OS: ASFIYA Wedding Night #YakeenKaSafar Updated 6/10/17 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Seeing your username, do I realise that u are from Reporters Forum...

Glad to see you here...πŸ˜ƒ
And thank you so much for such lovely words...
And if possible, I will keep on writing on Asfiya, Inshallah!πŸ˜ƒ

Hahahaha yeah at that time i didn't get anyother name in my head...πŸ˜†
My pleasure dear...
Make it possible...pretty please
Can i ask you to write an FF on Asfiya married life as we can't see that in show...
Can i ask where are you from?
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Posted: 6 years ago
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That was beautfiul. You should write more! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Although i dont follow d show ..yet i loved reading it
its so beautiful
cute naughty and romantic at d same time ...
n madam i dont want u to keep me away from such pieces only cause i dont have time fo follow the show ...
ye nainsaafi i wont tolerate again ..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Kayalover


Hahahaha yeah at that time i didn't get anyother name in my head...πŸ˜†
My pleasure dear...
Make it possible...pretty please
Can i ask you to write an FF on Asfiya married life as we can't see that in show...
Can i ask where are you from?

Since you know me from Reporters time, you must be knowing that I am a lazy head as far as Ff are concerned... its a jinxed format for me...
I am already hanging with a Ff on krpkab forum, I can't start a new one...
though I can give you multiple Os on Asfiya's married life...
You can suggest me the context too what you want to read...

As to from where I am from, I am from Bhopal, Madhya Pradesh, India.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Isse pehle ki tum ye kehti ke, Ye Changez Khan achaanak chaapa kyu maar deta hai har jagah? Banda darwaaza kholke, aawaaz deke ya knock karke bhi toh andar aa sakta hai na?... Maine socha aaj se ek nayi rivaayat(tradition) shuru ki jaaye. Main apne hi kamre mein abse knock karke, aawaaz deke aaya karunga..."

just Wow, so beautiful, absolutely wonderful write upπŸ‘ I do not have any words, it is really lovely..So fitting with their characters. Thanks so much for sharing with us.. Please do write more stories..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Since you know me from Reporters time, you must be knowing that I am a lazy head as far as Ff are concerned... its a jinxed format for me...
I am already hanging with a Ff on krpkab forum, I can't start a new one...
though I can give you multiple Os on Asfiya's married life...
You can suggest me the context too what you want to read...

As to from where I am from, I am from Bhopal, Madhya Pradesh, India.

No problem dear
I know its difficult to carry on with whole story...i am just asking out of curosity
Do write when you feel free whatever it is...πŸ€—
Good to know about your whereaboutsπŸ˜›
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
Since you asked for ideas, I want to know what happened after the roadside meeting, what happened after that Faryal ki wajah se? dialogue. That incident is so incomplete. Thats literally the BIG admission and I cant figure out how the director leapt from there to the reluctance in of Zubiya to come to the party and YET her total composure on meeting Asfi at the party. Can you use your lovely imagination?
Secondly, one feels so strongly for Asfi's family that one wants to know how happy they were when they came to know about them . I guess that would be before these two lovebirds went on that walk.

I am so looking forward to your thoughts :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: octaverider

That was beautfiul. You should write more! πŸ˜ƒ

Thank u... I will write more Inshallah... I used to write, but with the job and everything, things were tough... But will be writing often now...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona_naksh

Although i dont follow d show ..yet i loved reading it
its so beautiful
cute naughty and romantic at d same time ...
n madam i dont want u to keep me away from such pieces only cause i dont have time fo follow the show ...
ye nainsaafi i wont tolerate again ..

Sorry didi ab hum aapko inform karna nahi jaayenge bhool,
Hum maasoom se bachhe hain, roz jaate hain iskool...🀣

Dhyaan rakhenge aur aapko baraabar ka inform karenege... ok?

And thank u for reading...πŸ€—
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: fanraya

Isse pehle ki tum ye kehti ke, Ye Changez Khan achaanak chaapa kyu maar deta hai har jagah? Banda darwaaza kholke, aawaaz deke ya knock karke bhi toh andar aa sakta hai na?... Maine socha aaj se ek nayi rivaayat(tradition) shuru ki jaaye. Main apne hi kamre mein abse knock karke, aawaaz deke aaya karunga..."

just Wow, so beautiful, absolutely wonderful write upπŸ‘ I do not have any words, it is really lovely..So fitting with their characters. Thanks so much for sharing with us.. Please do write more stories..

Thank u dear for all the lovely appreciating words... They mean a lot to me... I will try writing more...
Thanks
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