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Interesting and emotional update dear
Liked it !! Articulate writing
Maan and Geet were envisaging and puzzling over past happenings. Geet's diary entry was heart touching and filled with self indulgent feelings of tenderness,sad and nostalgia. Maan was lost in reviving the memory of his past. Maan and Geet were meditating about their unanticipated intense kiss. Maan tried to ease the ambiance with his light words and by guiding her back to their childhood memories alas Geet was brought back to actuality and was distressed and perturbed with turn of events. He patiently endured all the accusions she put on him. He loved Geet's care and possessive traits for him and amid their jealousy talks, Geet did convey her jealousy and proprietorial rights on Maan without her trepidation and qualms. Loved Maan and Geet's banter and exchange of words. Maan's words about prank refreshed Geet's trauma and ache back that she started to hurl her accusions and was summoning him with her assertive words and deportment. Geet's words snapped his ounce of composure and forbearance. Geet lamented out her frustration and resentment on Maan and their kiss was added to her charges against Maan which she held him accountable for. Maan tried to exonerate and make her understand but alas. Maan was hurt that his kitty mooh didnt trust him and thought he pulled such low prank on her, whom he considers as his whole world. He was ready to forgive her inspite of whole fiasco and misunderstanding.
Emotions well protrayed !!
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