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Posted: 5 years ago
Shinu darling thanks for updating this. I woke up in morning and read it first before starting my morning chores. It was super so sweet lovely as how Mehak fall in love with Shaurya and how our Khanna is waiting patiently for heryo confess her love. The entire chapter is mind blowing... Their temple encounter and after work meet up is very beautiful... I really appreciate your efforts to translate the dialogue from Hindi to English word by word. A dummy like me really need that. and i truly appreciate it. continue soon my dear. thanks for making our Sunday happy.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Thank you so much for the long awaited update..
Beautifully written πŸ‘
I like the way of your describing the environment of each scene...πŸ‘πŸΌ
Shaurya's breakfast table part with nanz and karuna ma was really good...
The love birds spend time with each other under the tree and forget about the time..and their parting scene is really cute..
Omg mehek's confession was really amazing...the way she said "mujhe na ho gaya hai"... i was just laughing reading this..πŸ˜†
Enjoyed reading the chapter...
Thanks for the pm...please continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
Hay cutie pie update dedi tumne πŸ₯³
thanks a lot muaaahh πŸ˜›
res
Awesome update shinu πŸ‘
beautifully described her feelings finally she gave name her feelings as a Love Now she wants to tells him but this judai makes them more restless
finally she gain some courage to tells him his happiness now no boundaries Awesome buddy Loved it
n waiting for holi update that means 21st wooow so excited
continue soon

😳
Edited by Chandana2010 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: abn0709

Speechless.. πŸ‘.

What a beauty of words...its so poetic..you are really great writer.πŸ˜›.

How beautifully written the emotions of first love for both of them.

Thru your story..u r giving real justice to Mehrya chemistry, while reading your stories I was like..watching, feeling them in front of me..

You are actually a very sentimental, emotional, lovable n pure person..that is why you can think n creat such a beautiful stories..

I love u for this...

Pls keep writing...you are amazing person..

With Love
Manasvi

Ohhh... Manasvi..see am blushing😳☺️☺️
Thanks a ton for these lovely words Manasvi...I doubt whether I deserve these..πŸ€—
Glad that you liked it..
Wish to keep up your expectations in the future updates too...😊
Gratitude😳
Love you too..❀️
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: kamali870

Thanks a lot updating this chapter Shinu, reading this story even I'm felt magical, super talented you're especially expressing Shaurya and Mehak povs 😳.

This is long chapter for you, for Mehryan like me this is choti chapterπŸ˜‰.
All these things like I'm watching Mehrya in real. Love filled chapters
Finally hogaya🀣 i mean Mehak love confessions
And the Mehrya's previous hug☺️
Thank you for the pm Shinu.
Precap -holi😳
Please another update jaldi dho na ok

Awww.. thankyou so much Kamali..πŸ€—
Glad that you liked it..😊
And yes.. finally hogaya..πŸ˜†
Am planning to update without much delay this time...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago
Beautiful Update Di
Mehak Confessed her feelings Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Come soon with romantic one huhπŸ˜‰
Waiting
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AD04

Thanks for the much awaited update Shinu πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

I just loved it... N u hv beautifully written the feelings of mehrya they are going throughπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Shaurya too caught by his nanz n ma... It was cute leg pulling session of shaurya. N on other side mehek is in her dream land. πŸ˜‰
Mehek was cursing her why she didnt talk in temple... But their meeting in park was so lovely which finally made to confess her feelings... Awww n their hug
It was totally mehrillicious update shinu... I have one request...we all have seen desperate shaurya... But i really wanna c desperate mehek here... Is it possible here... I guess so it is possible. Do consider it if it is possible in this storyπŸ˜›
I am eagerly waiting for next... Continue soon please... πŸ˜›
Thanks for the PMπŸ˜›

Awww.. thankyou so much Aarti di..πŸ€—
@bold: Haven't planned about the future scenes. So ofcourse will try to introduce a desperate Mehak. Will definitely try to work on it di.
Hope it will live up to your expectations..πŸ˜‰
Really appreciate your suggestions di..πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘
Wish to update soon..😊
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Haseena2020

Shinu darling thanks for updating this. I woke up in morning and read it first before starting my morning chores. It was super so sweet lovely as how Mehak fall in love with Shaurya and how our Khanna is waiting patiently for heryo confess her love. The entire chapter is mind blowing... Their temple encounter and after work meet up is very beautiful... I really appreciate your efforts to translate the dialogue from Hindi to English word by word. A dummy like me really need that. and i truly appreciate it. continue soon my dear. thanks for making our Sunday happy.

Thanks a ton for reading and leaving your valuable fb Haseena di..πŸ€—
Glad that you liked it..πŸ˜›
Will try to continue soon di..πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: friendlyghost08

Thank you so much for the long awaited update..
Beautifully written πŸ‘
I like the way of your describing the environment of each scene...πŸ‘πŸΌ
Shaurya's breakfast table part with nanz and karuna ma was really good...
The love birds spend time with each other under the tree and forget about the time..and their parting scene is really cute..
Omg mehek's confession was really amazing...the way she said "mujhe na ho gaya hai"... i was just laughing reading this..πŸ˜†
Enjoyed reading the chapter...
Thanks for the pm...please continue soon

Awww... thankyou so much Lima behen for reading and leaving your valuable fb..πŸ€—
Glad that you liked Mehek's epic confessionπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†
Will try to continue soon..πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandana2010

Hay cutie pie update dedi tumne πŸ₯³
thanks a lot muaaahh πŸ˜›
res
Awesome update shinu πŸ‘
beautifully described her feelings finally she gave name her feelings as a Love Now she wants to tells him but this judai makes them more restless
finally she gain some courage to tells him his happiness now no boundaries Awesome buddy Loved it
n waiting for holi update that means 21st wooow so excited
continue soon

😳

Big Muaah to you too...❀️
Thanks a ton for reading and leaving your valuable fb Anu di..πŸ€—
Badly missing you here..😭
Arey aapne update keliye date bhi decide ki..πŸ˜†
Sincerely wish to continue soon di..😊
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