Originally posted by: ayeshakapoor
Excellent dear...banner, character sketch and teaser was fantastic...Eagerly waiting for next update..
Originally posted by: Ajuzangel
Amazing
Love itSo asad was still expecting some reactionExcited to read moreThanks for pmUpdate soon
Originally posted by: enthusiastic
CS was very nice dear
awesome teaser...
waiting for update;
thanks alot for pm...
Originally posted by: Jasleenkaur01
Nice update dear
Why is zoya not showing any reaction seeing asad n tanu so close?I think something major happened wHich changed the equation of asyaThank u for the pm n continue soon
Originally posted by: LuvurselF
BEAUTIFUL BANNER.
LOVED IT .
thank you so much dear๐TEASER seems interesting.
glad to know thatAs usual Asad is annoyed with tanveer presence.
she is an annoying person๐But to see Zoya's jeolousy he started dancing with tanveer๐ก
and he is a foolish person sometimesAnd our smart zoya spoiled his plan by playing romantic songs ๐
hahaha his worst nightmareI think zoya doing this just to show asad in fact she's affected by their closeness.right???๐
maybe๐Can't wait to read more.so continue soon.๐
very soon
Luv ths story so much...
thank u so much
I'm so glad u liked it
Zoya is awesome and Asad, well his plan is failed and I really luvd that part and when I imagined Asad's face...๐
hahaha even I enjoyed writing it poor asad๐๐
The banner is so beautiful too...
thanks to paru its her efforts๐
I really fell in luv with the story within the first update,...felt refreshing one compared to the other ASYA stories !!
it really really really really really really really means alot trust me๐
I really like the way that zoya handles asad's sarcasm and his attitude and yess handling tanveer too...the way she casually speak to her, and made asad nd tanveer mad, although fr diff reasons...I'm just luvng it !!
well here there are 2 shades of zoya ie the past zoya and present zoya and this present one is really gonna be a very hard nut to crack which will be giving asad a very hard time๐
Totally, its a blockbuster package, I feel...and yess, its intersting to see their banters in ths way, not really fighting and bickering ...impressive tracks!!
in a relation people love, fight have differences and sort it out but there is a line to everything if that is crossed than everything is over than whatever other person is doing doesnt matter anymore lets c if asad has crossed that line๐
Thank u fr the pm and cont the story too na !!
cant wait...just going crazy by thnkng wat's nxt !!
๐ I really hope i didn't disappoint you
just update sooon as u can !!
I really liked the CS also ( i read nw only )...
Glad you liked it๐
and I felt very happy tat here Zoya's parents are real parents.
I really luv the stories where raziya and gaffur had been shown as positive chars and luvd zoya very much...few of the stories are here bt still...It feels really gud, maybe cz of the reason there are only very few and very rare to seen...!!
actually even i like it when they are shown positive maybe becoz as u said there are few stories but I liked it when she has a loving parents always by her side ๐
Anyway, cont ur amazng writing skills nd update before ur readers, like ME become crazy...!!
oh god now you making me feel like some celebrity though I'm not but thank u so much for always encouraging hope so i wont disappoint you in further updates
Originally posted by: Risingsun626
Thanks for pm. Lovely banner n wonderful teaser. But i think banner is incomplete without tannu n jammy together. Hahaha. So let it be incomplete. ;-D
Originally posted by: ARJUNKIAPS
BEAUTIFUL AND LOVELY BANNER
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