BEHIR FF : YEH MERI DEEWANAGEE !!! Part 3 pg 3 updated

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TITLE: YEH MERI DEEWANAGEE !!!

CHARACTERS:
MAIN: MAHIR AND BELA
OTHERS: JYOTI TAI, TAMANNA, AMAN, SHABIIR PATEL AND SARDAR SAHEEB
POV: MAHIR AND BELA (COLOR CODED)

TEASER

MIDDLE PART OF THE STORY ...

"After coming so far, it is now impossible for me to look behind... what is done is done... what was not supposed to happen, happened in a flip of a second and everything changed... and this change has come to stay... stay in my life forever... I guess ", my mind was absorbed as I stared hard at the rain from my window sipping my coffee... Suddenly a thought struck me and I turned on my chair and looked at the drawer... I went for the keys and opened it slowly... My hands were shivering but somehow, I managed to open it... And there it was shining brightly in that cold cornor of that drawer... HER ANKLET !" I whispered..

"What is this happening to me" , I was staring myself in the mirror..."If this true, I should try my best to make it untrue... This shouldn't be happening Bela" my mind continuously chattered as tears welled up in my eyes ... "You are not allowed Bela.. You don't belong here... What are you doing?... this is wrong..."  I cried in my mind as i lost all control on my body dashing on the floor holding his handkerchief close to my heart...

PS: HI EVERYONE ... MYSELF SONAL... I AM AN OLD MEMBER OF INDIA FORUMS AND WAS DEDICATEDLY FOLLOWING TASHAN E ISHQ... SINCE, THE SHOW WENT OFF AIR AND I CAUGHT UP WITH MY STUDIES I TOOK A BREAK FROM WRITING ... NOW THAT I AM AGAIN HOOKED UP TO TELEVISION... MY INTEREST IN NAAGIN 3 IS INCREASING.. ESPACIALLY FOR BELA AND MAHIR... HAPPY TO BE BACK AND WRITING..  😃 AND YES THIS IS NEW FF I AM WRITING FOR ALL BEHIR AND PEARBHI FANS OUT THERE...

THIS FF IS NOT HAVING ANY SUPERNATURAL CONTENT INVOLVED BUT YES ITS A THRILLER ROMANCE GENRE KINDA CONCEPT... I HAD STARTED THIS AT TEI FORUM BUT LEFT IT INCOMPLETE AS THE SHOW WENT OFF AIR... BUT WOULD LIKE TO COMPLETE IT HERE...

I HOPE U LIKE THE TEASER AND THERE ARE SO MANY SURPRISES STORE IN FOR U GUYS IN THIS STORY...

