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Posted: 6 years ago
Hiii Naddiya!!!! I dont know how in the holy world, I had missed these beautiful write ups by you? πŸ˜•πŸ˜²
I read alll the parts today and I cant tell you how much I loved them!!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘ You have an incredible way of writing and story telling and I just loveee the way you handled very important and tricky situations. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜† Buhat maza aarha hai... Please please please please please write more... 😊😊❀️
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In Hospital

Admission staff walked in his office" Sir Dr Zubiya ka liya call ai thi Karachi se " he said as Asfand look towards him "kaise kai " he asked

"Sir yeh number hai " he passed him the number

"Thanks " he look at the number " Koi emergency na ho " he dials the number before he could speak he heard the guy from other end

"Zobi " he paused

" jee mein Dr Asfandyar Ali Khan hoon " he said

" Yeh Zubiya ka number nahi hai " he inquired

" nahi " he said with a pause

" Zubiya se baat ho sakti hai ,mein na suna hai ka uss ko goli lagi hai" he said

" aap ko kaise pata chala , aur aap kon baat kar raha hain " Asfand at once asked

" mein Zubiya ka bhai hoon, woh koi Khan aaiya tha Neelum valley se uss na batiya hain " he said worriedly

"Bhai" he in shock repeated

" jee woh Zubiya muhje se naraz ho kar ghar se chali gai hai , woh kaise hai ? woh kahan hai " he asked

" woh thek hai " he said politely " no need to worry , she is my responsibility " he added

There was pin drop silence at the other end " woh abhi yahan nahi hain , mein aap kai shaam ko uss se baat karwa doon ga " he said

" woh mujhe se kabhi baat nahi kara gai " Asfand could hear her brother sob , he without waiting cut the call


Asfand look at the phone " Zubiya has a brother? aur Khan reached there , yeh sab kya horaha hain " he shakes his head and tried to focus on work


At home


"Kya huwa tha tum ko " Gaiti asked her as she walked out of room

"Kuch nahi " she avoided eyes contact with her

" jaldi se packing karlo , we are going to Islamabad " Gaiti inform her

" sab " she asked her in surprise

" nahi tumhar Hitler nahi jai ga " Gaiti said

" aap na un se poch liya mera bara mein " she bites her lips as it was slip from her mouth Gaiti narrowed her eyes and look at her " you are right , Asfi se tou pocha nahi hain " she had a face palm she texted him with in few second she received his call she put it on speaker

" where are you guys going?" he asked in surprise

"there is a wedding in Islamabad, for 2 days we are going " she said

" ok but Zubiya is not going anywhere " he added

"Asfi how she can stay alone in home ?" Gaiti added

"bhabi mein nahi hoon Kya " he said seriously

" Asfi how with you she can stay ?" Gaiti look at Zubiya who was feeling bit awkward

" for God sake aap log yeh sab baatine na kara tou acha hoga , we know our limits and why to create a fuss we have to spend our rest of the life together " he said Gaiti in surprise look at Zubiya who as

quietly sneak out , "larka larki razi " she murmur

" what" Asfi asked from other end

" kuch nahi , thek hai , i will tell mamoo that you didn't allowed her " she tried to pull his leg before ending the call


Noon

"Zubiya i hope you dont have any problem in staying here " Gaiti asked her

"in mess i was staying alone, don't worry i will manage , wasie bhi i have to join hospital soon " she added

" guards are outside dont be scared , Asfi said he will be back before dark" Gaiti hug her and said she nodded Zubiya locked the door as they all left ,she check the time , a smile appear on her lips

"Desi khana pasand hai , let me cook something for him " she smiled at her thought and walked in kitchen ," i dont know kya pasnad hai Asfand ko" she rub her chin " call karo" she bites her lips and asked herself " woh muhje ko maana karda ga"she roll her sleeves and started cooking

Time flies as she finished she check the clock

"9 baja abhi tak aai kyun nahi " she picked up her cell ," nahi call nahi karti " she set the table and sat in lounge to wait for him


At Hospital

"Dr Asfand you are alone at home lets have dinner with us tonight " Dr Sheroze invited him

" nahi aaj nahi , i am very tired today , i want to relax " he tries to make excuse

