Gyaarah... The Eleven Sinners

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Before starting let me inform you this NOT a KriYaansh or TaaRey based story. It is purely a D3 based Dark story which includes Kriya-Rey-Taani equally. So I highly request to all readers not to bash any characters as I can't risk to close this topic. I myself can't hate any character so I will appreciate if you respect my feelings.
Mods: Please do not lock this topic as it does not have any intention to create fights.

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Episode 4: Page 5
Episode 5: Page 6
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PS: It's a Dark but Mystery/Thriller story & might be emotional as well so do not expect many love scenes.

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First Promo

"Everyone reacts."

"Some communes or some shed tears."

"But what happens by only reacting?"

"To change someone if you have take revenge, so do it."

GYAARAH... The Eleven Sinners, Don't Get Mad Get Even.

Coming soon.

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I'm back with a crazy new D3 story... First Thriller story ever!! I hope you are not confused but I can assure you this is going to be one Dark book which will blow your mind.

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New Promo

Reporter: "We are standing in St-Louis College, Mumbai, where one student jumps to death from the terrace."

Teacher: "This addiction habit is very bad."

Principal: "This incident has nothing to do with our college."

Kriya: "Lie! All lies! That eleven people who tortured Taani Di to this extent, that she did not survive. I know, that even today these eleven are walking freely somewhere in this campus."

Kriya: "Taani Di had once taught something. Beat someone like this, that they get beaten up and there's no sound."

GYAARAH... The Eleven Sinners, 11 WRONG MISTAKES MAKE A RIGHT.

Coming Soon.

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A promo to reduce your confusions & excite you more. Many more dark twist & turns are coming up soon.

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Prologue

A girl is standing in front of someone's burning funeral clad in white top & jeans. Wearing neutral expression just a lone tear making it's escape from her eye.

"Someday my time will come
And you shall pay the price
For what you have done
You shall see, I'm not that nice

Someday I will haunt you
I will promise you that
Now you don't have a clue
But you will wish we never met

Someday, because I won't forget
And no one will hear you beg for mercy
You ain't seen nothing yet
So listen to this closely

Someday you'll answer for your actions
You just wait & see
And you will know what happens
When you mess with my family

Someday I shall find you
I don't care how long it will take
Or what I have to do
I never break a promise I make..." -she said taking an oath.

She takes out a pic from her back pocket & lights it from the burning cremation.

"I promise you Taani Di, I will make them feel the same pain which you had gone through."

Meanwhile

Come on guys tell me what we're doing
We're hangin' around when we could be all over the place
The sun is shinin' just the way we like it
Let's get out of this hallway
Show the world our face

Here wakes up the Diva & Cool Dudes of St-Louis with the sound of their alarm's radio music.

It's Friday but there's nowhere to go
Anywhere is cool but we're not going home
And we can do anything we wanna do
It's all up to me and you

Their respective best friends & buddies ready to set a new record of the day.

Turn this park into a club
the stars and lights and the moon is the vibe from above
Skateboards here's our ride so pull on up everyone is waiting for us

A jeep comes to pick The Diva, and it's none other than her beau Swayam, bestie Simmi, buddies Amar & Nilesh.

So anywhere we are Anywhere we go Everybody knows We got the party with us Anywhere we are Anywhere we go Everybody knows We got the party with us Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh We got the party with us Oh oh oh oh oh oh We got the party with us

They jam together while another jeep matches up to their speed.

Radio, let me be your DJ
I'll turn you up keep us moving 'til we're on a roll
Everyone is dancing to their own beat
And letting go, everybody here's got soul

The Cool Dude winks at he's both best friends while he high fives his best buddy Vicky, his girlfriend Neha, his sweet friend Rinni, his tomboy girl friend Vishaka & her boyfriend Bharat.

It's Friday and there's nowhere to be
We're kickin' it together it's so good to be free
We got each other and that's all we need
The rest is up to you and me

They sing along together while Vicky & Nilesh switch jeeps which annoys Neha & Simmi, Amar & Rinni still glances of each other.

Finally they race till the college & once they reach getting of from their jeeps. Standing in line like a group with broad wide smiles.

