MANAN OS KABHI YADOON MEIN

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Posted: 7 years ago
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kabhi yadoon mein ...

Love...love Love is not the feeling that only exist between a girlfriend and a boyfriend...
It also exist between a mom and her child...mom's love for her child is pure...impalpable
And invisible...beautiful bond shared by a mother and her child...this story is not based on manik and nandini's love story...but it is about nandini as a mom and her son...
CHAPTER
scene one...
A man nearly of 30 is walking inside a big hate that opens up to a hostel...he is followed by a lady whose hands are stuck into the hand of a small cute 5 years boy...
The lady looks very sad...pained from inside...she is constantly caressing the smooth ,glowing hair of the small child...the child seems to bery afraid and doesn't want to go anywhere...
Man: hmm...hum pahunch gaye...
Lady: manik...yahan ...yahan rehna hai golu ko...
Manik: han...yahi...
Lady: manik...idhaar sab thik thak hai na...matlab mere golu ka acchi tarah se khayal rakhenge na ye log...
Manik moved her hand on her face...giving her a satisfying look...
Manik: nandini...don't worry...golu will be safe...
Golu chalo...
Golu pushes his face under nandini's saree...nandini's tears rolled down her cheeks...what will she do...she has to...
Nandini separates golu from her saree...while golu couldn't look at nandini's face...nandini sat down inher knees ...and looked into his small eyes...
Nandini: golu...ap mere achhe bacche ho na...mama ki baat nahi manoge...mama jo bhi karegi tumhare bhale ke liye karegi...mama tumse bahut pyaar karti hai...trust me...mein hamesha apke saath rahungi...
Golu (slowing looking up): hameccha...
Nandini(smiling between her tears): hamessa...
Manik: cholo golu...lets go...
Golu: bye mama...
Nandini: bye beta...
Tears flowed out from nandini's eyes...these drops were not only tears but a feeling of mother hood that a mother stores inside the deepest corner of her heart...that day that place became a heaven when these tears touched its soil...this shows when a baby gets separated from her mother ...mother heart and soul cries...and don't think that these were only tears...these tears,proves to be same as the drop of blood using which she has made her baby...managed her in her womb till 9 months...these tears beats the pain which the mother has feeled when her baby opened his eyes in this world...today a mother is separated from her child...its truely said...a child can never be happy without her parents...he/she is incomplete without his/her parents...it's my own experience...for a child there are two most bitter movement in his/her life...first one when his/her parents leave the world and second when they get separated from their parents when they are young...they need their parents...
Manik is back dropping golu inside the hostel...he encounters nandini on her knees crying her heart out...the only option left is he has to help his wife to deal with her pain...
Manik: nandini get up...u are my strong wife...
Moving his palms on nandini's cheeks...
Nandini still snuggling...
Manik holds nandini from her arms...gave her a support to get up...and finally nandini gets up...
Manik and nandini both move outside the hostel campus...
After some days...
Golu is sleeping quietly on his bed...and it's all time for his classes...but he doesn't have his mother beside him to wake him up...and suddenly a soft palm of a women touched golu's face...golu got up with a shock and smiled to say...mama...
And infront of him stands nandini ...his mama...
Golu: mama ap yahan...
Nandini: maine kaha tha na ...mein hamesha ap ke satth rahungi...
Ab cholo uth gayo classes attend nahi karna...
Golu: nahi mama...nahi jana...
Nandini: no baby...be punctual...mama ne kya sikhaya tha...
Golu: ok mama...par ap mujhe tayar kal dogi...plz...
Nandini gives a sweet smile...
Nandini: thik hai...cholo get up...
Now nandini is caught combing golu's hair...caressing his hair...now nandini placed a kiss on golu's cheeks...
Nandini: cholo class mein...
Scene changes...
Golu is seen sitting in his class room...teacher is as usual eating fresh brains of small students...golu is looking here and there in the room...and when his sight reached the eoom door he found nandini standing there and making funny faces...
Expressing that these teachers always bore in the class...always go on talking explaining ... etc etc etc...
Golu have a cute smile by these funny expression...
Days pass by...And all these continued ...everyday nandini would come to golu ...wake him up...get him ready for her classes. ...make him have his food and fulfill all those requirements that only a mother can fulfill for his child...golu has stopped missing his mother as she was always present with him...at every moment ... Who played with him...made him study...sit in the exam beside him...but to surprise no body ever noticed nandini in the hostel...
And after 2 months its time for the students to return to their house and plan there vacation...school bell rang...all students ran outside shouting in happiness as they have got their freedom back...
In that crowd ...golu was standing alone...waiting for his parents to pick him up...wherein from that big crowd he noticed nandini walking towards him...
Nandini: kya hua...papa nahi aye...
Golu: nahi...woh hamesha late karte hain...
Nandini: aisa nahi kehte bachha...cholo jab tak papa nahi ate hum ghum ke ate hain...
Golu: ek second...
Golu ran to his teacher...
Golu: teacher...agar meri papa aye toh unhe kehna ki mein mamq ka saath ghumne gaya huin...
Teacher: ok beta...
Nandini and golu both ran outside the hostel gate...