" i have already told Asifa that you and Dr Haroon are coming with me for dinner , agar nahi chalo ga tou woh naarza hojai gai "Dr Sheroze said and pat his back , Asfand has no there option he agrees


At Dr Sheroze home

"Dr Asfandyar you are not eating anything" Dr Sheroze

"nahi nahi mein na khaliya " he folded the napkin and said

" today you are not in mood to play chess game with me " Dr Sheroze asked him , he smiles " waise ghar per tou koi ha nai ,aap ko jani kai kya itni jaldi hai " He again asked him " eh haal tou hamara Shadi ka baad tha, bus duty khatam ho aur hum ghar jai " he teased Dr Asifa

" waise kya koi larki aap kai naazar mein hai yeh hum aap ka liya dekha " Dr Asifa asked Asfandyar

He gave her a smile

"Dr Zubiya Peshawar chali gai " Dr Sheroze asked him while eating . Asfand nodded " acha kiya "he finished his dinner

" please ab muhje ko ijazat da mein chalta hoon " Asfand was waiting for him to finish his dinner

" aaj tu aap na hamara saath bilkul acha nahi kiya Dr Asfandyar " he greeted him and said

"Sir bus mera dil nahi kar raha tha , next time i will do justice with food " he smiled waved him and drives away " OMG kahan mein phase gaya 11 o'clock " he checks the time he drives as fast as he could to reach home "Zubiya i am really sorry " he curse himself while parking the car

" sab thek hai" he asked the guards the nodded he walked towards the entrance door , very slowly he unlocked the door , on tip of his toes he walked in while locking the door at his back, he finds her sleeping on sofa , she was covering herself with his black shawl, he couldn't stop mesmerizing her , he walked ahead , he finds a melted candle on dinning table , with plates ,he clench his jaws " i am so sorry Zubiya" he murmur

" aap aagaya " he heard her saying in sleepy voice ,she at once get up

" hey araam se " he said

" change kara mein dinner lagti hoon " she said

" why you didn't had dinner ?" he held her arm and said ,she look at him " freshen up hojai " she again said " i am sorry , Dr Sheroze zabardasti ghar lagaya " he said

" aap na dinner karliya hai " she stares at him and asked ,he shakes his head " nope ,aaj se pehla mein na kabhi itna jhoot nahi bola " he hides his smile and said

" kya " she frees her arm from his hand and walked towards the kitchen while asking him

" he took me to his home , dinner was not ready , then we have to wait for hour, when they serve i had in five minutes and stands " he had a laughter

" ohhh , kitna batameeze hain aap " she said

" who made this all ?" he check the dishes and asked her

" mein na ,mujhe ko nahi pata tha ka aap ko kya pasand hai " she hides her smile and said

" Dr Zubiya aik cheeze hoti hai common sense jo aap ka paas nahi hai, yeh phone kaise liya hota hai " he walked in kitchen waving his cell , she in shock look at him

"woh mein " she bites her lips and said

" kya woh mein " he walked ahead " aap ko apna arm ko rest dana chaiya , i think you forgot you are a Dr and Hospital needs you " he said and decreased the distance between them,he was standing an inch away from her , she look around finding place to escape , he noticed " bola " he asked

"Dr Asfandyar " she said in shaky voice he held placed his both hands no the counter, he look direct in her eyes ,while narrowing his brows he asked , she became numb

" will you marry me ?" he hides his smile and asked her ,she in shock look at him ,he has a smile on his face and his eyes was sparking like starts " daradiya " she placed her hand on her heart ,he had a laughter " nahi karo gai " she tries to push him away with her one hand , he held her hand in his " karni tou para gai aap ko ab madam " he naughtily smiled

"Zabardasti hai kya " she made face and asked

" thek ha na karo Dr Asifa kai sister kal aarahi hai " he kept his face straight and said , he find Zubiya face turning red " mein un se bolta hoon meeting set karda " he smirks , Zubiya's eyes pop out at same time his cell started ringing ,he checks the number and then look at her , he received

" sorry mein na khud call kardi , i waited for your call " Rehan bhai said from other end

"Aik minute " he passed the mobile to her " yeh tumhara phone hai " he passed her

