Aditya- OS/ "You did this to me"

Edited by THEfanOFheartz - 6 years ago

Yasss! I was waiting for this one 😃







Edited by Live-life - 6 years ago

I have to say Aditya's POV was written in a much better way! If Zoya connected to me, Aditya talked to me in this OS. His pain and hurt, his longing, his questions, I could feel every sentence. It felt like he was saying it 

Wow it's awesome👏

Wow, the way you potray Adi's emotion in your writing is simply awesome. 

Originally posted by: Live-life

Yasss! I was waiting for this one 😃 Weeelll...

Aditya's POV..  

Habibti you are a gem at portraying these unsaid feeling of characters, be it anyone. Legit, It leaves me baffled every time I read your writing. I couldn't have put it in better words myself! In fact scratch that.. I couldn't even make it sound so.. real and heartfelt. Ahhh Love your writing! 👏  OMG, why do you know what to say to make me blush Nabs?

Nabs your writing is just as unique and beautiful.  Reading this kinda makes me cry idk why but I just feel like crying. Idk why your saying this. I'm not that good...

The way Aditya is broken right now, it legit makes me wanna cry sometimes. He is trying so hard to seem ok and pretend like everything is ok but there moments where his inner tanki is full and he lashes out, and why wouldn't he?! He has so much inside of him. I understand him and relate to him so much, becaause i am like this too! I don't share my feelings easily with anyone..Alot of people do though. They wear a mask when hurting and act as if everything is okay when its not.It's okay to cry but they don't and instead they get agigated easily. Angry easily. I feel you Nabs... 

But he is also angry at himself because he wants to trust Pooja but his scars run too deep, from his father cheating on his mother and now seeing Pooja like that with Yash.. It kinda killed his last hope of.. trusting people you know what i mean.. I know what you mean... its sad really.

That's why.. whenever he sees Zoya, she becomes the target to his outbursts. He is bothered by the way she trusts Yash so much, even after seeing him holding hands with Pooja, even after seeing their photo at the supermarket. He is bothered because he wishes he could trust Pooja the same way.. I honestly don't know how anyone could trust the person when they break your trust completely? It would be naive and stupid... Cuz you'll be the reason for your own self destruction.. I feel Adi... I don't blame him for doubting Pooja. 

I would be like Adi in this situation... when someone breaks you so bad it makes you question a lot of things. It makes you so heartless that you don't know how to feel or react so you put a mask on hiding your feelings. 

When I wrote this I just wrote it as if I was in his shoes and to be honest in friendship its just like in any relationship... 

When one friend breaks you, hurts you and leaves you. You cry as if theres no tomorrow but when that same person who stood by you in that bad time did the same thing that bi!tch did to you. You lose your sanity. Your trust. Your mind... I'm sorry this isn't getting really personal... 

I don't blame Adi...

But honestly dude...you neeed to write like an actual extended Os on these twoo! I miss reading your writing.. and after reading these snippets it has made me hungryyy 😆 therefore this baby needs her food so pleaseee...write moooreee

I'll try.. idk though.

LOTS AND LOTS AND LOTS OF LUVVV 

 from Baeonkyyy 😳

 ❤️ you too!

PS: I am the first to comment again.. Muwahahha You should just marry me babe 😆

YEAAAH I SHOULD SHOULDNT I?

Originally posted by: A.Green

I have to say Aditya's POV was written in a much better way! If Zoya connected to me, Aditya talked to me in this OS. His pain and hurt, his longing, his questions, I could feel every sentence. It felt like he was saying it 

Brilliantly portrayed👏 You should keep writing!😳

Originally posted by: eufara_naghm

Wow it's awesome👏

You described things rather nicely

Loved it

Thank you for the pm dear

Originally posted by: mijanur

Wow, the way you potray Adi's emotion in your writing is simply awesome. 

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

THAAANKKKS!!! Although Idk why when I wrote this I felt as if I did better with Zoya's. 

Yeah... idk what i wrote to be honest. Maybe because I can relate to Adi...

Thank you.. honestly your another person who truly appreciate my writing.. thank you.. idk what else to say... When i wrote this you were another person I was looking forward to read their comment on my piece. 

I truly appreciate the fact you took your time to comment and motivate me to keep writing. 

ALSO YOU LIKE BTSSS!!!???😆😆😆 I SEEE COOOKKIIIEE ON YOUR DP THING ehhehehe😆😆😆