ARIYA FF: PUNARVIVAAH - LOVE DESERVES ANOTHER CHANCE

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi Guys  . I am back with a new idea of mine to torture you all. Most of you have repeatedly asked abut ARIYA so considering your request it contains ARIYA with an unique expression of Love. My Partner in  crime is our beloved Rashi AKA 
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I hope har baar ki tarah ye aatyachar bhi aap loog jheel lenge ðŸ¤”🤔 Hope you all will like this concept & support us. I will post the parts soon & please give your feedback on CS & Prologue given below.  

Love & Regards   

Goldie & Rashi  






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PUNARVIVAAH LOVE DESERVS A SECOND CHANCE


PROLOGUE:

Love & Marriage is the most strong and pious bond which stays on till your life, but at times cruel decisions of life makes you totally helpless. Destiny and circumstances make you take such descisions that we don't want but God always gives us what is good us not that what we desire. Love and companionship is most important in any relation of life specifically Marriage but when two broken souls are binded into niptual bond can they live happily after that? It is saying that "Love only happens once but what if your love trust honesty just shatters in a spur of a moment, can such broken souls goive love another chance to knock their heart. Will Love heal their scars and take an upper hand in this pious relationship. For sure that will not be easy but as it is said Love can be nurtured too and it's a reamedy of all pains so will broken souls will give themselves and this love a second chance to enter their life?

SNEAK PEAK: 


Lady in mid twenties is sitting on the decorated bed, everything was the same as that day it had evoked her pain again. 


She sighed and unable to bear more she goes and chages into a simple salwaar kameez removing her bridal attire and jwelery. 


She after changing looks to the full moon outside the window with teary eyes suddenly Man in late twenties enters the room and hearing the sound lady cluched the railing of window more tightly. 


Man in slow voice said with a sigh "Riya! Tumhe is roop dekhunga kabhi soocha nahi tha?" 


Riya said tearly "to kya soocha tha aapne Arjun ... ki main aapko aapki dulhan ki tarah yaha aapka intezaar karti milungi ... Roshni meri sabse acchi dost thi usne mujhe zindigi se ladne ka husla diya thaw o bhi tab jab main zindigi se haar chuki thi ... uski maujoodgi humasha humaare beech rahegi "


Man with a sigh replied "Riya Plaese! Tum kya smaajhti hoo main Roshni ko bhool sakta hoon ... kabhi nahi ... humari shadi ye rishta maine sirf isliye kiya ki Roshni ne mujhse waada liya tha yadi wo yaha na hoo to main tumhara khayal rakhu" 


Lady said with a sob "Arjun! Roshni ke jaane ke baad sabhi wade toot gaye jo usne aapse kiye the or jo usne mujhse kiye the" 


Arjun said glaring at her "to kya apni zindigi barbaad karna chahti hoo ... tumhare aagey tumhari poori zindigi padi hai Riya or Roshni ke jaane ke baad mujhe ek aise sahare ki zaroorat hai jo mujhe smajah sake or main jaanta hoon tum ye kar sakti hoon ... Par humare beech se Roshni kabhi nahi jaayegi .. ab aaram karo raat kaafi ho gayi hai"

 

NAINO SE YE MIL KAR NAINA JANAY KYUN PHIR JHUK JAATEY HAIN

AGAY BADTE HI KADAM YEH JANAY KYUN PHIR RUK JATAY HAIN

DHARKANOON SE HAI GUZARISH DOR MAIN YEH BANDH LE JAYEN HAME

HAR ULJHAN KO SUL JAAYEKASAK MEETHI SI DE JAAYE...

AKHIR DIL HAIN NA DIL HAIN NA...YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI...

SAB IS DIL KI HI TO MUSHKIL HAI... YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI...

SAB IS DIL KI HI TO MUSHKIL HAI...

 

HAWAYE BHI FIZAAE BHI KABHI KHUS HAI KABHI HAIRAN

JUDA HE PAL SHOK HAI GHADIYAN... UTHE HE MACHAL SAB AARMAN...

NAZRON SE KAHETI HAI NAZAREINISHQ HE KYAA SAMJAYE HAME...