" kaise ka hai " she asked

" baat tou karo" he placed it next to her ear

" Zobi " she heard her brother voice from other end , her face color changed and she in shock at Asfand who was standing in front of her , she pushed Asfand and without waiting ran to her room ,left Asfand stunned

"Zobi" Asfand could hear her brother calling her , he look at his cell and the close door between him and Zubiya



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Edited by naddiya26 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
ehh naddiya this was so beautiful. 😳

I am glad you decided to bring Rehan Bhai into so that Zubiya gets her final closure with him also.πŸ‘
Asfi avoiding dinner was so cute hehe.πŸ˜†He knew his to be wifey must be waiting for him.πŸ˜‰

That Dr.Asifa ki bhen arai hai. aww Doc trying to make her jealous. πŸ˜‰

Zubiya cooking for Asfand.. ❀️

Update soon. Can't wait to see how Asfi will handle her when he gets to know the whole truth about her brother and everything Zubiya went through..😭

Loved this chap!⭐️
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Posted: 6 years ago
Yaaar it ws beautiful! ⭐️ Especially the scene where he asks her to marry him... ❀️
Naddiya you really have a great way with words. MashaAllah.. β­οΈπŸ‘ Keep writing please...
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Aatra..

ehh naddiya this was so beautiful. 😳


I am glad you decided to bring Rehan Bhai into so that Zubiya gets her final closure with him also.πŸ‘
Asfi avoiding dinner was so cute hehe.πŸ˜†He knew his to be wifey must be waiting for him.πŸ˜‰

That Dr.Asifa ki bhen arai hai. aww Doc trying to make her jealous. πŸ˜‰

Zubiya cooking for Asfand.. ❀️

Update soon. Can't wait to see how Asfi will handle her when he gets to know the whole truth about her brother and everything Zubiya went through..😭

Loved this chap!⭐️

thanks

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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow, loved it, Thanks so much for this update, Great job, please update soon, Love your story a lot. πŸ‘πŸΌ
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She walked into the room and close the door behind her

Asfand hurriedly walked behind her but he failed to stop her doing so , he stand still and stares at the closed door, he drop the idea to knock at the door , he sat on the near sofa " i should have talked to her before giving her phone" he curse himself helplessly look at the closed door


Inside the room Zobia drop herself on the bed drop herself on the bed

Asfand ko mujhe per Aitbaar nahi kiya tha ,Main Ne Kabhi Nahi Socha Tha Asfand Rehan bhai ko call karenge aur Un se contact karne ki koshish Karenge "she wanted to cried out her as she felt suffocated inside her heart,she walked to the window and open it chilly breeze kissed her face it sooth her pain , she look back towards the door "Asfand kya Sochenge main unse jhoot bola Apne baare mein , Rishte ki buniyad Sach par Hoti Hai Hamara Rishta mein tou jhoot Pe Hai Bana Hai

Asfand ko Kis Tarah face karungi she wanted to scream but she controlled herself

mein yahan se Kahin Jahan Bhi To Nahi Sakti " she tried to pull the strong iron rod that has caged her between him



At 3 her stomach started growling she checked the time " sogaya hoga , he was tired " she wrap the shawl around her and barefoot walk out she slowly walked out of the room , to her surprise she find him sleeping on sofa placed next to the door , his head was hanging down ,she has no option , she held her breath and walked ahead picked up a cushion from side , gently slide her hand under his head and moved a side placed the cushion , he was fast asleep , she could not stop herself and moved the curl from his forehead , she felt bad seeing me sleeping like that , his arm was warp around his chest ,he was still in same dress , he has not even taken off his shoes , she unwrap the shawl around her and covered him " dinner kiya ka nahi " she hurriedly walked out of the library , in kitchen she find the plate placed at same place were she left , " ajeeb hai " she felt bad , she quickly heated it " he must be feeling hungry , subah bhi nashta jaldi mein kiya tha , lunch skip hogaya " she bites her lips "Gaiti bhabi asked me to take care of him aur mein bhi naarza ho kar room lock kar ka bati hoon " she scold herself


"Asfand " she whispered while placing the plate on the table " dinner karla " she placed her hand on his shoulder and shakes him a bit , he opens his eyes find her leaning over him , at first he could not recollect ," kya huwa" he whispered and blinks his eyes

