A Manan FF - Arranged Souls (Chapter - one)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Love walks in life in your life when you least expect it.'

'What happen when suddenly your life changes, not in a bad way...But in a beautiful way...
When one day a person walks in your life and then eventually becomes your life. You didn't even knew when and how but that person becomes the soul reason of your existence'.

What would you do when love knocks your door in the form of a 'RISHTA'

This is a story of two arranged souls, Manik Malhotra and Nandani Murthy.

So peep into this beautiful arranged yet love story of two people who are strangers initially but eventually becomes each other's lifeline.
LOVE, TRUST, FEELINGS...you will experience each and every emotion in this story... Give it a try..!!

This book will contain Hindi dailogues...!!


Hello beautiful people,
This is Akanksha.
I won't say I am new here but yes I am new in this field...I have been a member of India forums since months. But as a writer, this is my first attempt. I m a crazy reader of manan fanfictions..I have read a lot of books on Manan, n believe me they all are commendable. Hatts off to the writers.
Though I won't be able to match their work but.. yes, i will try to atleast write somewhat close to them.
All I want is your support n love and will try to make this journey memorable..
As this is my first attempt so I know there will be mistakes. Plzz bear it with me..!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Introduction

Hello people,
This book and the content of this book is entirely mine.
I haven't copied it from anywhere.
It's completely my imagination.
Any resemblance of any dialogue or content to any other book is just a mere coincidence.
Thank you


Stay blessed..!!
Love, Aakshi (someone special gave me this name)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Character sketch - Part 1

The Malhotras

The Malhotras are one of the richest and the most respectable Name of the country. Malhotra Empire is one of the top 10 industries of Asia. They have everything you would ever desire in a family.
Name, Fame, Love, Happiness, Trust... Everything...!!
The name 'Malhotra' itself show there Class and Elegance.

And yes, let me tell you, the Malhotra men's are really possessive about their girls/ladies.
So let's start with the members of this family...

1. Harivansh Malhotra

(Randhir Kapoor as Harivansh Malhotra)

The senior most Malhotra.
He is in his late 70s. He started up the Malhotra Empire's and with his hard work and dedication, brought up his company to great heights.
A very deciplined and professional person. Very strict from outside but very soft and caring for his family and loved ones. His grandson and granddaughter aur his 'aankh ka taara'. Now, a retired businessman as he handed over his company to the younger Malhotras.


2. Ambika Harivansh Malhotra

(Hema Malini as Ambika Malhotra)

A Very loving and caring wife. Loves her family to the core. Her childrens are her life. A very dedicated wife. Always supports her husband in each and every decision. Loves her grandsons the most.

3. Suryash Malhotra

(Suryash Rai as Suryash Malhotra)

Son of Harivansh and Ambika Malhotra. A very jolly and loving person. Very hardworking as well. Loves and respects his parents very much. Listen to each and every words of his parents and oblige them too. His father is his idiol. Loves his childrens and his wife the most and can do anything for them.
A very possessive person, loves his wife, Nyonika Malhotra. CEO of Malhotra Empire after his father's retirement. But now planning to hand it over to his younger son - Manik Malhotra.

4. Nyonika Malhotra

(Kishwer Merchant as Nyonika Malhotra (

Yet again, a loving and caring daughter-in-law, mother and wife. A mother of 3 childrens who are her life. A very responsible wife, completes all her duties as a wife and mother.
A total 'Sanskari bahu'. She runs a NGO and do social work. Shares a great bond with her younger son - Manik Malhotra. He is the 'laadla beta' of his mother. Loves him the most.

5. Abhimanyu Malhotra

(Zain imam as Abhimanyu Malhotra)

The first child of Suryash and Nyonika Malhotra.
A 28 year old well known Architect. Married to Twinkle Malhotra. He was not interested in business so didn't wanted to join Malhotra Empires, hence after discussing it with his family member and with their support and blessings, now he is a successful Architect. A very responsible son and helpful and caring brother. Respects his parents and grandparents. Loves his wife, younger brother and sister way too much, and can do anything for them. An idiol son you could say, but is very possessive for his family, especially for his wife. Has been Married to Twinkle for 2 years.

