Originally posted by: sizzler92
Starting of the story is bang on.
It seems interesting.I knew it Manik isn't from those people who will sleep so quickly..😉Waiting eagerly for next part..
Originally posted by: Alohomora
Thank you, sweets! So, the forum is slowly coming alive, eh? Check out the next, live now.U r most welcome dear!Yeah slowly-2 forum is coming alive..
Originally posted by: sizzler92
Omg...!!!What just happened in the last???Rolf... Nandu scratched him so hard that he bleeds.U know what.. every thing was going so smoothly n ambience was becoming intense n passionate but that last stroke just nailed it...Every chapter needs to hv some kind of bomb in that to make the curiosity of the story going on... Well done! Thank you!! ❤️And about the title of the chapter... I don't think so it is the end as nandu will do something. That's why it has a question mark. The end? Maybe. Maybe not. 😆She will cajole him... Will she? By the way Nandu was surprise package in this.. whoa! She was jamming pretty well, eh? 😆
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