KalMa OS: Zodi Zamli (Jodi Jam Gayi) Completed

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KalMa OS:

Kalyani, Anupriya's daughter is her reason to live, her reason of happiness. If she had Kalyani in her life Anupriya was happy. If Kalyani was happy she did not need anything else in her life. The pain of the past, the pain caused by Kalyani's birth parents had begun to subside ever since she came into Anupriya's life. All she prayed for was for Kalyani to be happy in her life. Kalyani at the tender age of 18 years had experienced many highs and lows. Anupriya was her daughter's strong protector like the mountains protect our country. She gave Kalyani shade when the latter was bearing the burns from Malhar's anger. Her heart was as vast as the ocean which welcomed Kalyani and hid her inside it like the ocean hides the natural treasures. She truly loved and treasured Kalyani. Likewise, Anupriya had become everything for Kalyani too. Whatever it was, however it was formed, Kalyani had a relationship with Malhar. She had her husband and their son, Moksh. Malhar had been harsh towards her, he had hated her, he had tortured her but one thing she thought she was blessed with was that Malhar did not abandon her. Anupriya, her mother was abandoned by her husband, Kalyani's father even before she was born. Kalyani, an innocent unborn life had been stamped as the reason of Anupriya being left all alone in this world. She had relatives but they were just in name. She was not alone but she was lonely. Kalyani wanted to snatch away that loneliness and fill her mother's life with happiness and bring what she lost 18 years ago, marital bliss.

Malhar and Kalyani had joined hands to find a suitable life partner for Anupriya. Kalyani had registered Anupriya's profile on a matrimonial site. It had been a month and half since the registration but they had no success. Almost every night they sat together to search for a suitable match. Malhar and Kalyani were going through the options of suitable candidates. "Kalyani, tum bhi na ye choice hai tumhaari? "Kyun Malharji kya buraai hai inmein? Handsome hain, well settled hain, personality bhi acchi hai, aap background check kar lena but yahan jitna information hai uss se toh mujhe ye suitable lage. "Kya khaak suitable hai. Kalyani unke family back ground ko dekha. Unke chaar chhote bhi behen hain. Ye sabse bade hain so saari responsibility unki hai. Iska matlab unki responsibilities maai ki hogi. Agar itna bada langar maai ke maathe daalna hai toh unki shadi kyun karwani hai ghar par hi bithakar rakhte hain yahan bhi toh wo sabki dekh bhaal karti hain toh kya zaroorat hai unhe kisi aur ke ghar bhejkar wahan unse sabki dekh bhaal karwane ki. Malhar reasoned his objection. "Haan ye toh theek hai but aai ko pati ke saath parivaar bhi toh milna chahiye na. "Toh Kalyani maine kab mana kiya but chhota parivaar sukhi parivaar. Kalyani agreed with him.

"Umm Malharji parivaar se yaad aaya, kaka yahaan shift nahi honge kya? Malhar had asked his Sarthak kaka to  move in with them. "Kalyani wo kaka ko yahan laana mujhe theek nahi lag raha. "Kyun? Sampada aur Atharva ki wjah se? "Haan. Kalyani, kaka aur mere parivaar ne bade chaav se Sampada ko mere liye chuna tha. Lekin jo mere saath hua usmein wo apna fault maante hain ki unhone theek se investigation nahi ki. Ab agar wo yahan rahenge toh roz dekhenge ki unka faisla kitna galat tha aur unhe mere liye meri wajah se takleef hogi iss liye maine socha ki kaka mere puraane ghar mein rahenge. "Haan Malharji aapne theek kiya. Unki koi galti nahi thi phir bhi khud ko guilty maanenge. "Jaise ki tum. Malhar took her hands in his and pressed them lightly to comfort her. "Oh haan Malharji yaad aaya aai ne kaha tha ki humein kaka ko khaane par invite karna chahiye. "Haan main bhi soch raha tha lekin yahan? Aur tumhaare... Kalyani knew he was right but why did he have to say it to her face. "Pata hai pata hai ki main accha khana nahi banati lekin dekh lena ek din main aai jaisa accha khana banongi aur aap apni ungliyaan chat te reh jaayenge. "Dekhenge. He challenged. "Dekh lena. She accepted. They went back to looking for a suitable match.