6. Twinkle Abhimanyu Malhotra

(Jasmine Bhasin as Twinkle Malhotra)

Wife of Abhimanyu Malhotra. A 25 year old gynecologist. She is still a child at heart but knows how to act mature at times. Best friend of Manik and Mukti and treat them like her own siblings. Lover her husband and respects his each and every decision. Always respects her in laws.

7. Manik Malhotra

(Parth Samthaan as Manik Malhotra)

(Who doesn't know about him..??
Off course everyone does after all he is "The Manik Malhotra".) Asia's youngest and no. 1 businessman and the most eligible bachlour of the country. A 26 year old businessman. The MD of Malhotra group of industry. Business is in his genes, inherited from his father and grandfather after all.
Knows how to get his ways out of anything. A very strict and professional boss for his employees just like his Grand father, yet a humble and down to earth person. For his family, he is everything you would want in a son, respects and loves each and every member of his family. Shares a great bond with his grandfather. Loves his mother the most. Best friend of his bhabhi - Twinkle Malhotra.
Looks, Name, Fame, Personality, attitude, Charm, Confidence..He has it all...!!
A totally one women man...

8. Mukit Malhotra

(Charlie Chauhan as Mukti Malhotra)

The youngest member of the Malhotra family. A 23 year old MBA student, she is in her final year and is soon going to join Malhotra Empires. 'Jaan' of the family. A very jolly and lovable girl. The heartbeat of her brothers. Shares a great bond with both of them, and both the brothers can do anything for their little princess. A tear in Mukti's eyes and they will set the whole damn world on fire. Love and respect each and every member. Shares a great bond with her bhabhi - Twinkle and treats her as her elder sister. The most loved and pampered child of Malhotra family, especially pampered by her brothers.

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Hello people...
Sorry guys...I couldn't give pics because I don't know how to...!!
So the character sketch is up...N I will soon upload the 2nd part I.e., The Murthys.
Till then enjoy this..

Love, Aakshi

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Character sketch - Part 2

The Murthys

Just like the Malhotra, Murthy industry is also one of the top 10 industries of Asia. Started by Mr. Harshvardhan Murthy, which is now lead by his younger generation.

The Murthy mens are also utterly possessive about their ladies.

1. Harshvardhan Murthy

(Sandeep Mehta as Harshvardhan Murthy)

The senior most Murthy, in his late 70s. A very humble and down to earth man. Started Murthy industries and worked hard to bring it to heights where it is today, but now handed over the responsibility and command of the industry to his son and grandsons. Loves his family very much.
They are his lifeline, loves his wife 'Anjali Murthy' the most. His "aankh ka taara" is his gudiya I.e., 'Nandani murthy'.

2. Anjali Harshvardhan Murthy

(Sonali Verma as Anjali Murthy)

Just like her husband, very humble and down to earth person. Loves her family and her childrens. Loves and respect her husband.
Her elder Grandson is her heartbeat.

3. Raman Murthy

(Karan Patel as Raman Murthy)

A strict, professional and disiplined boss for his employees, but a very sweet and caring father, husband and son. Loves his children, wife and parents. Respect their each and every decision. Never decline any of there orders. Closest to Nandani because she is his 'Princess'. Retired from office after handling everything to his elder son - Me. Arnav Murthy.

4. Ishita Raman Murthy
Hi
(Diyanka Tripathi as Ishita Murthy)

Wife of Raman Murthy, and mother of Arnav, Adahav and Nandani Murthy. A sweet and beautiful lady. A housewife, shares a great bond with her younger son - Adahav Murthy. Loves her family and husband.

5. Arnav Murthy

(Barun sobti as Arnav Murthy)

A 30 years old strict and professional businessman. Married to Mrs. Khushi Arnav Murthy. He is strict not only for his employees but for his family as well. Loves them to the core, especially his sisrer ('Babydoll'), Can do anything for her. Can't tolerate a single scratch on his babydoll's body, very very protective and possessive about her. Closest to his wife, sister and Dadi. Shares a great bond with his sister which everyone adores. CEO of Murthy industries.

6. Khushi Arnav Murthy

(Shanaya Irani as Khushi Murthy)

A 27 year old fashion designer. Very loving and caring wife, a total drama queen but just for her closed ones. Respect everyone in the family. Loves her Husband way too much.
A Bollywood freak, you could say..
Mother of her 10 months old daughter- "Arshi Arnav Murthy".

