Manmarziyan // Asfi-Zubia OS : Last part Pg 5 - Page 5

fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

25

Posted: 7 years ago

#41

You nailed it, absolutely beautiful, I have no words left to describe the feeling, so heart warming. Thank you so much for putting so much efforts.. You are an amazing writer.. I love this end, perfect fitting their characters..

1

Reply

Quote

RaSia

@RaSia

Navigator

10

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#42

You made up for everything I had expected in the last episode and did not get. Thank you for such a beautiful piece

1

Reply

Quote

octaverider

@octaverider

Navigator

10

Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Her shade.
Her protective roof.
He was her home.

Now who is writing poetry?

Only after a few seconds, which seemed much longer than they actually were, his arms closed around her, so unquestionably...

This was so lovely.

"Well...let me refresh your memory. You fired a nurse and a ward boy a few months back for inappropriate behavior in the hospital. Ironically, you are guilty of the same thing today...", she spoke with as much sternness as she could.

OK I legit chuckled at this.

"Hardly! If I had to take advantage of my position, then I would call you to my cabin on the pretext of discussing something with you. And then... " , he trailed off meaningfully, the resulting heat on her face causing his eyes dance with mirth.

Naughty Asfi very naughty. It did seem like a big deal and I am glad you pointed it out.

No more assurances or explanations were given after that...no more were needed. They understood each other on a level that would never stop to amaze.

They are so in sync! This is beautiful.

Thank you for this lovely fiction. It warms my heart.

I feel like you guys are doing a much better job at the confession than what was given to us... sigh.

2

Reply

Quote

bookworm123

@bookworm123

Navigator

14

Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Totally enjoyed this read...

Thank you for writing it and bringing back the feels!!!

Lovely piece of writing, all the parts..

1

Reply

Quote

SS88

@SS88

Rocker

25

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Very well written. I so wanted someone to tease Asfand about the "non-serious behaviour" he was exhibiting and has been , for sometime. But chalo , khair, woh bhi khayalon main soch lenge. Dr Shehroz would have had a field day, unhe to aise bhi shauq hi hai Asfi ki taang khenchne ka. LOL. Really enjoyable read, I hope you and the other creative people we have here continue to write on Asfand and Zubiya.

1

Reply

Quote

sidsk

@sidsk

Sparkler

30

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: SanFrangirl
What a lovely tumultuous read! You totally captured the rawness of the passion. And the implicit love and respect which funnily Zubiya didnt see the first time. Lovely contrast between the arousal and the way he controls it and backs off. I do hope you did write the next part. Because I want to know what happens in your universe--does Z go after him ? She should. Our boy needs lovin'.

Wow! Thank you so much for your kind words...yes, you know there were so many times in the show where the kind of looks Asfi was giving Zubiya had more depth than maybe what was intended.

Whether Ahad intended to give that much depth to those scenes or it just happened...who knows but Asfi's eyes definitely carry a lot of hidden emotions.😉

Originally posted by: Cheesybites
Wow. This was truly truly beautiful. The way you brought through Asfi's background thoughts during all those instances and weaved them in the subtle romance, seriously commendable! Keep writing, I loved it

Thank you so much! I have always wondered what was going through Asfi's mind during all their moments.

Originally posted by: .Anya.
OMG this is just beautiful so so beautiful I am actually speechless now.
I want next part with some ludo star.Ek match to banta ha yar☺️😆
Abhi tak kahan chupi bethi thi 5-6 Os aur chahiye😆

Thank a lot Anya!

Haha no match 😈😆

Main parde ke peeche chupi baithi thi...5-6 ka toh nahi malum but will definitely try to write more. Asfi - Zubi have re-awakened the wriitng ka keeda in me.😃

Originally posted by: farahs_6
Beautiful

Thanks!

Originally posted by: seabeauty
Wow... just wow!! I need more now :P

Thanks a lot!😃

Originally posted by: bookworm123
Oh dear, that was quite a read...
Really enjoyed this OS. Asfi recollecting those moments was the cheery on the cake..

Do write more please, really enjoyed this one!

Thanks a lot for reading Bookworm. 😳

Reply

Quote

coolove

@coolove

Explorer

6

Posted: 7 years ago

#47

The feels
I loved every moment
Thank you for writing that

Reply

Quote

Push-pull

@Push-pull

Sparkler

30

Posted: 7 years ago

#48

👏👏

Everything about them that you have written here is showing Asfi-Zubi blissfully in love. And it gives peace to my mind seeing them like this in my visual.. Very beautifully written.. 🤗

Reply

Quote

Mrina

@minakrish

Viewbie

41

+ 19

Neutral Nomads

Posted: 6 years ago

#49

Beautiful... Read it in a go... Absolutely loved it. ❤️

Reply

Quote

Manmarziyan // Asfi-Zubia OS : Last part Pg 5 - Page 5

Related Topics