Next morning,

"Kalyani, aaj lunch ke liye maine kaka ko invite kar liya hai. Gol chwk par jo Mughlai restaurant hain waha maine table book kar liya hai. Malhar informed Kalyani as they both got ready for the day. "Theek hai Malharji, aap humein college se pick kar lijiyega." Kalyani picked up her bag, kissed Moksh good bye and left. Malhar too unknowingly pecked Moksh on the same spot Kalyani had. Smart baby Moksh giggled as he was the only one who knew what just happened. "Bahut khush ho rah hai do do kissi mili iss liye. Waise bahut lucky hai tu, baba ko toh koi moonh se bhi bye nahi bolta. Malhar too left for the PS. Kalyani told Anupriya about the lunch appointment with Sarthak. "Theek hai Kalyani tum log acche se maza karna main ghar jati hoon. Before Kalyani could say something Sarthak came to where they were. "Arre Anupriya ji aap kahan ja rahi hain? Humaare saath aapko bhi lunch par jaana hai.  Kalyani nodded in agreement. "Nahi, nahi Kalyani main ghar jaoongi. Malhar arrived just as Anupriya tried to leave. "Anupriya ji please aap bhi humein join kijiye. Dekhiye na inn dono love birds ke saath main akela kabab mein haddi bankar reh jaoonga. Love birds.' Kalyani and Malhar both thought. "Arre kaka aisa kuch nahi hai. The two said at the same time. "Dekha aapne Anupriya ji inn dono ke beech main akela. Please meri khatir chaliye nahi toh main bhi nahi jaoonga. Kalyani and Malhar liked how Sarthak tackled Anupriya.

The four arrived at the restaurant in Sarthak's sedan. The restaurant's interior seemed to have transported them into the Mughal Era. Sarthak being the gentleman he was, pulled the chair for Anupriya. He took the seat next to her. Malhar sat across Sarthak. "Kya hua Kalyani? Khadi kyun ho? Baitho. Sarthak was disappointed in Malhar for not acting gentlemanly. He was getting up to pull the chair for Kalyani when she stopped him. "Nahi kaka, it's ok main khud hi baith jaoongi. She plopped on the chair showing she too was disappointed in Malhar. "Kalyani araam se kuri todne ka irada hai kya? "Malhar ji... Kalyani stopped because of the elders. "Malhar ji kya? Kya kaha maine? Kuch kaha maine? Malhar thought she was over reacting. Anupriya and Sarthak exchanged looks, Kya hoga inka?' This was the first time Anupriya and Sarthak made eye contact. She quickly lowered her eyes and he looked away.  Malhar and Kalyani were too busy amongst themselves sharing cute, angry, irritating glances to have noticed Sarthak Anupriya's eye contact. "Aai, kya hua? Kalyani asked a nervous Anupriya. "Na...nahi. She stuttered. Sarthak smiled just a little too little to be noticed.

"Ye lijiye Anupriya ji, kya lengi aap? Sarthak handed the Menu card to Anupriya. "Main? Main kya order karoon? Jo sab order karenge mujhe chalega. "Nahi aai, tum wo kyun khaogi jo koi aur pasand kare. Tumhaari apni bhi choice hai, apni choice ka izhaar karna seekho. Kalyani wanted Anupriya to be independent as an individual. "Haan mai, aap ki apni pasand bataiye jaise Kalyani ghaas phoos order karegi waise hi aap apne mann se apne liye order kijiye. "Kya ghaas phoos? Malhar ji main aapko koi gai -bakri lagti hoon, acche se vegetarian food nahi bol sakte. Anupriya was still hesitating. "Anupriya ji lagta hai aap meri class mein dhyaan nahi deti, teacher jo bolta rahe bolne do main nahi sunti, yehi karti hai na aap? "Nahi nahi Sarthak ji main aapki kaksha mein poore dhyaan se sunti hoon aur seekhti bhi hoon. Sacchi. Repiled Anupriya pinching the skin on her throat. Sarthak smiled as Anupriya looked really cute when she swore like a little girl. Kalyani and Malhar witnessed the interaction between Sarthak and Anupriya. "Toh phir saabit kijiye. Anupriya ordered food for herself, so did Sarthak. Kalyani ordered vegetarian, "Make that two. Malhar ordered the same as Kalyani. She looked at him, "Malharji, aap aur ghaas phoos? "Kalyani tum bhi na kya ho gaya agar maine vegetarian order kiya. "Haan haan Kalyani beta toh kya hua?  Anupriya and Sarthak exchanged smiles as they saw something in Malhar whereas Kalyani was completely clueless. "Malhar kuch hua hai kya? His tone teased Malhar.  "KAKA!

