OS: Drowning // Asfiya // Yakeen Ka Safar - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: SS88

Such a beautiful take on probably the most heartfelt scene in the last episode. I loved how you talk of their feelings, in terms of drowning. Drowning in despair, in helplessness, in fear.

This is beautiful, but then so is everything you write.



Thank you so much.

Everything I write is usually trash. This is the honestly the first piece I actually connected with. But yeah.. I love angst.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Oh God. This was beautiful. The smooth flow of your writing conveyed their emotions and fears so perfectly. I loved it. Please keep writing
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: octaverider

Thanks Sis (Hina) *kisses*

Appreciate it Arshi and fanraya.

🤗kisses back
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Thank you for this
Utter perfection
Please keep writing
It's so soothing
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks cheesybites and coolove. Appreciate it.😊
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