Love, Actually- Asfi-Zubi - Page 14

Omg this is absolutely wonderful my friend. really no words to describe, how amazing this is, the way you have given words to Zubi's thoughts, how much we craved for it in the show, wow, just wow, you are an amazing writer.. Great write up, please do keep on writing .. A big hug to you.🤗 This is truly magical..

that was delightful to read! you really have a way with words loved it!

Originally posted by: Cheesybites

I'm truly speechless after reading this. You explored Zubiya's emotions with such depth and beauty, it was inspiring. For an average viewer, these thoughts might have crossed our minds, but you being able to pen them down so beautifully, with the perfect balance, its truly commendable! We, and the script so easily ignore Zubiya's side of the stort and imagine a perfect ending for her, surely that ending has to come, but her character definitely needed such closure before it. THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing this, you made me realise so much!

I loved the part where she's sitting awake at night and Asfi holds her close, but doesn't force her to share her feelings. That's such a high level of understanding, it was stunning.

Again, I truly, honestly loved every bit. Just didn't want it to end.

Please please do write more, You're incredibly talented!

Thank you so much

Originally posted by: fanraya

Omg this is absolutely wonderful my friend. really no words to describe, how amazing this is, the way you have given words to Zubi's thoughts, how much we craved for it in the show, wow, just wow, you are an amazing writer.. Great write up, please do keep on writing .. A big hug to you.🤗 This is truly magical..

Originally posted by: SanFrangirl

Thanks @fanraya. picked up so much from your indignation about the way Z was treated.

Originally posted by: Alizba63

Very well written cali girl! I like how you showed life after getting together and marriage is not a fairy tale and doesn't magically fix everything! It requires work, understanding and lots and lots of patience. It's a long journey with hurdles meant to be overcome together by helping each other out.

On a lighter note why did have to kick us out when they were about to start their ludo star.😆

Btw Asfi never had window curtains remember? 😉

That was that was absolutely amazing. I too have been in YKS withdrawal since the show ended and as the ending wasnt satisfactory I have been unable to watch old episodes. Which I used to do to link epi to epi.

Originally posted by: ShellJA

That was that was absolutely amazing. I too have been in YKS withdrawal since the show ended and as the ending wasnt satisfactory I have been unable to watch old episodes. Which I used to do to link epi to epi.

Your story is so real and true to our Zubia. I can so see Zubia having a hard time transitioning to a loving husband and family. Of course it is easier for A because he has alway seen and experienced that before. Z has nothing to refer back to, I am sure it would be all unreal and fantasy like in reality to her and difficult to believe.

Loved reading your thoughts. Do you think there is a full heart to heart flood of emotion conversation coming up in the future? Would love to read that...pretty please!

Absolutely amazing.

Wow *swoon* You always understood Asfi really really well but in this you've written Zubiya so beautifully. I love how she is so aware of her thoughts. I love her psycho analysis -- its so apt that she would be missing her mother/remaining a little shy and reserved. And the little tid bits like "coded language" lol -- just some amazing insights into the couple as individuals and together.

I think you are officially my favourite writer of Asfiya. Brilliant! How I adore thee.

Originally posted by: SanFrangirl

Hey thanks for your words dear friend. There is one shitload Zubiya has to work through. And they say...impatient men are always the most patient in matters of the heart. I cannot applaud FI enough for the way she has imagined Asfi.

And may I ask when to expect your next instalment?