They were enjoying the food and the conversation. It was all new to Anupriya, dining at a restaurant, sharing the table with the men of the house. Kalyani had brought a positive change in her life. Everything was going fine. "Excuse me! Kalyani got off the chair. "Kya hua Kalyani? Malhar and Anupriya asked in unison on seeing the worried expression on her face. "Kuch nahi aai, main washroom hokar aati hoon. "Main bhi chaloon? "Aai, come on main koi chhoti bacchi nahi hoon. Aap log enjoy kjiye main bas abhi aayi. Kalyani rushed off. She was taking longer than expected. "Kalyani kahan reh gayi? Main use dekhkar aati hoon. Anupriya was about to get up to go find Kalyani. "Mai main dekhta hoon aap baithiye. Malhar excused himself and came to the women's wash room. There was hardly any crowd at the restaurant. A couple of women went in and out of the washroom. "Excuse me, meri patni andar hai aapne dekha? Malhar asked one of the women. "Pata nahi, maine toh nahi dekha haan par ek booth band tha shayad aapki patni andar ho.  

Malhar knocked on the door of the washroom, "Excuse me koi andar hai? No one answered so he slightly opened the door and took a peek. There he saw two feet making the golden high heeled sandals look even more beautiful. "Kalyani, tum andar ho? Main andar aa raha hoon. Malhar entered the washroom and knocked on the booth door. "Kalyani? "Malhar ji? Aap yahan kya kar rahe hain? Ye ladies washroom hai aapko pata nahi. "Pata hai main tumhe dekhne aaya hoon itna time kyun lag raha hai. Sab theek toh hai na? Kalyani did not reply. "Kalyani darwaza kholo. She opened the booth door a little bit and tilted her head so he could see her face. "Kya hua hai Kalyani? "Wo Malhar ji my monthly friend is here. "Huh? Malhar did not understand. "Malharji mere periods aaye hain. She said clearly. "Kalyani tum bhi na kamal karti ho! Tumhe apni date yaad nahi thi? Tumhe prepared hona chahiye tha na. "Aapki daant sunne ka mood nahi hai. Aur aapki jaankari ke liye mujhe meri date yaad hai par itne dino se koi na koi tension ho rahi thi, aur aapko toh pata hoga ki stress mein date aage peeche ho jaati hai. Sampada was mentioned without being actually called by name. Malhar's expression made Kalyani feel bad for having reminded him of Sampada. "I am sure ki aapke zamaane mein bhi bio class mein iske baare mein sikhaya hoga.  Kalayni now knew how to distract his mind off of Sampada.

Malhar once again felt grateful to have Kalyani in his life. "Haan haan humaare zamaane mein bhi school mein sikhate the ye sab. Ab bolo kya karna hai, mai ko bulaoon? "Hain? Malharji ismein aai ko bulaaane ki kya baat hai. Aur aai ko enjoy karne dijiye. Aap... She bit her lip and thought for a second before asking it of him. "Malhar ji, aap mere liye pad lekar aayenge? "Main?! Malhar had never shopped for ladies sanitary not even for Sampada. "Toh aur kaun hain yahan? Malhar ji please, chaahe aap uss time kitne bhi gusse mein honge par aapko yaad hai shaadi ke time par aapne kasam khayi thi ki mujhe har mushkil se bachayenge toh ab wo vachan nibhaane ke time aa gaya hai. Please. "Ok ismein shaadi ki ksamein yaad dilane wali koi baaat nahi hai. Malhar turned to leave from the washroom. "Arre, aise kuch bhi lekar aayenge kya? Main kya use karti hoon ye toh sun lijiye. "Whisper Ultra Wings XL. Malhar replied without looking back. Kalyani's mouth for a perfect o'. "Malhar ji. "Ab kya hai Kalyani? "Malhar ji wo chota pack hota hai na 2 pads wala wo lena ghar par mere paas 30 wala economic pack hai faltu mein zyaada lenge toh paise waste honge. "Aata hoon. Malhar left and Kalyani went back inside the booth.

