ariya os: dil pe jor nahi..

hiii friend I'm ariya lover n almost all story read..
mai bhi kuch likhna chati hu..
I hope aap sub ko acha lage..
plzz kesi he bata na.. ??
this's short story...I hope u like my thoughts..


part 1

1 man: maan ja us ki baat..
2 man..kesa manun..ye galat hai sam..

sam... arj agar tu nahi maana to tu use kho dega.. use behatar tu man ja or wo bole wahi kar..

arj : nahi mai esa kuch hone nahi duga..mai use smjha ke rahuga..
arjun Left to home..

arj home.
arj: rosh kaha ho tum..
rosh..no reply..
arj go to bedroom but door is looks..rosh door kholo..
roah: arj nahi kholugi.. javo tum..
arj : ye kesi jid he rosh..plz open door.. tumhari helth or kharb hogi..
rosh : phir man javo arj..
arj :nahi.. tum smjha kyu nahi jati ki mai tumse bhot pyar karta hu ...plz door open karo..or kuch khalo..

rosh:.nahi jab tak tum nahi manoge mai nahi khavugi nahi door open karugi..

arj : rosh tum jo kar rahi ho wo galt hai.. mera sath or tumhare sath or us ke sath bhi..plzzz open door mujha dar lag raha hai..tum ne do din se khaya nahi..plzzz rosh..

roah.. to man ja wo na meri baat fir mai khana bhi khavugi or tu jo bologe wo karugi.. arj plzzz man...n rosh behosh ho jati hai..
arj ko smjha ata hai or wo panick ho jata hai..wo roah roah kar ke door thod de ta hai..
or dekhata hee wo ghabra jata hai..
roah jamin pe unconditional pa di hai..
arj use utha ke bed par rakhata hai..



sorry for type mistake..
plzz sai.. u like or not..???Edited by ariya143 - 6 years ago

Wow great one more ariya writer awesome start y roshni behaving like this wt she want from Arjun is she want Arjun marry Riya I think poor guess eagerly waiting for nxt dear I send u buddy req plz pm me from nxt time whenever you give updates

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

Wow great one more ariya writer awesome start y roshni behaving like this wt she want from Arjun is she want Arjun marry Riya I think poor guess eagerly waiting for nxt dear I send u buddy req plz pm me from nxt time whenever you give updates

thankss dear..
n u r guess little bit right but twist n this..
see u n next update..
I will try pm u..
n thank for encourage me..

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

Wow great one more ariya writer awesome start y roshni behaving like this wt she want from Arjun is she want Arjun marry Riya I think poor guess eagerly waiting for nxt dear I send u buddy req plz pm me from nxt time whenever you give updates

sorry I m first time write story..
plzz understand n..
I don't know.. how reply.. that why..
once again thank for support..
I will try to pm..

Originally posted by: ariya143

sorry I m first time write story..
plzz understand n..
I don't know.. how reply.. that why..
once again thank for support..
I will try to pm..

no problem dear it's happened in starting and one more think u send PM's to ur friends about ur story and provide link so they all read and give comments I already now send PM's t Amy buddy of ur story u send pm me from nxt time to all okEdited by ruhi1985sheetal - 6 years ago

awsome update..

love it..

plz continue soon

thanks for pm Ruhi..

Nice start dear..
Whoa!! Roshni wants something from Arjun and he is denying...and she is playing with her health...kuch bada twist lagta hai...let's see what you are up to...
Continue soon.
Thanks for PM sheetal didu.Edited by anishk_dashika - 6 years ago

Nice 

Amazing and interesting concept.