7. Adahav Murthy

(Karan Tackar as Adahav Murthy)

A 26 year old graduate, started working as an intern in his own company under his brother's supervision. A jolly fun loving guy.
Respects and loves his brother way too much. Never disrespect him...Ever. follow his each and every order. Afraid of his brother's temper. Closest to his mother and bhabhi. Nandani is his sister cum best friend. Loves to irritate her, but still she is his lifeline.

7. Nandani Murthy

(Niti Taylor as Nandani Murthy)

Our very own 'nandu'.
She is a princess to her father(Papa), Babydoll to her brother(Bhai), guddiya to her grandfather (daadu).
A perfect combination of sweetness, beauti and intelligence.she is what you could say 'Beauty with Brains'.
A very sanskari girl who doesn't do anything without her brothers permission.
A 23 year old cardiologist by profession.
Laadli of her family and the 2nd youngest member too.

9. Arshi Arnav Murthy

(Imagine a 10 months old baby)

Youngest member of Murthy family.
10 months old daughter of Arnav and Khushi Murthy. Very very cute and beautiful just like her mom, yet moody and cranky like her dad.
'Papa ki princess', closest to her dad.


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Hii guys... So m back with yet another character sketch..
These are the main character of the story.
I will introduce new character as well when the story proceeds.

Love, Aakshi

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter - One

Murthy Mansion -


A girl of 24 year, was sleeping peacefully with a small smile on her face. Seems like she is dreaming about something. sunrays coming from her window disturbed her beauty sleep. she opened her eyes with a big smile of her face. that's her way to welcome a new morning, always with a smile.

she sat on the bed and prayed to her aiyappa,

Nandani - Gud morning Aiyappa...thankyou for this yet another beautiful morning, always keep everyone happy...

thanking her Aiyappa, she went to take shower...

After taking a shower and getting dressed she came downstairs looking as fresh as a flower...


she came down to see her daadu sitting in the porch, reading news paper and drinking his morning tea.

she quietly went to him and hugged him from behind,

Nandani - Gud morning daadu

Daadu (harshvardhan) - gud morning meri gudiya... all ready for work..??

Nandani - yes daadu, just after breakfast, i'll leave.

Meanwhile Anjali also came there, nandani went and hugged her to which she hugged her back and kissed her forehead.

Anjali - soo ready..??

Nandani - yes..!!

Anjali - chalo then, lets have our breakfast.

All three of them went to have breakfast, after sometime the Mruthy mens also came, all ready and dressed up for their office. Arnav came and kissed Nandani's head to which Nandani kissed his cheeks and gave him her million dollar smile, for which he can do anything.

then Adahav came and pulled Nandani's hair from back..

nandani - 'Aaa...' she cried with a irritating face, 'bhai deakhiye na, Bhaiya mjhe pareshan kr rhe hain.' She complained to Arnav bcoz she knew Arnav can't see her sad or upset.

and it worked...!!

Arnav - 'Adahav...' he glared at Adahav.

Adahav - 'sorry bhai...' he appoligized.

Nandani made a victory face and showed her tongue to adahav. All the family members were seeing their "bhai-behen session" . They all smiled at their bond.


Khushi came from kitchen with the dishes and nandani helped her in arranging everything on the table. Both the ladies then joined them.

Khushi sat beside Arnav who held her hand and gave her a smile, she also smiled at him. No one noticed their "eye - talk" except for our crime partners i.e., Nandani and Adahav. they both smile naughtily at them to which Arnav showed his eyes while khushi blushed looking down. arnav smiled seeing his melodramatic wife being all shy...

In between the breakfast, Ishita saw that khushi was looking tired and sleepy, so she asked,

Ishita - kya hua khushi beta..?? Neend puri nhi hui kya acche se... thaki hui lag rhi ho..??

Khushi - nhi maa.. wo kal raat bhar Arshi ne sone nhi diya hai.. pta nhi kya ho gya tha usko.. Naa soo rhi thi aur na hame sone de rhi thi..

Raman - kahan h meri rajkumari??

Khushi - soo rhi hai aapki rajkumari, Papa... Hame raat bhar sone nhi diya aur abhi khud aaram se soo rhi hai.

