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KABIR : ZYAADA ACHA HOTHA AGAR HAMARI BIWI RUKSAAR HOTHE HAI !
This will be a post where differences between zara and kabir will be high and unknowingly kavir start feeling ruksaar can be a better wife ti him, and thus a small leap between zara and kabir and later he starts feel for zaaara when she is nearby and started his change of mind and thoughts !!
With the issues in Com and regard to kabir new project , already zaara gaved her opinion and kabir is not happy with the zaaras interference .
Also ruksaar instigitates kabir against zaara interference ,and also started showing care and behaves in a way as kabeer wants .
Whereas zaara is trying all possible ways to mend kabir and lead a good professional as well as married life .
Zaara : Kabir kya hum aaj aapke saath shariya board ja sakte hain, Abbu ne bataay aaj ek important case ka faisla hai!
kabir : he got irked at her words and lashes at her ! zaara hum ye samaj mein nahin aatha ki aapko hamaari ghar aur parivaar nahin dikhthe hain kya.
Aapki zimdhari ye ghar tak hi hain, aapne kabhi bhi ruksaar aur xeenat bhabi ko aise koi bahaar janane wali bhat kehthe suna hai.
Zaara was also irked heraing kabir taking ruksaar name (afterall she know ruksaar was the root cause for all problems )
Zaara : kabir aap doosore se mera comparison math kijiye, sab k aapni apni interest hotha hai, Mujhe bahaar jaake kaam karna acha lagtha hai, Isiliye meine padayi ki dhi aur vo bhi ghar se door rahakhe.
meri abbu ne hamesha mujhe iss sab ke liye badava diya hai. Aur mein jithar kaam karna chhathi hoon, uthat aap bi hai na , mein aapke saath chalne ki baat kar rahi hoon.
Hum zyaada waqt ek doosre ke saath bithapaayenge . aap samjiye kabir
Kabir : He was silent , he didnt say anything to zaara ...he started to leave room
zaara : kabir kya meine kuch galat kaha
kabir : aap ab beti nahin,,,,bahu hai, hadh mein rahiye. Aur jabse nikaah hui hai...aap humse bahas hi tho kar rahe he, aur aap chhathe hai ki hum zyaada waqt ek dusre ke saath guzzare . Mujhe nahin lagtha kyon ki , main nahin chahtha aap mere saath shariya board aaye.
aap bahu ka simdhari ache se nibhaye . Aap ruksaar ko dekh lijiye, uski shaadi hone waali hai...phir bhi wo kithna sehmi si aur saare zimdhariyan ache se nibha rahiye . Mein kahatha hoon ki ruksaar mein wo saare ghun hai ki vo ek biwi aur bahhu mein chhaiye .
zaara : bas kabir , aapko nahin laghtha aap meri baaton ko koi alag hi angle mein lekhe jaa rahe hain. mein aapki biwi hoon, ruksaar nahin...
Kabir : accha hota ruksaar meri biwi bante, atleast meri kaamo mein dhakal andhasi aur salah nahin dete...kam kaam qazi bane ne ki chakkar mein tumse nikaah ho gaya...kabir couldnt complete his words. he just stopped suddenly. He couldnt believe what he said now . He just stared as zaara who was standing still looking at kabir face
Zaara s face was expressionless, She didnt utter a word, she left the room ...without looking at kabir .
...to be continued ...
Next part :
Zaara : Abbu kya hum apne ghar wapas jaa sakthe hain
Zaara in her home with her abbu and amma ,
Amma : zaara kya huva tum ithar kyu aayi. kabir miya nahin aaye,
Zaara : tears was falling down from eyes (Ammi kabir kabhi zaara ki dha hi nahin)
Part 2...
Kabirs House ,...
Kabir in his room : Kya keha diya meine gusse meine ...
He notices zaara coming with ironed clothes in hand ..
he found her face with no emotions, neither she is not looking into his face ...
Kabir : zaara tum teek ho
Zaara : no reply from her
Kabir : again...zaara meine tumse kuch poocha, tum teek ho
Zaara : Ji
She left room by keeping the clothes in wardrobe.
Kabir was perplexed by her behaviour, he thought...meine socha dha zaara gussa hogi. accha hai shaayad use meri baat samaj mein a rahi hai.
Zaara in kitchen :
Ruksaar and zeenat alomg with Ammi working on kitchen , Ruksaar finds zaaras dull face and she was happy seeing that , she asked zaara, Kya huva zaara , Chehra aisa Murjawa huva Kyu hain.
Zaara was lost in her own thoughts, didnt replied to ruksaar words,
By hearing Shahbas calling Ammi, Zeenat also left kitchen with Ammi..
Ruksaar came near to zaara and whispered in her hear .."ye dooriyan aur udassi yan mubarak hon...dheere dheere kabir mera hoga " Zaara remebered what kabir said
" ZYAADA ACHA HOTHA AGAR HAMARI BIWI RUKSAAR HOTHE HAI !"
