Asfand Zubi-New OS page 24 - Page 9

Hahaha wow. Totally blushing right now.. have this stupid si grin on my face !!!! These 2 are such newly weds.. haha !! Happy that you patched them up.. and both sides of the story were heard. They understood each other. Loved it !!!

Another great update! I'm always looking forward to this story :) I love they way they fight and especially the way they make up 😳

Hoping to read more, you are doing a great job dear! 👍🏼

Wonderful update. Waiting for the next one eagerly..!!

Omg wow,☺️ so beautiful, loved their fight and make up, you are an amazing writer, this was just so romantic, loved it, please do update soon..

omg omg,it was just out of the world,like really,i was imagining each and everything while reading this story😳

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-JB

Hahaha wow. Totally blushing right now.. have this stupid si grin on my face !!!! These 2 are such newly weds.. haha !! Happy that you patched them up.. and both sides of the story were heard. They understood each other. Loved it !!!

The scene where Zubia is on his side of the bed.. with his shirt on. Ooofff that is sooo beautiful !!!! And she was the one who led the *cough cough blush*😆 !!! Awww.. these 2❤️ All thanks to Usman uncle and Lubna aunty too.. haha love them😆

Waiting for the next update😛

OMG OMG OMG!!!!! I just read all the parts in one go! AND I ABSOLUTELY LOVED ALL OF THEM! You write really really well and your ideas are amazing!!

Originally posted by: Briyanikidaig

Seriously I loved that part in chap 😳

I am overwhelmed and embarrassed. Thanks for all of your feedback
Never thought my first story here will make it past 2 pages but here we are on page 12 😲 and over 4900 views.
You girls are amazingly supportive. Not to mention cute adorable bechain and demanding lol
Shukriya again!!!

Loving the update .waiting for next one