Originally posted by: GorgeousSmile
First of all,
CONGRATS on NEW Story!!
I like all of your stories yaar!! Not like I DO LOVE THEM!!
That too so so much!!
Reading WLCWF...loving it too!!
You are tooo much good!!
Addirita!! thank you so much
I'm soo glad that youre liking all my stories it really means alot dear
you started reading WLCWF? hey thats my 1st story and really very close to my heart so let me know how you liked it๐
Loved the NAME at first!!!๐
yeah update got delayed for a week just because of the tittle well 1 week was worth it since you all liked the tittle๐
...Diving...Asad is a diver if am not wrong!!๐
yes a new profession for both of them๐
Six yrs. ago...they have gone old now!๐๐
hahaha not that old just that six years back they were teenager or you can say students now they are professionals
Concept is really amazing!!
thank you thank you so happy to hear that
SEA...Waah!! waah!! Sabashiii!!
Yes Sea!! since the main ingredient of their love is water๐
What do you eat after all?? Every time something new!!๐ณ
lol yaar i eat normal human food youre just making me feel special and I Love You 4 that๐
I guess you already know...still I need to say it...You are the best writer here!!
thats too much ok I'm a writer not best yaar but you 4 the compliment it brought huge smile on my face
I can imagine your stories...my AsYa scenes too well!!
I LOVE THIS STORY!! ALL OF YOUR STORY!!
this is the best thing anyone had said that they can imagine Asya scenes of my stories...ab muje rula mat please
Coming to FF,
Loved Asad Zoya's expressions...as if they don't care...but they do care!!๐
both are big time nautanki on a serious note their past is controlling their present
Loved the flashbacks..& AsYa scenes...thanks for adding them!!๐
"You are the best thing happened to me!!" - How Romantic!!๐ณ
glad to know that!!!it was romantic but what he said after that was creul๐๐๐
Zoya's abbu is villain also along with Tanveer & Akram!!
He's not๐
Leave about Asad, I was much more shocked than him at Tanveer's arrival!!๐ก
I didn't expect her at all in the first chapter of this beautiful story!!๐ญ
Yeh toh meri hosh ei uda diya!!๐คข
hahaha I know you ppl hate me for that but what to do twist and turns are important๐
Pain in heart was there, here comes pain in head too!!๐คฃLoved this a lot yaar!!๐
You are totally Amazing!!
she is indeed pain in head!!!!๐๐๐not more amazing than you
They are getting married!! Like seriously??
Dumb Asad!!
How can he not understand not Zoya but Tanveer is the one to chase after his money!!๐ฒ
he is sometimes a tubelight like me๐ but this time he is too late๐ญ
But it's gr8, he doesn't like Tanveer!!๐
And another room!! GR8!!๐
yeah asad just crushed all her dreams and thats awesome๐๐
STRANGE!! What's there to get jealous...what's there to think something like that if she is talking smilingly on phone, that would be her bf??? I am saying generally!! People have this problem!!
exactly people has such problem!!! thats annoying but here what happened is they are coming face to face after 6 long years and that was unexpected for asad and on the top of that she is really behaving like she has moved on which is irking him all such things was going on in his mind when he saw her there in phone booth so 1st thing came in his mind was really did she move on so easily!!! so that point came in his mind hope its now cleared? or did i confused you more?๐
I think Zoya was talking with Humi if she is in the story or with her friend!!
Humi is there in story but whom she is talking to will be revealed soon ๐
Zoya really didn't care at last!!๐ฒ How come??
letc what happened soo brutal that made zoya like this!!
is there something I am forgetting?๐Feeling so but don't know!!๐
omg! what?
Yeah!! Remembered!! How can you even think that we won't like your story??๐ฒ
You are always at this misconception!!
IDK!! i just feel like that sometimes but got a very good piece of mind from everyone so wont dare to again think like that๐๐ณ
If something like this happens again, it won't be good for you!!๐ก๐ก Yaad rakh na!!๐
I'm scared๐ ok will take care in future๐
C'mon!!
C'mon!!
C'mon!!
Now update the precap soon!!
I want to know further of this story!!
surely dear will try to
And do update soon!!
But ATY first!!
I love that more!!๐
ok understood so 1st ATY and then this one fine๐
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