Asya ff DIVING IN LOVE :) CH4=PG43 UPDATED ON 21/07/18 - Page 3

Well, I didn't say one thing!!

Hey!

Just read it...

Love it

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow a new story
yes a new story!!!
Excited
me too to update
Pain in.heart is.there snd.pain in head showed up too
billu Rani😆
Asya to work together but they seems.to have a.past
they do have a bitter-sweet past
A great love that turned into hatred
yeah we can say that
Asad amarine biologist and zoya a doctor
yes new profession to both of them btw asad is a diver😃
So he believes zoya and.her abbu cheat him
yes he thinks something like that maybe😉
Y do I have A feeling tht phone.convo.zoya had has to be with someone younger like A.child
you will get to know that soon😊
Omg tannu really and he is set tk marry her
i know she is annoying🤢🤢
Ughhh
Cont
will try to

THANK YOU SO MUCH YAAR ANOPAMA!!
IT REALLY MEANS ALOT!!!😃

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Wow!!! this seems interesting!!!

Would love to read more...continue soon...

Thanks for pm 😊

REALLY SO GLAD to know that
will trY to continue ASAP!!

Originally posted by: ksen

nice start

very interesting

looking forward for the next part

thanks for the pm

thankyou so muh I'm glad you liked it😊

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

congrats for new story dear
first part was very nice...
asad zoya conversation in ship was beautifull written
FB 2 is very painful
tanveer with asad i don't like
looking forward to read more...
pls update next part soon...
thanks for pm dear
you are aanchal na ??

Thank you so much paru
I'm glad you liked it 😊
i know FB2 was indeed painful😭
I know billi and jammy are the worst pairing
will try to update as soon as I get my banner😉
yes I'm Aanchal! naam toh suna he hoga becoz baut common or old naam hai

Hiii Anchal... 😃
Hw r u ?
Great prologue
Unique nd interesting concept.
Amazing thought 👏
Asya had a painful past.
They both loved each other but now broke up .
Nd I'm so sure that tanveer is behind all this . 😡
Now after six years both met.
Asad is shocked but zoya was not nd passing sarcastic cmnts on each other.
Like zoya said I too think he's being judgmental.
Asad nd tanveer engaged 😲
Pain in heart was already there nd here come pain in head 🤣
True said Asad 😆
Already loving this story.
Continue soon

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Unres ..
omg!!!! yeh kiska comment hai The great Shweta Yadav!!!! aapne itne jaldi comment kia (wiping tears*) danya hogayi main😃

Finally miss sorry is here .welcome 😡

Ur 2 days late
wow! who welcomes with that smiley? but still thank you for the warm welcome😆

Mere pyaari story
haan teri he hai story bhi aur isme ka villian bhi😛

So happy to see this update first thing in the morning ..
aww!! really SWEETU🤗

Thought my net is nt working ..

Still I can't stop my self fr commenting ( phone se he sahi )
I'm sooo happy that you loved it so much

100 marks fr title 🥳...n for the concept
really YAY!!!!!!!!!on a serious note thanks 4 always being my support system🤗

Y nt Res fr us ?? N by the way who don't like u stories ?? .
just not wanted to force anyone😳

Need precap asap ...
zarur Precap+Character Sketch+banner coming soon please dont ask about update no idea about it😛

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Concept

Totally unexpected ( in a good way )

Totally new concept to us

But but this story is totally different ...
Thank you sooo much!!! thats really sweet of you because I was worried like hell!!

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Coming to the 1st part ..

What a start 👏
thank you soo much🤗

Haye sea wale love story ...
yeah sea wala love story or you say water vala also it all starts with water❤️

I really dnt knw about shark liver Oli stuff etc much..( some knowledge fr me ).
actually i do lot of research on sharks so thought to use it in the story for me it is the most scariest and the same time favorite creature

Asya was in love ..😳 6 yrs back
yes they were inseparable lovers

Y they broke up ..???...😕
long story will get to know soon😉

What Zoya n her abbu did?? ( Ye bas sayape he lete hai )
hahaha zoya hai vo uska pura khandan sayape lene mein degree le rakhi hai😆

Ayaan is also here ..( raabert )
yes Raabert and Mona is there😉

Hahaha ..asya taunting each other in best way ...
yeah both are not less😉

Now both will work together. .( can't wait to read more )... .

So zoya CNT swim ..yes but asad his here to handle her

there is a reason why she cant swim you will get to soon that yedegiri🤣

But ye kya kr dia tune ..
kya!!!

Shit shit shit like dillu ur love is also increasing fr Billi .hmm ...

Here come billi entry .
dono ki shadi jo karani hai😛😛😛 but on a serious note twist n turns ke liye she's needed

Asad - 🤣pain is already in heart here come pain in head ..
hehehe billi is pain in head only😆😆😆

So billi is going to marry asad ..even after knowing he still love zoya .ye billi bas money ke lie kuch bhi krge
gold digger she is after all😡

Ohh she wants ek he room ..bade aaye asad ke room me rehne ke lie ..kamini ( I hate her )..
billi ke dil ke aarman aasuo mein bheh gaye😆

Billi n zoya saw each other

Billi confused with zoya's behaviour .( Eagerly waiting to read more of flashback).
yeah becoz she has changed a lot if was a 6 years back zoya she would have probably killed tanveer seeing her with asad

Oh so nt only Billi I can see ur love fr Akram as well .. ..
just 4 u i have casted him😛

Super excited to read next chapter
even I'm excited to update

Happy with the length of first part
tu bas shock pe shock de youre happy with the length cant ask for anything more😃

Need bahut Sara flaskback .

surely dear

Ps ..Images are like cheery on the cake

glad to know that idea worked😊

Mere comment ke khichdi pake hoge I kwn ..pH me I hate doing comments on my stories .still u hv to bear it ...

I'm more than happy I love such khicidi so never stop it

Now waiting fr my first love ( WLCWF) .

i updated your 1st love already but this time it was kind of diaster😳

SWEETU!!! LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS OVERWHELMING COMMENT 🤗