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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hello friends,

This one shot is about Nandini's journey portrayed in serial. I just heard song Naina from Dangal and thought it would be well suited on her as shown her in earlier episodes... Actually VMs will be better but I don't know how to do it and I don't have much time for it so trying to convey emotions through OS. I hope you guys will like it..

Do read and let me know hows that..

-x-xxx-x-

Jhootha jag rain basera
Saancha dard mera


After the incident where Rajdeep has bought an another girl and tortured Nandini, she was sitting in corner of her room. She is frightened. She has hidden her head in her legs and crying silently. Her eyes are swollen.

Mrig-trishna sa moh piya
Naata mera tera


She remembered her best friend Mauli first when she is in pain. Even before her parents as both friends were so close to each other like they have blood relation..

Naina jo saanjhe khwab dekhte the

Nandini remembered the time when she used to dream about future, husband, family , all small these things with her best friend Mauli.

Naina bichad ke aaj ro diye hain yun

But now she is alone in the room where her husband has brought another women when she is carrying his child in her womb.

Naina.. jo milke raat jaagte the

She remembered when she and Mauli used to talk whole night and still their chats were never ending.

Naina.. sehar mein palken meechte hain yun

In this new city there is no one for her to talk, to share.. Due to crying her eyes has become swollen..

Juda huve kadam
Jinhone li thi ye kasam
Milke chalenge hardum


Nandini remembered when she was married to Rajdeep forcefully by her parents, Instead of perusing her dreams. Mauli was with her to support her but she also couldn't do anything and both friends separated.

Ab baant'te hain ye gham
Bheege naina.. jo khidkhiyon se jhankte the
Naina.. ghutan mein band ho gaye hai yun


Now she has only her tears with her to share her sorrow. The eyes which had dreams before, which used to glow with happiness, has only fear and tears stored in them now..

Saans hairaan hai
Mann pareshaan hai
Ho rahi si kyun ruaansa ye meri jaan hai


Nandini is so scared now no one is there to console her, to be with her. Mauli was her strength but she is also not there now. Nandini is feeling weak day by day..

Kyun nirasha se hai
Aas haari huyi
Kyun sawaalon ka utha sa
Dil mein toofaan hai


Nandini is feeling all dejected and loser. She didn't have any hopes of any positive thing will happen now. Being Mrs Rajdeep she has to follow what her husband tells her even if its wrong. She has
many questions about her child, future but she doesn't have answers..

Naina.. the aasmaan ke sitaare
Naina.. grahan mein aaj toot'te hain yun


Eyes which use to sparkle like stars in sky before. Now those eyes have only depression, sadness..

Naina.. kabhi jo dhoop senkte thhe
Naina.. thehar ke chhaaon dhoondhte hain yun


The eyes which use to have confidence before and never use to get afraid of anything, those eyes are petrified now and searching for warmth..

Juda huye kadam
Jinhone li thi ye kasam
Milke chalenge hardum
Ab baant'te hain ye gham
Bheege naina.. jo sanjhe khwab dekhte the
Naina.. bichhad ke aaj ro diye hain yun

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congrats ...
yet to read just want to say ...i like the title NainaEdited by Keepdreaming - 5 years ago
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Beautiful os dear!
You have penned down all the emitions very beautifully!
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

congrats ...
yet to read just want to say ...i like the title Naina

I am glad you like the title... Drishti has most expressive eyes so Naina suita her perfect I feel..
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Originally posted by: Ayesha05

Beautiful os dear!
You have penned down all the emitions very beautifully!

Thank tou so much dear for liking.. 😊
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Thank you 😊
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well written OS.I loved it
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Originally posted by: madlal

well written OS.I loved it

I am glad youbliked it 😊 Thank you..
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Posted: 5 years ago
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very emotional
beautifully written
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love this song ' Naina '
you written her emotions so well
very touching ... this song going so well with her situation
loved it mishty