. As it is, it wasn't the most convenient environment to be giving birth in the humidity was at its absolute searing worst and the tiny hut felt suffocating, crowded with ladies young and old. To make matters worse, the many fretful whispers and terror-filled eyes were sapping any hope that the pregnant woman might have - after all, everyone was aware that intensive labours that lasted this long rarely ended well.

Nevertheless, for the sake of the woman and her family, Heera kept the negativity at bay and soldiered on, quietly resorting to the one that could save this mother and baby. Prayer.

'Ma... you're a mother too... you must understand the kind of pain she's going through...' She prayed in all earnest, blocking out the mother's crushing screams'we are your children, are we not? We have faced enough death in this town... please grant us the gift of life... please let this mother have a safe delivery...'

And it seemed the all-powerful Mother decided to hear their prayers. For, in half an hour, the hut was filled with a new kind of echo. The most beautiful cries of life had silenced the cries of pain and terror - the cry of a purplish red-tinged infant, kicking and wailing in the midwife's arms.

'Congratulations... it's a boy...' she announced 'the Goddess has finally showered her mercy upon us!'

As the announcement gave way to a hundred smiles and prayers in and around the small dwelling, the young mother lay in her bed quietly, a tear trickling down the sides of her face. Her arms were too frail to cradle the infant, her eyes barely able to even make out its face. But her blanched lips managed to mouth a 'thank you' to all the forces that'd helped this miracle happen.

And as Heera was finally given this miracle in her arms, she could feel a hard lump forming in her throat.

'Bless him baisa...' the tearful father folded his arms with gratitude as he eventually stepped into the tent to catch a glimpse of his son's face 'please give him a name'

'It's a lucky child...' added the midwife 'it's brought us good tidings after a string of tragedies...' she rotated her wrinkly palm around its little face thrice, before cracking her knuckles to ward off the evil eye.

'It also reminds us of hope' another lady spoke up 'doesn't it?'

'Yes...'

'Until not so long ago, we feared we were going to lose everything... but, here we are, celebrating...'

'We have been blessed with good tidings ever since the new Mansabdar took up his position... ever since our baisa's wedding to him...'

'Yes baisa...' the father wiped his tears with the edges of his shoulder cloth 'This baby reminds us of the hope that you and Khan Sahib together, have brought us all!'

'We want you both to continue to guide us... and protect us...'

'The hope that you and Khan Sahib together, have brought us all'

The lump in her throat growing harder, Heera observed the faces in the surrounding crowd, over and over again, just to be sure.

They all seemed to be in agreement. And they seemed to mean it too. They were unaware of their Mansabdar's true identity, and had no idea that their baisa was lying to hide this huge scandal. But now that they hailed this marriage a symbol of 'good luck', she couldn't find reason to discredit it or disbelieve it in her heart either even though the wedding had been started off as nothing more than a political game of sorts.

'The hope that you and Khan Sahib together, have brought us all'

There was a soft twang in her heart, their words affecting her in a way that she could not describe. 'I'm honoured... thank you...'

'Oh please don't thank us, baisa...'

'On the contrary, we should be the ones who must apologise to you...'

'An air of melancholy had slowly seeped into the gathering, their eyes rife with regret as they exchanged a few short glances.

'We admit baisa... most of us here were not pleased about having a Mughal man as our Mansabdar... but over time, we've learnt it's not true...'

'It is with his help that we're still alive today... it is because of him that we're still living in our homes... feeding our families...'

'Parnagarh prospers under him... like how it used to prosper under your father'

'In fact, if the Mansabdar were here... we would tell him the same words today, baisa'

'If the Mansabdar were here...'

Her eyes glossed over, part of her lost in a brief recollection '8 days... and no news yet'

'Well...' Heera abruptly broke away from that line of thought, since the strange mix of sentiments was beginning to mist the corner of her eyes. She returned her attention to the sight of the adorable infant fussing in her arms instead.

'Amal... Amal Singh' she smiled, naming the baby after prosperity and hope, before tucking a small pouch of silver coins within its fingers, as a gift 'Much as I don't feel like it, little one... I think I must take your leave now...' she caressed its infantile cheeks with affection for a short while, before handing it back to the midwife.

'take care of yourself... and rest well...' offering a few words of advice for the young mother, she then bade the rest of them a quick farewell, before stepping onto the streets amidst chorus of cheers and a steady stream of greetings

'Thank you baisa...'




A note- Mitu, do you remember you'd asked me to post any parts of the story that I'd written but had edited out. Voila! I just stumbled upon such a one today (the one where Heera delivers a baby - I'd mentioned this one before)
And what an opportune time to have found it when the word of the day is, in fact, miracles!!!

It also is quite timely seeing how in Chapter 49 Mohan banna makes a precise reference to such incidents - so imagine my pleasant surprise when I came across this document while clearing my old files in the folder! Ironical too - seeing what an important/respected/selfless figure she was in their midst, and how things have changed now!




Oh my my so beautiful
And that pic is cherry on the cake
Indeed this is the most magical process which happens in ones life
So beautifully described😳👏
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Knew Rose is going to ask me about it even as I posted it😆... Do you know this is different from the cheese paratha...both taste wise and ingredient wise 😳

Originally posted by: lashy

Came out well... so posting here..
Chilli cheese paratha with kadai paneer.. for everyone! 🤗

Ahso ( Japanese-style😆). Different taste wise and ingredient wise, but lookswise, both are head-turners!

Now, two recipes in the IOU vault!😉 🤣

Edited by roseraja1915 - 5 years ago
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