Meet the D3 Gang, people still don't know it's full means but for someone else it means only the Dare Devil Dancers. The most popular gang of St-Louis, not always in positive sense for sure.

The screen divides into two with the burning picture in left & the gang in right, Paanch BG music.

GYAARAH... The Eleven Sinners.

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You guys wanted asap update of this book & honestly even I couldn't resist it, so here I am. As I said it's a Dark story so don't expect much from it already.

Honestly your Comments, Votes & Shares will either make or break this story, so please shower your love on it so I can proceed with it's content.

Your Dreamer Writer, @SarafWasima

Edited by DiptiPatel9 - 6 years ago
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Episode 1

21st August 2012

Author's POV

Here enters the D3 Gang into their college, St-Louis. It's their second year, can you believe it?

"Guys, feels good to be back na?"

"Absolutely Simmi." -agreed Neha.

"Of course, friends, love & fun all together, right Swayam?" -asked Vicky.

Swayam didn't reply as he was lost into his love's beautiful eyes.

"Dude, he's not going to respond as fact he has got the license to stare Sharon, remember engaged?" -said Nil.

"Awww." -chirped Rinni.

This broke their eye-lock & their cheeks were completely flushed.

"Guys, come on." -whined Sharon.

"Someone's blushing?!" -teased Vishaka.

Swayam glared Vishaka while others laughed, when suddenly Bharat pops out a question.

"Rey, where are you lost Dude?"

"Guys, remember today's party?" -asked Rey while examining the Atrium.

"Dude, you don't mean" -spoke Amar.

"Ragging!" -said all in unison with a evil smirk.

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It was a party held to welcome the new students in St-Louis, it started with the boring speeches of Principle & Seniors. Just when they left, the real party begun.

Boys & Girls were wearing masks, none could be recognized which was an advantage for the D3 Gang to put their plan into action.

Vicky & Nil spiked few drinks which were served to some students. They then made the lights out only letting a spot light on.

"Come on babes, let's dance." -said Rey pulling that student on the dance floor.

"No.. Please.. Let me go.. I don't feel good." -pleaded the girl.

"Oh poor girl, can't handle a drink? Then go home & drink some milk, baby girl." -taunted Sharon.

The girl struggled & left the party sobbing, Rey cleaned his hands off as if he touched some dirt.

"Such kids." -he said pitying her.

"Music!" -shouted Swayam.

Amar came singing those lines to Rinni while doing some hip hop steps & sliding away.

Dekho Dekho Hai Shaam Badi Deewani
Dheere Dhere Ban Jaye Na Koi Kahani

Bharat sings those lines doing some quick twirls with Vishaka.

Dekho Dekho Hai Shaam Badi Deewani
Dheere Dhere Ban Jaye Na Koi Kahani

Vicky & Nilesh came pulling Neha & Simmi respectively from their sides & lifted them up while holding them in bridal style & turned.

Dilbar Hai Dilkash Hai Dildaar Nazare Hain
Aaj Zameen Per Utre Kitne Sitare Hai

Swayam dances with Sharon both do some quick freestyle movements.

Atlo Hosh Na Mi Danam

Hum Hai Dil Hai Aur JanamBas Deewangi Deewangi Deewangi Hai

Rey joins Swayam & Sharon, giving a hi-five to each other they pick up on the hook step.

Na Koi Rahe Sam Rahe Per

Yeh Ilzaam Lage KisperBas Deewangi Deewangi Deewangi Hai

All boys lines up in front of the girls, do a jerk step & turns kneeling down & do the jaap step.

All Hot Gals Put Your Hands Up And Say
Om Shanti Om

The girls walk around the kneeling boys & trace their hands over their face & comes back doing the hook step.

All Cool Boys Come On Make Some Noise And Say

Om Shanti Om

Amar dances on the next line & pulls Rinni for a couple dance when she sings the next verse blushing. Nil comes & hugs Simmi from the back when she leans her head back on his shoulder singing the next line.

Shaam Gazab Ki Humgamna Khez Ai
Iska Nasha Hi Gehra Hai Tez Hai
Shaam Gazab Ki Humgamna Khez Ai
Iska Nasha Hi Gehra Hai Tez Hai

Swayam smells Sharon hair giving her a kiss when Sharon brushes her nose against his, when Rey pops up suddenly.

