Life Without You.....

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Posted: 7 years ago
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PROLOGUE..
All Sanskrit retelling don't mention about divinity of sisters of sita,death of sita's sister is not mentioned,in Anand Ramayana it is written that urmila was the incarnation of milk ocean which provided stability to Sheshnag.So,she would have died earlier,I thought of writing a fanfiction on the same.However,its a TOTAL FICTION and not made to hurt someone's sentiments...This is the confusion which make this epic more great and exciting.This fanfiction will revolve around lakshman n ram and of course..lakshmila.Please do review and enjoy!!!

Please guide everyone...i think i m the youngest here so m like ur lil sissy...do help


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank u so much for the support bhaiya..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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which provided stability to Sheshnag.So,she would have died earlier,I thought of writing a fanfiction on the same.However,its a TOTAL FICTION and not made to hurt someone's sentiments...This is the confusion which make this epic more great and exciting.This fanfiction will revolve around lakshman n ram and of course..lakshmila.Please do review and enjoy!!!
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Part 1

Urmi Stop,Please stop running!!'Lakshman was continuously saying as he was running behind Urmila.The whole room was filled with Urmila's giggles and sound of her payal.'Catch me if you can,Soumitra' said Urmila and again started giggling. Mila,Stop I am telling you,seriously' This time Lakshman added a bit anger in his tone but Urmila was in full masti mood.She said,cupping Lakshman's face,'You look so cute when you are angry.Just like a small kid.Adorable!!' and pinched his nose and again started running.

She ran towards the balcony in which there was a swing.She started swinging when Lakshman came there breathing heavily.She was looking mesmerizing,her eyes were shining with happiness and skin with the moon's light.The way she was laughing was making her ruby and diamond earings move frantically.Her sound of giggles were like a music for lakshman's ears as he always wanted her to be happy...

Urmila was swinging highly.Immediately,Lakshman went into his protection mode. Urmi...slowly...mila...u will fall...' Lakshman said sternly running towards the swing. Soumitra..I can never fall down until u are with me' Mila called out and started swinging even higher.Lakshman nodded in affection and smiled looking at her.But the smile turned in pure horror when he saw her falling backwards from the swing.
MILA!!!!!!!!!!'Lakshman screamed at top of his voice.






TERE BINA BHI KYA JEENA...

MILA!!!' Lakshman screamed at top of his voice..
His face was burning, eyes were shot open.He breathed heavily between his sobs.His face was drenched with sweat and tears were crawling down his cheeks.His nose became deep red. He thanked God that it was just a dream...no wait...was it???Urmila was not in room.He searched the whole room yelling Mila , where r u ???But no reply.Now he was scared.Did his dream change into reality??Was her Mila alright...or something happened to her??

NO.He swept away all his eerie thoughts and ran towards the corridor to find her.As soon as entered the corridor..he saw her controlling her laughter because of stupid activities of angad and chandraketu.Now,Lakshman was relieved.There she was absolutely fine, he sighed.Children ran away immediately seeing their father.Lakshman ran towards urmila n held her by shoulders..she was shocked to see lakshman like that.A huge warrior , who was never afraid of anything now standing there with scared eyes..


Urmila proposed him to go to their chambers and he just nodded n they went to their chambers.As soon as they entered their chamber,lakshman enveloped urmila in a crushing embrace.She just caressed his hair to calm him down.She held Lakshman's chin and made him look in her eyes.
U:- Soumitra,Look at me.What happened??Is it something serious??
L:- Mila, never leave me.Please never leave me...
Lakshman again hugged her.Now she was scared.What has happened??Was he going again??
U:-Swami , I will never leave you.First of all calm down n tell me what happened.(Handling him a glass of water)Have it.
L:-Mila, I saw a worse nightmare.

U:- Oh!!So my soumitra is not afraid of Meghnad but a nightmare...
L:- Mila,stop kidding...I m serious.
U(sensing something was him eating up ):- Okay,tell me. What u saw in that nightmare?
L:- I saw...I saw...
U:- U saw,what??You can share anything with me.Right??
L:- Urmi, I saw that I was running after you.You were teasing me n then u started swinging highly in the balcony n all of a sudden u fell backwards n i couldn't do anything...I will not be able to bear another separation,Mila...i can't
U:- Neither do I . This is just a dream,Swami.Until u r with me nothing can happen to me.Now,Smile...

Urmila looked at lakshman.He was still worried...still thinking about his dream.She couldn't see him like that..she has to do something.She suddenly stood up n started searching something.

L(now little calmed down):- What happened,Urmi???What are you finding??Maybe I can help.

PRECAP:- U:- Yeah...maybe u can help me.Have u seen him??
L:- Him????

Anyone excited...who is this he????

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry for the typos guys...pls do review n tell how's this ?
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