Everyone smiled and then continued with there breakfast. They all completed their breakfast with lots of gossips, fun, laughter... this was there daily routine. As there was strict instructions of "Mr. Harshvardhan Murthy" that breakfast and dinner time is family time. Each and Every member of the family must be present there.

After their small family time, all of them went to their respective works. Daadu and daadi went to mandir, Raman and Ishita went to their room, Arnav and Adahav went to their office, Khushi went to her beutique and Nandani went to her hospital.

On same time...in another part of the city...

Malhotra Mansion -


A man of around 25 years, was sleeping peacefully in his master's bedroom with a slight smile on his face. He was sleeping on his stomach, a tattoo on his back could be seen.


Soon a lady of around his age enters in his bedroom wearing a beautiful sari, she looked at the boy and smiled nodding her her in disbelife. she went and moved the curtains away giving a way to the sunrays to enter.

The boy groned and kept a pillow above his head to avoid the sunrays.

Girl - Good morning devarji..!!chaliye, uthiye..!! subah ho gyi..

(so the girl is TWINKLE MALHOTRA and the guy who is sleeping is our very own MANIK MALHOTRA).

Manik - bas 5 minutes aur bhabhi..plzzz

Twinkle - jii nhi, koi 5 minutes nhi, uthiye abhi. aapki meeting hai na aaj 9 baje, bhul gaye??

listening the last line, Manik sat up on the bed with a jerk

Manik - ooo freak!! he shouted, bhabhi aapne mjhe pehle kyu nhi uthaya?

Twinkle - Mai to kabse aapko utha rhi hu, aapki hi neend nhi khul rhi thi.. aab jaiye devarji...jaldi se fresh hokar aaiye. Mai aapke kapde ready krke rhti hu, taiyaar hoke neeche aa jaiyega breakfast ke liye.

she said all this while arranging his bed.

Manik got up and kissed Twinkle's cheek hurridely while running into washroom.

Manik - thank you sooo much bhabhi, love youuu...!!

Twinkle laughed at his gesture and then after arranging his clothes and necessities on the bed, she went downstairs to arrange the breakfast table.

After 20minutes, Manik came down all ready to leave for his office, looking greek god even in his formals.


All the family members were already sited on their respective seats, talking. He soon joined them, wishing everyone a good morning and kissing his Maa on her forehead, he also started having his food.


All the family members were present their except for 'MUKTI MALHOTRA'. after sometimes, mukti came down all ready for her collage, with a bag on her shoulder. she was running as she was late for her college all thanks to her beauty sleep.

she came down, after wishing everyone good morning, she was hurridely going without having breakfast.

Nyonika - Areee muku kahan jaarhi hai.. nashta to krle...

Mukti - nhi maa..aaj bohot late ho gya hai..nashta krne ka time nhi hai.

Ambika - lekin beta bhookhe peet nhi jate..thoda saa khale.

Mukti - nhi dadi plzz ...

Manik - Muktiii...he said in a strict and cold voice, which was enough for mukti to understand that now she doesn't have a choice.

Soo after mouthing a "sorry bhai" she joined them. Everyone smiled because they know mukti can never disobey Manik's order. she loves her bhai the most but is also afraid of his temper, knows when her bhai says something its for her own good, so she can't disobey him.

Mukti came and sat beside Manik who kissed her forehead and she smiled at him.

Then with lots of laughter, talks and discussion, they had their food. A "perfect family moment" it was.

After that, everyone left of their respective works.

Suryash, Manik and Abhimanyu left for Malhotra Empires, Daada and daaiji went to their room for taking rest after having their medicines, Mukti went to her collage, Nyonika went to her room and Twinkle went to her hospital.

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Soo here is the first chapter...it's just the introduction of both families...
Hope you guys like it..If yes then plzz like and comment...It's a request...!!

If not then also no problem...Feel free to tell me anything...
As this is my first attempt so I m trying really hard to make it worth ur time...Let me know if my hardwork paid off or not...!!!

Love, Aakshi

Edited by tanishkasingh - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Help

Hello people...
I want ur help guyz...I just don't know how to use India forums...I m new here..as a writer...I don't know how to post updates, if I m posting something it posts on the same page...I don't know how to change pages...

Soo please I need your guidance...it's a request... please tell me how to actually use India forums...!!

Thank you

Love, Aakshi
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