"Meri company itni bhi buri nahi hai. Sarthak broke the silence left by Malhar and Kalyani's absence. "Nahi wo aisi koi baat nahi hai Sarthak ji. Anupriya avoided looking at him. "Kahan reh gaye ye dono? Sorry aapko mere saath yahan akele baithna pad rah hai. Anupriya's distant behavior troubled Sarthak. "Sarthak ji aisa nahi hai. "Bacche yahan the tab aap kuch aur thi aur ab aap kuch aur hain. "Sarthak ji aap galat soch rahe hain. "Toh aap sahi samjha dijiye. Sarthak was an open and friendly person. "Wo maine pehle kabhi aise restaurant mein nahi khaya. Anupriya spoke in a softly. "Jee kuch kaha aapne? "Wo aapne kaksha mein poocha tha na ki humne ab tak apni zindagi mein jo nahi kiya hai uski list banaye wohi. Pehli, maine kabhi aise restaurant mein nahi khaya. Doosri, maine kabhi khud ki pasand ka khana nahi kahya. Teesri, main aise kisi aur ke saath akele nahi rahi. Aisi kai baatein hain jo maine pehle kabhi nahi ki. Shayad uski list aapko sunaane mein baki ki poori umar guzar jaaye. Anupriya said with her eyes drilling a hole in the floor. "Toh guzar jaane djiye, mujhe manzoor hai. Sarthak's words surprised her making her lift her head up and look at him.

Malhar was at the super market near the restaurant. He went to the aisle where sanitary pads were stocked. Malhar was searching for the ones Kalyani used. "Ye aj kal ke ladke koi sharam lihaaz hai hi nahi. Dekho toh kaise yahaan khada hai. Malhar looked at the aunties who criticized him. "OH MY GOD, dekho toh he is such a gentleman. Unki wife ya girlfriend kitni lucky hongi ki ye uske liye pads buy karne aaye hain. Last week maine apne boy friend se kaha toh wo bhadak gaya. Kaash duniya ke sabhi boyfriends aur husbands ya at least mera boyfriend inke jaisa ban jaaye. A young girl praised him. Malhar was stuck between two generations of women. He finally found what Kalyani had asked for and went to the cashier. The cashier uncle also gave him a weird look so Malhar bought a pack of chewing gum and smiled "Ab theek hai na uncle ji. "Maine kya kaha? He said giving Malhar the change. "Aapki aankhon ne bahut kuch kaha. Malhar came back to the restaurant wash room.  "Kalyani? "Haan aa jaiye koi nahi hai. "Ye lo. Kahan se doon? "Neeche se. Malhar handed the pack to Kalyani and came out of the washroom waiting for her. "Ye kya Malhar ji. "Kya hua? "Maine aapse kya kaha tha? 2 pads wala pack lena aap 8 wala le aaye. "Kalyani jo mila wo  le aaya. Tumhaara kaam ho gaya na ab chaho toh baki ke phenk do. "Kya atlab phenk do khali fokat mein paise kyun waste karna. "Toh rakh lo waise bhi kaam toh aana hi hai inhe. She tugged on Malhar's coat sleeve.  "Ab kya hai? "Malhar ji wo mere purse mein toh fit aayenge nahi toh aap apne coat ke pocket mein rakh lijiye na. Malhar refused and walked ahead, she followed him and kept on asking. When they reach the dining hall he had no choice but to take it and stuff it in his coat pocket. He thought he would have felt weird if Anupriya or Sarthak would know about it.

"Kalyani, kitna time. Kahan the tum dono! Anupriya asked in a worrying yet angry tone. "Haan bhai tumhaari aayi ko yahan mere saath akele tum dono ke bina bilkul accha nahi laga raha tha. Aage se inhe mere saath akela mat chhodkar jana. Sarthak felt bad because of Anupriya's behavior. "Nahi maine aisa toh nhi kaha tha. Main aapke saath akele bore nahi hui. Aapke saath akele rehne mein mujhe koi problem nahi hui. Anupriya realized what she just said, closed her eyes and started fidgeting with her dupatta Bappa ye maine kya bol diya.' Malhar and Kalyani stared blankly at Sarthak and Anupriya. Then they looked at each other. Malhar, Inn dono ke beech hua kya hai?' Kalyani,Pata nahi.' Malhar, Pata lagana padega.' Kalyani, Main bhi yehi soch rahi hoon.' While they conversed silently, Anupriya nervously stole glances at Sarthak but his gaze on her was as confident as ever.

"Ab humein chalna chahiye. Kalyani mujhe der ho rahi hai aao sahib daantengi. The rest of the party agreed. Malhar cleared the bill as it was his treat. Sarthak agreed after making them promise that he would treat them next. The two agreed and said that they would definitely make him give them a big treat. Sarthak drove with Malhar in the passenger seat next to him. Kalyani and Anupriya sat in the back. Sarthak adjusted the rear view mirror and accidently Anupriya saw her image in it. Their eyes met for a second then both looked away. "Kaka chalen? "Malhar asked. "Haan haan chalo. Sarthak keyed in the ignition. Malhar and Kalyani exchanged look through the rear view mirror.

