Ariya TS: kismat ka khel

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hey all ariyans I m here with my first TS (2 shot) ...well ye is hne wala tha bt maine ise TS bna dia...hope u all like it...so here's it...
Note- guys it's crazy... I don't know why n how it came to my mind...but yet I penned it down...plz bear it...all criticisms r welcomed...

Ariya TS: Kismat ka khel

It was yet another day in ETF. The whole day they were busy in solving a case. It was a very difficult case in which ariya n samsha went as couples. Well samsha r already couple ( I mean they r married). N yah shriza engaged too. Anyways lets come to ariya. He was on the verge of losing her today. Criminal ko follow krte krte she almost fell frm a cliff bt he saved her. Now at present he is on his knees proposing her fr marriage n interestingly he wants to marry her right now. All r shocked enough but still happy for both of them. They get married (well av filhal mandir me marriage ho rhi hai...bad me families k sth wd all rituals). After marriage he took her to his home. She was nervous would be an understatement...but finally she gave up on it. N there she was lying beside him after a wonderful love making session. 
(Well guys I m not able to write it all...so...sorry about that...)
Next morning
She woke up to found herself in his she got up frm bed n after freshening up went to kitchen to make breakfast... But little was she aware that wat was going to happen with d vry nxt moment...
A few minutes ago...he woke up... Remembered everything n all of a sudden a guilt took over his feelings...
Arjun(MV)- how cn I betray roshni...how come I do this all? No...I have to end it...right here...right now...
N there he was in the kitchen... He went to her n said- Ria...
Ria- are arjun ap uth gae? Mai break...
Bt b4 she cn complete he said...
Arjun- I m sorry... It was all a mistake...
Her face drained- wat???
Arjun- mai is shadi ko nhi manta...I cnt betray roshni... I m sorry for everything but its over...
Ria was numb to react bt yet she managed to say- r u sure about it?
Arjun- yes...
The next second she just went out of his house numbly...tears flowing continuously frm her beautiful eyes...
 
To be continued...
 
OK guys that's it for today...
Plz let me know if I should continue or not?

Thank you...
Love...
Raksha...😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Omggg what a updated dear..
Shocking n Interesting ..
Poor ri..
Ye arj bhi na sach mai😡.
Shadi ke baad use guilty lag raha hai..
Omgg ab ri kya karegi..
Waiting for next..
Thanks for pm dr..
Updated soon..
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: ariya143

Omggg what a updated dear..

Shocking n Interesting ..
Poor ri..
Ye arj bhi na sach mai 😡.
Shadi ke baad use guilty lag raha hai..
Omgg ab ri kya karegi..
Waiting for next..
Thanks for pm dr..
Updated soon..


Will update soon...
Stay tuned dear...😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Arjun yeh kaise kar sakta hai Riya ke saath poor ri feeling bad for her fab start dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

Arjun yeh kaise kar sakta hai Riya ke saath poor ri feeling bad for her fab start dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm


M glad that you liked it di...stay tuned...😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice start
Ye kya shuru me hi bomb fod diya..
Ab Arjun Ri ko manayega par wo nhi manegi haina
Cont soon
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Nice start

Ye kya shuru me hi bomb fod diya..
Ab Arjun Ri ko manayega par wo nhi manegi haina
Cont soon
Thnx for pm


Lets see kya hota hai...😛
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you...😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice start but ye Arjun karta pahle h sochta baad me h...
Ab itna acha kaa Kiya Riya see shadi Kar ke phr pata nhi kaha see roshni ka khayal aa Gaya uhhh..  .
Next update me Zara ache see khabar Lena Arjun ki Riya rulaya na isiliye...
Nd plzzz iski happy ending hi banana plzzz,...
Continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
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interesting
loved it
thnx for pm
update soon