She couldnt handle it , and with ruksaar push the hot pan fell over and zaaras habd hurt badly.
She was writhing in pain and ruksaar left zaara alone.
Ammi,... saw zaara crying with holding hands.
ya allah...ye kya huva ...she took zaara to living room and quickly started doing first aid .
By hearing noise in living room , kabir came and saw ammi doing first aid to zaara.
he was so hurt to see zaara like this , he quickly sat beside zaara and holded her hands , she wriths in pain and tears was falling down , kabir couldnt take this , he hugged zaara and wipes her tears .
Zaara was looking into kabir eyes like an innocent child, whereas seeing this ruksaar fumes in anger and thought how can kabir go close to her "
Zaara moved away from kabir and got up and walked to her room.Kabir followed her , Ammi called kabir and said ,,Zaara bahuth mayoos llag rahi hain..uska dyaan rakho
Kabir : JI ammi
Night Time :
Zaara sleeping in her side ,
Kabir saw her sleeping and he wanted to check whether she is feeling better or not , She called zaara ...
But no response from her side ...
Kabir : Sleeping on his side , Muhje dyaanr akhna chahite dha, Shayad zaara ki ye haalat meri baaton ke wajhe se .
Morning:
Kabir wakes up, He saw zaara sleeping ...peacefully
he gently moved his hand on her forehead ...and goes out to get ready .
While leaving to shariya board also zaara was sleeping ,
Kabir to Ammi : Shayyad zaara bahuth Tak gayu hain aur uska haath mein bhi pain hoga, wo so rahin hain, unka dhyann rakhna .
Ammi : tum befikar raho, tumari begum ka khayal hum zaroor rekhenge ,...kabir leaves home smilingly but with a regret in mind that he couldnt talk with zaara in morning.
Zaara : in living room , came near Ammi.
Ammi kya mein apni mykaa ja sakthi hoon, mujhe ammi ke pass jaan dha .
Ammi : zarror beta , kyu pooch rahi ho n
Zaara : nahin ammi mein soch rahin di kya mein thodi din uthar ruk sakthi hoon.
Ammi: acha tho ye baat hain...Teek hai besakh
Zaara : thought to call kabir and tell this ( but he remember his harsh words .and also words said by him once, Iss ghar ka har phisla abbu lethe hain)
Zaara : Abbu kya hum jaa sakte hain
Abbu : haan beta driver tume chod denge , tum jaavo aur apna khayal rakho
Zaara : AAp kabir ko batha di jiyega
Abbu and Ammi smiled at her words ...and abbu said,,,,,,zarroor beta, tum befikar jaavo
Zaara : packed her bags and saw kabir photo frame
Humari beech ab nasddekiyon se zyaada dooriyan hona zaroori hain.
Aapko mera aapse nazdeekiyan badana shyaad accha nahin lag raha hain, tho hum door rahake dekhenge..ki aapko sach much ye shaadi ek majboori lagathi hain
Meine iss risthey ko savarne ka har mumkin koshish kiya hai..shayaad aapko meri mohabath nahin dikha
...aise lag rahan hai ki ...kabir zaara ki kabhi dha hi nahin...
She left kabir home and reached her home...
Her amma happily recieves her, she was sad seeing her hand.
Zaara said she was in a hurry while cooking...they asked abt kabir
He is busy with project and shariya board and said she dont need reason to come to her home
But her amma notices that zaara is hurt due to something. At night zaara sleeping in her mothers lap "
Amma asked , kabir tumara khayal rakhte hai na...tum kish hona...
Zaara :
Amma kabhi hamara kismat saath dete hain,,y a kabhi mohabath saath dete hain...agar doon..o saath nahin diya tho...
amma : zaara tu ye kya bol rahin hain...
zaara : muje lag rah hain: Kabir kabhi zaara ki dha hi nahin...
Amma : in mind thinks ...ye aise kyu soch rahin hain ,,kya isse pata nahin chala na..ki ye shaadi maksat , majboori aur kabir ki khazi padh ka anjaam dha...
Part 3: (in short )
Kabir : zaara chali kyun gayi...
kya vo mujhe chodke chali gayi...
...bina batake vo kaise ja sakthi hain...
Ruksaar : zaara apni manmani kart hain kabir. Usko biwi ka farz adha karna shayad nahin aate.
Ammi shouted at ruksaar for her wordss and abbu said,,,is ghar ki mukhya hum hain...aur zaara beti humse permission l;eke gayi hain..
aur kabir...usse aise laga hoga ki shayaad , tum ithne din zaara ko mykaa mein jaane nahin dete...issiliye usne muje baatay aur tumse kehne ko kaha...
Kabir...itne din...matlab kitne din...!!!?????
Aleena : are bhai bhabi badi wali suit case lekar gayi hain..kya patha kab aayegi...
kabir shouted and left living space :(heunderstood zaara was hurt by his words and left home"
Ammi : miya biwi door nahin rah sakte...allah inka jodi ko nazar na lage...inka mohabath salamat rahe...
to be continued
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