THANK YOU. ! ðŸ˜‰
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Part 1 

                 " Helloo Control Room.. , we need more back up over here, They r More thn wat we have predicted .. Send Mahir Sehgal Asap...", said Aman who ws incharge of this raid.. They wer raiding a area near  Lokhandawala... Some Most wanted notoruois goons wer hiding... and according to information recieved thy wer.suppose to b 4...but to their disappointment thr wer 10 and with Guns... And Aman and this team wer finding it difficult to defeat thm.. With limited Ammunition and force... Aman had to call Mahir coz he can handle this very well... 
                   Siren Roarred,, !!! ..as  the jeep arrived in the location...with 5 sub inspectors and 3 havaldarrs a Man sparkling in Aviators, white shirt with sleeves folded upto the elbow, Shirt Prefectly tucked into  his jeans...tracing his well chiseled abbs..and a Badge proudly attached to his belt...walked towards Aman.. Inspector Mahir Sehgal, IPS, Encounter Specialist, trained in Dehradun... A Man In his Twenties but the Work Experience of a man in Fifties.. With His Braveness and Strong will power.. He had handled most nasty cases.. Earning hell lot of  accolades frm the seniors... He is man of Terms.. Doesn't give shit,..neither take shit frm anyone...  He prefer dressing casually on duty since he doesn't like flaunting his stars on his shoulders.. Seniors allowed this condition only because his presence ws.very important to thm... 
                  Aman and Mahir  salute each other..."Mahir,  there are 10 of thm inside.. According to the movements recorded...we hav a rough idea of wer exactly thy r hiding in this building.. They r only having pistols...and no high end guns like AK47 or snipper..."  Showing the Sketch to Mahir ", Wat do u think Mahir", asked Aman... Mahir took the sketch and Marked some crosses on he sheet.. " Aman, i will go frm West side of the building and U go frm East side ... According to me 5 are on 6th floor and 5 on 3rd... Is the Building evacuated..?  We need to Attack... ", Mahir said... " Yes, it is.." Added Aman... " Lets get moving.. ", Mahir said and Loaded his Gun...  Thy stormed into to building making their way silently upwards... Aman and team rached.3rd floor and Mahir with his team reached 6th... " Lets attack.. ", Mahir ordered on the walkie... Soon the building was filled with loud sounds of Gunshots... 
                   Mahir ws ferociously taking down the.goons... One of the 4 on 6th floor managed to run... Mahir chased  him... Bullets in both of their pistols wer over... The goon ran outside the building in.full speed... And Mahir chasing him with the same speed.. The Goon entered.the Bar to hide himself frm Kunj..but Mahir saw him entering the bar... He Ws Chasing him in the crowd..  whn he dashed with a Grl running in opposite direction and the bundle of 100 rupee Notes which she ws holding  flew in the air falling down like a shower of money... She immediately droped down frantically collecting those... Mahir looked at her and for a second he ws zoned out... She collected the money and without looking at him stromed out of the bar..  Mahir looked her walking away whn he noticed her anklet leave her feet and swung behind on the carpet... He immediately went and placed it in his pocket... He had no idea y he did tht in such a tense situation... He ws snapped back whn.Aman called him.. " Hey bro, good Chase... We caught tht bas***d.. ", Aman said placing his hand on Mahir's shoulder... .. Mahir brushed his stubbles with his fingers looking at the Bar Gate.. " Lets get him Talking... ", he said.. 
                      " Bela, did u manged the money to deposit. ", Jyoti Tai asked. .. Bela nodded her head in yes..  " Okay now go and deposit the money on counter.. I'll wait outside ", Jyoti tai Said and sat on the porch outside the hospital... At the counter with shivering hands she handed the money to the accountant... " This is the first installment ", Bela said with cold voice... The Accountant looked up and nodded her head in Ok...  " Come on Saturday, with 2nd installment ", the accountant said... Bela's eyes widened.. " Madam, hw will i manage 10k in 4 days.. ? Please giv me more tym.. ",she pleaded... " No, sorry rules are rules ..Go now ", accountant handed her the receipt... Bela swollowed the lump of her throat... She remembered wat happened at the Bar today... 
                        " Yo Baby... Wat voice u hav Baby... Come to me i'll make u A Star..  ", A drunkard said to Bela whn she ws Singing on the stage... Bela ws use to this bullshit Commets frm the customers of the bar.., but no one ws allowed to come on stage and go near her.. The owner had taken all the precautions, but this drunkard managed to come on stage and touch her waist... And Bela had slapped him hard on his face breaking few teeth... The owner threw the customer out.. But Bela asked her boss tht she wanted to quit this job... Shabbir Patel owner of the Bar...wss a considerate man..for him Bela ws like his own daughter.. But he ws also a Hand to mouth man..with lots of debt on himself... . Willing to help this grl but himself cudn't get over his problems..  He agreed but ws.disappointed...coz Bela had such beautiful voice to gather customers... " Bela,  U can go ..but Whenever u feel tht u require me or my assistance.. Dnt hesitate ", he kept his hand on her head,  blessing her..and handed the bundle of 10000 rs. ... 
                          " Jyoti Tai.. They asked fr the 2nd installment in 4 days ... Frm wer i'll get the money ", she cried crashing into Jyoti Tai's arms... " Dnt worry My Grl,. God is der ..He is watching...He'll help..Dnt worry ", Jyoti Tai said cearsing her hair... " Come we'll go home ", she said and stopped the passing by auto... Bela stys in a Datta Chawl in Sion...there r three , Two storay buildings attach to one another... And a Open play ground in the middle.. The rooms are Attached to one another and separated only by one wall... . The passage outside the rooms ws common fr evryone..  Bela stays on 2nd .floor.. On the left side of her room stys Jyoti Tai and  her little 5 year old Grand daughter... The room on right side ws empty... Bela has a very loving relation with everyone..since she is living here past 3 years..  ... She went into her room after thanking Jyoti tai fr coming with her... Her room ws small ..A living room and a Kitchen... " Frm wer will i Get the money, hw will i pay the 2nd installment ", she said sitting down holding her head.. Jus thn she remembered and hastily went to the cupboard.. ANd took out the gold chain... of her Mother ..her last Momento she had... But this ws the only thing which will help her at this dire hour... She wore the chain in her neck to feel the presence of het mom till she sell it fr money... 




Stay.Tuned to unveil hw these souls cross paths with each other... ..
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Nice update dear
Mahir, encounter specialist
He kept her anklet.
Waiting for their meeting
Update soon please
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