Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Amazing start Surbhi...roothna manana was so cute and the last part was brilliantly penned down😃
Thanks for another amazing story from you dear...keep writing and keep rocking as ever😃Thanks a lot for the pm😃
Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
it was awesome
I loved it so much
so cute
update soon
Originally posted by: moumita04
Phew... finally I am here too... Aisa lagne laga tha k ispe bhi comment 2nd part ho jaaneke baad hi kar paungi... Haha... 😆😆
Thoda hangover hai Macau se so don't mind agar spelling mistakes ho comment me to... 😛Haha koi na...tum aur spelling mistakes...hangover me bhi nahi! 😉😉Thank you so much for taking out the time dear! 🤗First question - Is this TS based on jealousy from both sides? So basically next part me Sameer ki jealousy dekhne ko milegi?Yes dear...next part mein Sameer ki jealousy dekhne ko milegi! Though yet to think n write on it!Kya dialogues hai yaar isme Sur... Sameer ke dialogues are amazing... Full romantic movie wale feels... DDLJ types...Hehe...DDLJ, DHKMN, JWM, QSQT, Roop tera mastana ka mash-up tha ye update...hehe...I'm a big pankha of romance movies...esp rom-coms...😆Naina ke nakhre... That girl knew ke Sameer kahan jayega, uske peeche hi aayega... but daring solid hai boss... bus miss kar diya... socha bhi nai ke baaki dusre kya sochenge ke full night Naina aur Sameer kahan the...Aur yeh kitni jealous hoti hai yaar... Kamya and her short skirts ... uff... 😆Hehe...gusse mein ladki ne kuch socha hi nahi...bas yai socha ki how dare her MKK eye another billi! 😆😆Sameer... Sameer... hand kiss... back hug... neck pe kiss... aah... perfectly knows the sweet spots of women... zyada knowledge aa gai ladke me... 😛Ladke mein bahot knowledge thi mujhe to lagta hai...hostel me raha hai...already ek girlfriend bhi rahi hai...😆😆😆 Yaad hai kaise without a hint of hesitation, he went over to Naina after the Romeo-Juliet play n tried to kiss her hand...us time to sirf shart wali ladki thi na apparently! Wo to Naina ke bholepan ne ise subdue kar rakha tha...but dheere dheere dil ke armaan wapis aa rahe hain! 😉That hotel room... yaar... I was thinking ke unko kaise hotel me room mil sakta hai... but u took care of that detailing perfectly.. .and this hotel room / inn seemed so shady... Jab We Met ka Hotel Decent yaad aa gaya... Ratlam ki sadko me adhi raat ko hourly rate pe room... hahhaa... 😆😆Chalo achcha hai yeh Manali tha... and Naina didn't interfere in discussion... and police ki raid bhi nai padi... 😆😆Haha...haan yaar...wo to one of the best scenes hai JWM ka...Hotel Decent...hum room per hour pe lenge! 🤣Naina to room me chidi hui rahi yaar... Loved how Sameer got irritated... naraazgi ki bhi limit hai... and that shaadi wala dialogue.. .sarcastic... yet conveyed that he is ever ready... 😃 Persistent lover, that's what he is... tabela type room dekhke bhi romance karne ka mood ban raha tha uska... Roop tera mastana indeed... 😆Hehe...I don't blame Sameer here...mood to banega hi aur thoda Naina ko shaant karna flop ho raha hai to chup hoke apni dreams mein kho gaya! 😉Awww... he tried so much to manao Naina... kya khaogi... and even when she didn't reply he took care to get her food... but when she still didn't relent, he too didn't eat... God... How did Naina resist... main to kab ka maan gai hoti yaar...Hehe...Sameer hai na itna caring! 😳😳 Use pata hai wo kha legi thodi der mein!Sameer's brainwave... bimari ka natak... and Naina ka concern bahar aa gaya... how adorable these two are... keeping aside everything to take care of each other... 😳 Ah.. Sameer pulled her on bed... my gutter mind got activated... 😛Par sach me bechare bachche hai abhi to... And bhukkad pangs cannot be controlled of course... I can visualize Sameer being all tired after their first night and then sneaking into kitchen to eat... And Naina waking up thinking where's he gone... hahaha... 😆😆Haha...Mou tumhari imagination...😆😆 I loved it...but yahan thoda innocent romance hi rakha maine! 😉The night talks and the morning kiss... Hayee Naina couldn't control herself... gussa hoti hai par baad me reward bhi mil jaata hai Sameer ko...He should be rewarded na for al that he does for her...after all, these two are hopelessly in love! 😳😊Foot in mouth disease Sameer dear... never ever compare... you don't know how you would feel if your girl starts comparing... 😆😆 Literally made me wonder if the comparison had come from Naina what would he have done... hahahaa...Haha...tab to Sameer would have gone into his usual, sulking mood- boiling with rage...vaise...good idea Mou, maybe I can incorporate that in part 2! 😉Chalo at least isi bahaane he got a second kiss as well... ❤️Yep- ek ke saath ek muft, muft, muft! 😉So, Kamya saw their romance... I wonder what's gonna happen next... Update soon...!! 😳Kamya ka role next update mein pata chal jayega...would write when I get time dear- hopefully soon! 😳Love,Mou
Originally posted by: yashimalhotra
Wow this was so cute and adorable. Gave me all the feels.
And you write so wonderfully.Eager to read the next part.
Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
Hey dear!! Thank you so much!! 🤗Haan total DDLJ types...😆Arey sorry yaar...so they are not married...they are in college...probably first or second year...they've come for a college picnic to Manali...Kamya studies in the same college as them...Naina Sameer ko Kamya se has-has ke baat karte dekh, gussa ho gayi aur bus se utar gayi...fir Sameer uske piche bhagne laga lekin use pata hi nahi tha ki hua kya hai...aur because they missed the bus, unko raat ko rukne ke liye ek jagah chahiye thi...aur unmarried hone ki wajah se badi mushkil se mili...😊hehe...yeah J Sam likhna hai abhi!Arey bilkul request kar sakti ho dear...agar tumhe lage ki main kuch ache se likh sakti hun toh! 😳Thanks for the comments dear!LoveSur
Originally posted by: Booklover94
Omg,this is awesome!!!
Pls update as soon,I really want to read the next part.Btw,what do I call you?
Originally posted by: meinfrau14
awesome update..cant wait for Sameer's turn to be jealous !!
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