HAR ULJHAN KO SUL JAAYEKASAK MEETHI SI DE JAAYE...

AKHIR DIL HAIN NA DIL HAIN NA...YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI...

SAB IS DIL KI HI TO MUSHKIL HAI... YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI...

SAB IS DIL KI HI TO MUSHKIL HAI...

 

KABHI TUM BHI YE KEH DO NA TUMKO BHI MERI JARURAT

MUJHE HARPAL CHAHTE HO TUM MUJHKO HAI TUMSE MUHABAAT

DEKHU AB TOH KOI SURAT AAP HI BAS IK CHAAHE HAMEIN

HAR ULJHAN KO SUL JAAYEKASAK MEETHI SI DE JAAYE...

AKHIR DIL HAIN NA DIL HAIN NA...YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI...

SAB IS DIL KI HI TO MUSHKIL HAI... YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI...

SAB IS DIL KI HI TO MUSHKIL HAI...

 

BATAAUN KYAA ANDHERON MEIN YUN KAT RAHI THI ZINDAGI KAISI

MAGAR AB HAI ZINDAGI MEIN MERI ROSHANI IK ZINDAGI JAISI

UN RAAHON PAR CHALDENEGE HUM AAP RAAHEIN JO DIKHALAAYE HAME

HAR ULJHAN KO SULJHAAYEKASAK MEETHI SI DE JAAYE...

AKHIR DIL HAIN NA DIL HAIN NA...YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI...

SAB IS DIL KI HI TO MUSHKIL HAI... YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI YEH DIL HAI...

SAB IS DIL KI HI TO MUSHKIL HAI...


CHARACTERIZATION:   Characters are:


ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE: A soft hearted and good natured person, IPS by Profession and a very sensitive person. He loves his wife and his family a lot




RIYA ARJUN RAWTE: Riya is soft hearted middle claas girl, emotional yet a strong person. Circumstances got her married to Arjun.  




ROSHNI ARJUN RAWTE: Beautful courageous yet emotional girl, she was fast friend of Riya and first wife of Arjun. Psycatrist by profession and died in a car accident.



SURYAKANT RAWTE & NAINA RAWTE: Suryakant is famous businessman of Pune he is a loving father and husband he loves his family a lot Naina is his beautiful wife and she is a loving mother and a sensitive lady  


 




SAMEER DHAMSINGH RATHORE & AISHA RATHORE: Sameer is a close friend of Arjun and is also an IPS by profession Aisha is his beautiful and she too is a friend of Arjun and is encounter specialst in crime branch







I will add more characters if required as the story progresses.😊 


So how was it ? please give your Reviews ðŸ˜Š       







Edited by LOVE.GOLD - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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CS N PROLOGUE -- PAGE 1 

PART 1---PAGE 5  

PART 2---PAGE 13

PART 3---PAGE 22

PART 4---PAGE 31

PART 5---PAGE 39

PART 6---PAGE 46

PART 7---PAGE 53

PART 8---PAGE 63

PART 9---PAGE 70

PART 10---PAGE 77

PART 11---PAGE 85

PART 12---PAGE 93

PART 13---PAGE 97

PART 14---PAGE 101

PART 15---PAGE 110

PART 16---PAGE 113

Edited by Ariyatogether - 4 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Dear Readers,


We will update this FF depending upon our work & your responses too As its a joint FF plaese wait bit patiently for updates I think itna attyachaar kaafi hoga ðŸ¤” so please let us know that weather we should continue or not ðŸ˜Š & If you guys liked it please let us know through your comments & wait for this story to unfold. ðŸ¤—      


Love & Regards 
Goldie  & Rashi  





Edited by LOVE.GOLD - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice C's nd prologue...
Continue soon and send me pm also...
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow...very nice concept...love it...
Plz update soon...
N thanks for pm...😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice update 
Can understand riya...
Thanks for the pm 
Continue soon 
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Posted: 5 years ago
#8
Wowww new one ariya story..
Interesting concept..
Love too read more dear..
Continue soon..
Waiting for updated...
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Posted: 5 years ago
#9
Awesome concept
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting prologue and cs.
Willing to read it's next part.
Thanks for pm.