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Kashh, you beat yourself with the characterisation of Shaurya in this FF. He's is the darkest
amongst all your stories probably. Obsessed, arrogant, autocratic, cruel and an antagonist too.
Doesn't care what Mehek feels and Mehek wants. It's always him and his. Mehek is totally trapped
in this relationship and Shaurya is obsessed with her, wants to possess her and doesn't treat her
like a human. His mother's ditching him even for a good cause and what she thought was for a
just cause left him bitter and made him a sadist. Hope Mehek will be able to make him see what
he has become and value their relationship and treasure, respect Mehek's presence in his life,
but knowing you, you may just turn her into another revenge seeking soul Kash. Have mercy on us
and happy reading to us.😛😆
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