Zulf Khuli Hai Resham Resham
Saans Ghuli Hai Madham Madham

Yeh To Ishaare Hain

Bharat & Vicky swap partner & all four dance in group line making Neha b/w Bharat & Vishaka in Vicky's left.

Atlo Hosh Na Mi Danam
Hum Hai Dil Hai Aur Janam
Bas Deewangi Deewangi Deewangi Hai
Na Koi Rahe Sam Rahe Per
Yeh Ilzaam Lage Kisper
Bas Deewangi Deewangi Deewangi Hai

All come back & do the hook step exchanging partners alternately.

All Hot Gals Put Your Hands Up And Say
Om Shanti Om

All Cool Boys Come On Make Some Noise And Say
Om Shanti Om

All Hot Gals Put Your Hands Up And Say
Om Shanti Om

All Cool Boys Come On Make Some Noise And Say
Om Shanti Om

Rey comes up in the center doing some glides & house step with a wide smile.

Kehene Ko Waise To Sara Sukun Hai
Phir Bhi Yeh Dil Hai Ki Isko Junoon Hai

Swayam comes & hugs him tight almost punching him in the stomach for fun.

Kehene Ko Waise To Sara Sukun Hai
Phir Bhi Yeh Dil Hai Ki Isko Junoon Hai

Sharon in b/w & dances with both when Rey & Swayam turns her by her hands.

Pal Do Pal Ko Khwaab Saza De
Isko Usko Sab Ko Bata De

Raaz Jo Sare Hain

Nil comes pulling Rinni on the dance floor while Simmi drags Amar.

Atlo Hosh Na Mi Danam

Hum Hai Dil Hai Aur JanamBas Deewangi Deewangi Deewangi HaiNa Koi Rahe Sam Rahe PerYeh Ilzaam Lage KisperBas Deewangi Deewangi Deewangi Hai

The Gang comes up & all do the hook step together.

Bas Deewangi Deewangi Deewangi Hai

Vicky, Bharat & Amar walk pass the girls teasing them.

All Hot Gals Put Your Hands Up And Say

Om Shanti Om

Now Neha, Vishaka & Rinni sings the following line.

All Cool Boys Come On Make Some Noise And Say
Om Shanti Om

Rey, Swayam & Nil come next dancing back & fro of the girls.

All Hot Gals Put Your Hands Up And Say
Om Shanti Om

Sharon b/w Rey & Swayam & Simmi b/w Swayam & Nil doing some sexy moves.

All Cool Boys Come On Make Some Noise And Say Om Shanti Om

A girl enters the party from the entrance we can only see her heels.

Theme Music

She sees the Gang dancing & the camera zoom on her face.

Kriya's POV

"I'm finally here Taani Di. I promise that this celebration will once turn into mourning." -I swore to god.

I sensed someone beside me, that was none other than the person I despise the most, Reyaansh Singhania.

He snapped his fingers in front of me, I gave him a look, a look of hatred. If looks could kill then he would've turn into ashes by now.

Suddenly he grabbed my hand, I tried to resist but my actions could've brought attention towards us. My skin was burning, note the sarcasm, I was feeling to break his bone at that instant.

He was about to pull of my mask when I dashed out, luckily he had only got hold of the mask & couldn't see my face.

"What's the rush, your not going to see the face of your enemy that soon, Team D3." -I said with all hatred in me.

I crushed the photo of them & trowed away still eyeing it.

I walked out off the place to make myself stronger for the upcoming battle.

POV Ends

The camera freezes on the crumpled picture & the partying D3 Gang.

Precap: Sharon gets injured.

GYAARAH... The Eleven Sinners.

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Hope your enjoying my efforts on making this story as awesome as it's concept. Comment, Vote & Share so I can continue with the great work .

Your Dreamer Writer, @SarafWasima


Edited by DiptiPatel9 - 6 years ago
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Thanks! 😃

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Will u continue ur stories in infiaforums or in wattpad
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Originally posted by: amairakriyaansh

Will u continue ur stories in infiaforums or in wattpad


Mostly on Wattpad but new stories will be on IF😃
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