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Story 6: The House On Fire (part 1)

Hi, I am Aarohi, let me tell you about the night my life changed forever... the night when I thought I was about to die.. the night I lost my sanity.

It was a warm spring night and I was 15 years old. My parents had gone on holiday for a weekend, leaving me and my twin sister Tara home alone. We invited our two best friends, Virat and Deep over to keep me company.

We were in my bedroom listening to music. Deep reached out and lowered the volume.

'Hey, why don't we tell some scary stories?' He said.

'I'm also in the mood for a scare,' Tara agreed.

'Sounds like a good idea,' Virat agreed.

'Who's going to go first?' Tara asked.

'Uh..I have one,' I volunteered. 'But..I don't know if I should tell it...'

'Come on,' Virat said. 'Let's hear it!'

'OK,' I said. ' It's a pretty terrible story I heard once. It happened many years ago. There was a man who had a 7 year old son. His wife had died giving birth to the boy. They lived way out in the countryside and there were no neighbors for miles. They didn't even have a phone, because at the time, the lines didn't stretch out that far.

One day, the father came home from work and he was horrified to find that his house was on fire. He immediately thought about his young son and he rushed inside, calling the boy's name. When he heard his son answer, he realized that the poor boy was trapped in his bedroom.

The father ran to the door and tried to open it, but it wouldn't budge. A beam had fallen from the bedroom ceiling and blocked the door. He banged and banged on the door with all his might, but it was too solid. He even rushed against it with his shoulder, trying to break it down, but it was no use. All the time, he could hear his son screaming. The boy was in a panic, screaming and crying out for help.

The man kept trying to batter down the door, but no matter what he did, it held firm. He shouted in rage. He wailed in despair. He no longer thought about anything else, just the door and his son screaming on the other side.

His son burned to death in the house. The father died too. He never managed to open the door, and he stayed there to the end, desperately trying to break it down until he succumbed to the smoke and the flames..'

Deep looked at me in disgust and said, 'That's not scary.'


'I have to admit it's pretty weak,' Virat agreed.

'I second you, its more sad than scary,' Tara also agreed.

That's when I decided to tell them the last part of the story. I hadn't planned on telling them that part, but I got carried away trying to impress them. It was so stupid to continue. I should never have told them.

'Wait, you don't know the rest of the story,' I said. 'Ever since then, the father's ghost is still trying to open the door and save his son. And if you say... Uh ...well I'd rather not say the exact words.. But basically if you call him and tell him that everything is burning and ask him to come and help you, his ghost will appear at your door and take you away...'

Virat looked at me thoughtfully. 'Have you ever tried it?' he asked.

'No,' I replied. 'I'd be too scared to test it out.'

Deep had a gleam of excitement in his eyes. 'Hey! We should do it right now!' he said.

Edited by salley145 - 6 years ago
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virat deep as arohihi tara's friends.wow.arohi's story was so painful.shocking twist that the father's ghost is still trying to open the door.waiting to know whether they will try saying those things n the father's ghost will take them away.perfect pics made me see the scene
Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago
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Story 6: The House On Fire (part 2)

I tensed up. I had no desire to summon a ghost and I was already sorry I had said anything about the legend.

Virat smiled. 'Yeah! Why not!' He said.

I was going to tell them that I didn't want to do it, but they didn't give me a chance.

Deep put on a trembling voice, to imitate the little boy and screamed, 'Daddy! Daddy! Help me! The flames are all around me! I'm scared!'

Then, he burst out laughing. I didn't crack a smile, but him.. He laughed. Virat watched him with amusement, saying nothing.

Deep started screaming again, even louder this time.

'I'M BURNING, DADDY! I'M BURNING, HELP!'

'STOP IT, DEEP! IT'S NOT FUNNY!' I shouted throwing a cushion at him.

I didn't mean to, it just came out of me. I was really scared and I didn't want to hear him anymore.

'What are you afraid of?' Deep laughed. 'Oh, come on, it's just a stupid story... That's all... Not even a good one.'

With a smirk, he continued.

'DADDY! PLEASE HELP ME! THE FIRE IS BURNING ME ALIVE! I'M..'

All of a sudden, there was a loud knock on my bedroom door.

Deep stopped in mid scream. We all froze. There was an eerie silence. We all looked at each other. None of us made a sound.


'BOOM!... BOOM!... BOOM!...'

We almost jumped out of our skin.

'BOOM!... BOOM!... BOOM!...'

'What's that noise?' Deep exclaimed.

'If this is a joke, its really not funny,' said Virat. His face was white as a sheet.

The banging on the door continued.

Then we heard a man screaming. Those horrible cries will remain forever etched in my memory. I can still hear them now. It sounded lika a cry of a dying animal. It was inhuman and infinitely sad.

The banging against the door and that horrible scream continued relentlessly.

I was terrified and tried to hide behind the wardrobe. Deep grabbed a chair and stood poised to strike anyone who entered the room. I curled up against the wall, tears were streaming down my face, Tara hugged me to calm me down.

'No! No!' I cried.

'What is this? She is scared!' Tara scolded Deep.

Immediately, the screaming outside the door grew stronger, even more harrowing, even more terrifying. The banging on the door grew louder. I thought it was going to fly off its hinges.

The panic seemed to overcome almost everyone.

'I cannot take it anymore,' Virat wailed. 'I have got to get out of here.'

With that, he ran to the window and opened it.

'No!' I cried. 'Don't..'

But before I had time to finish my sentence, he jumped out the window. I heard him fall. For a brief moment, everything was silent.

Edited by salley145 - 6 years ago
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Mind Blowing Chapters

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oh deep screamed like the boy who was stuck in the fire not listening to arohi as a joke. is this joke turning serious?is that the fatger's ghost who is banging the door?so scary.now virat jumped out of the window.what's happening to virat now?perfect pics
Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago
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