That night,

Kalyani and Anupriya were near the LOC of Ahilya Nivas. "Kalyani, aaj jo tumne kiya hai na waisa dobaara kabhi mat karna. "Maine kya kiya aai? "Mujhe akela chodkar gayi thi tum. "Aayi maine tumhe akela nahi choda tha, Sarthak kaka the wahan. "Wohi, main wohi keh rahi hoon ki mujhe unke saath akela mat chodna. "Kyun aayi, kuch hua kya? Unhone kuch kaha kya? Koi baat buri lagi tumhe unki? "Maine aisa kab kaha Kalyani, wo acche hain. Bahut acche hain par... "Par kya ayi? "Par pata nahi kuch samajh nahi aa raha... Anupriya left mumbling.

Kalyani came to her bedroom. Malhar had already fed and put Moksh to bed. Kalyani's laptop was on. "Malhar ji aap mere laptop ke saath kya kar rahe hain? She asked bolting the door. "Jasoosi nahi kar raha. "Malharji. "Kalyani, mai ka profile matrimonial site se delete kar do. "Kyun Malhar ji? "Kyunki maine maai ke liye life partner pasand kar liya hai. "Malhar ji maine bhi aai ke liye life partner choose kar liya hai. "Meri choice tumse better hai toh tumhaari choice ko main reject karta hoon. "Arre aise kaise aapki choice bhi mujhe pata hai kaisi hai main aapki choice reject karti hoon. They both sat facing away from each other. Their choice for Anupriya's partner had never matched the others'. "Kalyani iss baar jo meri choice hai na tum reject nahi kar paogi. "Aur meri choice sunkar toh aap khushi se uchhal padenge. They both were confident about their choice. "Theek hai so hum teen ginte hain phir dono ek saath bolenge. Deal? Malhar asked. "Deal. She agreed. Malhar counted 1...2...3' "Kaka! They both took Sarthak's name at the same time. Both of them became happy like kids at a Kids Caf. They high fived, and hugged each other joyously.

Next morning,

"Kalyani, ek strong chai lao mere liye. Malhar's head was spinning. A little while later Kalyani brought him his tea. He put his hand out to take the cup but she kept it on the table. "Kalyani, kya hua? Kya soch rahi ho? Raat bhr tum theek se nahi soyi aur na mujhe sone diya. "Kalyani let out a sigh. She came and kneeled before Malhar. "Malhar ji, aap se ek baat poochoon? "Poocho? "Agar meri aayi aur aapke kaka ki shaadi ho gayi toh... Malhar understood where she was going with this question. "Toh bhi fikar mat karo hum dono ko aapas mein Rakshabandan nahi manani padegi. He gently hit her on her crazy head. "Malharji! 


The End.

Edited by Chahat_A_Doshi - 5 years ago
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Wonderful OS...awww..malhar is so cute yaar...and rakshabandhan thing was very nice...loved it...
Can u plz write an OS on the scene jab kalyani ko shock lagta hai aur wo behosh ho jati hai...I want to know malhar s reaction and his feelings 
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Such a cute os! 
Loved it! 
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Res... Bahut lamba OS hai 😆

Unres


Haha rakshabandhan nai manana padega🤣
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Aww. ..Cute... 
Rakshbandhan dialogue is awesome.. ..
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It was a wonderful OS. I just loved it. I love how you focused on both the couples. 
PS - the rakshyabandhan thing was going on in my mind too.
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Nice one. Loved it..
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Wow... growing proximity and romance in both couples... very nice.. loved it. KalMa realizing Kaka it is for anu...nicely written
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Originally posted by: vinlora

Wonderful OS...awww..malhar is so cute yaar...and rakshabandhan thing was very nice...loved it...

Can u plz write an OS on the scene jab kalyani ko shock lagta hai aur wo behosh ho jati hai...I want to know malhar s reaction and his feelings 


Thank you for liking it

It was going to come in today's episode so i couldn't think of anything

Something major happens to her hospital pahuch jaaye aisa kuch I will think and write

BTW now my mood is seriously effed on seing the promo for 16

It must be Anupriya's nightmare I am so wishing it to be