"dinner " she said avoided the eye contact with him

" tum na kiya " yawn and asked her she shakes her head in a big no ,he look at the wall clock a smile appears on his face as he find her shawl , he quickly hides it , " i will change in a minute " he without waiting walked to his room

Zubiya wonder " mera se kuch pocha bhi nahi " she bites the edge of her nails

" mmm" he walked back dressed in his pajama and shirt

" aap na change bhi karliya " she asked him while hiding her hand behind

" i am starving dear " he said

" tou aap na dinner kiya kyun nahi " she asked him he narrowed his eyes and look at her " invitation doon " he stuff her mouth with rice

" delicious " he said while munching , he finds her staring at him . she was waiting for him to ask her, on other hand he gave her time and space , he wanted her to take him in confidence and tell him about her past

" i normally watch movie at Saturday night " he said

" ab tou din hona wala hai " she said while pouting

"andhera hai abhi bhi " he hides his smile and said and switched on the tv " coffee " he asked her as they finished " mein bana doon " she asked him he with hand stops her

" you keep sitting i will bring in a minute " he walked out

" Asfand kaise itna normal behave kar raha hain " she thinks

While making Coffee " i will not ask you anything Zubiya " he said find her standing behind him

" i am sorry , muhje aap se asie behave nahi karna chaiya " she said

" kaise kya huwa " he asked her while giving her cup

" i bang door at your face " she said and made serious face

" everyone needs space Zubiya , at times i want to be all alone , i don't feel like anyone around me " he said and walked back to the library

"who is your favorite actor ?" he asked her the sat on sofa

" no one mein movies nahi dekhti " she said while taking sip of coffee

" mess mein tv nahi hai kya " he asked her in surprise

" woh mera abi ko acha nahi lagta tha " she said " abi was very strict " she paused " mein na aik din ammi se zid kai thi ka muhje ko bhi dosri larkiyon kai tarah shopping karna jana hai " she paused lump stuck in her throat ," agar mein zid na karti na tou aaj meri ammi zinda hoti " she bites her lips to control her tears , she finds Asfand staring at her " abi na meri ammi ko mardiya mein kuch nahi kar saki " she sobbed

" killed her " he placed his mug on table and turn towards her , she nodded

" abi ko ghusa aa gaya tha ka hum dono kyun akela shopping karna gaya he wanted to beat me , as it as my wish , ammi came in between us and she died " she completed he pull her in his arms , there was a silence in the room , she sobbed , tears roll down his eyes , he had no words to console her , he kissed over her head , his grip tighten with her every sob " Asfand you are hurting me " she moved his hand from her wound as his finger pierce in her skin

" i am sorry " he at once left her " dekho muhje ko "and checked her arm , she started laughing

"mein thek hoon " she said and look at him , he could not stop mesmerizing her " how brave she was, she was telling him about her mom death and now she was smiling to show him that she is fine "

"Aise kya dekhe raha hain aap " she asked him he shakes his head , she sat straight " bhai na ammi ka liya kuch nahi kiya , na mera liya , aap ko yaad hai aap na iss waqt mera saath diya tha , aap na mujhe ko aik galat larki nahi samjhe , aur apni car mein ghar chora , no one in my home trusted me " she paused and look at him , she find his intense gaze on her face " movie dekha " she asked him he nodded and switched on the TV while placing his arm behind her " after abi death , bhai was under bhabi influence , her brother one day at night walked in my room , i was studying i screamed ,Bhai aai tou mera room mein per phir un na muhje ko galat mana " she placed her head on his shoulder " that day i left home forever " she said and entwined her fingers with his " aap se jo milna tha , who trust me even with his closed eyes " " rested her head on his chest to feel and hear his beat that trusted her every time


to be continued

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Posted: 6 years ago
NadsπŸ€—
Thank you for updating .

I'm so involved in the story and want to know what happens. lovely updated. You explained AsfiYa's emotions very well! esp the lines where she talks about Asfand's aeitebaar and he's suprised at her laughing after telling him her story
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awww... That was intense and sweet.. I love that Asfand is so understanding.. Plz update soon
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