Kabhi yaadon mein aaoon
Kabhi khwaabon mein aaoon
Kabhi yaadon mein aaoon
Kabhi khwaabon mein aaoon
Teri palkon ke saaye mein aakar jhilmilaoon
Main wo khushboo nahin jo hawa mein kho jaaoon

Nandini and golu walked inside a playground with many stalls...golu requested nandini to bye him a watch of a superman...nandini smiles and gets him a watch...he tried to wear it but couldn't tie the belt...nandini helped him to tie it up...

Hawa bhi chal rahi hai
Magar tu hi nahi hai
Fiza rangeen bani hai
Kahaani keh rahi hai
Mujhe jitna bhulao
Main utna yaad aaoon
Kabhi yaadon mein aaoon
Kabhi khwaabon mein aaoon.

Golu ran into the the ground...(costume change) nandini wore a dress like a kasmiri girl...and looks for golu...while golu gives a surprise to nandini appearing from her back...nandini got a shock...but filled with laughter after that...

Jo tum na milti
Hota hi kya dhoond laane ko?
Jo tum na milti
Hota hi kya dhoond laane ko?
Jo tum na milti
Hota hi kya haar jaane ko?
Meri amaanat thhi tum
Meri amaanat thhi tum
Meri mohabbat ho tum
Tumhein kaise main bhulaoon?

While running golu falls down...and gets hurt...blood strains,out...nandini worries and takes him in her lap...cleans his wound...and asks if he is not badly hurt...to which golu replies in a no...

Kabhi yaadon mein aaoon
Kabhi khwaabon mein aaoon
Teri palkon ke saaye mein aakar jhilmilaoon

Nandini hugs his life in her arm...and stores him inside her both curved arms...

Tadap rahe ho
Zamaane se muskaraane ko
Tadap rahe ho
Zamaane se muskaraane ko
Taras rahe ho
Zamaane se paas aane ko
Teri dhadkanon mein baskar
Teri dhadkanon mein baskar
Teri saans mein reh reh kar
Tumhein har pal sataaoon

Nandini ask golu to leave to hostel but he simply denied...and drags nandini to another store to bye him a flying cart...which nandini did...tears rolled down nandini's eyes by seeing her baby so hqppy...

Kabhi yaadon mein aaoon
Kabhi khwaabon mein aaoon
Teri palkon ke saaye mein aakar jhilmilaoon
Main wo khushboo nahin jo hawa mein kho jaaoon

Nandini and golu are back to the hostel...nandini looks at golu with teary eyes...

Nandini: golu ap ander jao...papa wait kar rahe honge...
Golu: ok mama...
Golu tries to leaves but he turns back and ask his mom that...
Golu: mama ap nahi aaoge...
Nandini: mein aa jaungi...
Tum jao...
Golu runs inside with his flying cart...when he got to see Manik taking to his teacher...
Manik: kya...kya bola apne...woh apne mama ke saath gayi hai...yeh kaise ho sakta hai...nandini...nandini ko toh cancer tha aur do mahine pehele hi uski death ho gayi hai...how could golu go with her...
Hearing this a shock stroke golu offf...
Golu proves: abhi toh mama mere saath thi...
He ran outside where nandini left him last time...but he found no one there...a small child after hearing that he could never get his mom back...cries her heart out...the life which has all his way to walk has been left alone...
He called his mom...mama...mammma...with both tears and frustration with life...his cheeks became red...those small small hands..rubbing both the eyes who were busy shading tears on her mother's funeral...the cart falls from his hand...distracted he sat down with both his knees touching his chest...and crying out loud...
Manik comes out to find golu crying for his mother...manik walks to him...sat beside him...
Manik: mama kahin nahi gayi hai...woh yahi hai...hamare pass...
Lasy scene is seen manik and golu walking back to their house...manik carrying golu in his arms...golu is holding the same flying cart that Nandini buyed for him...

TRIBUTE TO ALL MOTHERA FROM ME ..THE WRITER...
FOR YOU MAMA...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb
Made me cry
Kyy mein bhi ek character thi.usko mama hote huye bhi mama ka pyar nahi mila tha.vo tha Manik.
Golu made remind him.
Gud .keep it up.
There r so many stories of u which i hadnt read becoz of my schedule.
Sorry for that.
This is really amazing.
Write more.atleast u dont leave writing in the forum.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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rula Diya na pagli

see I m crying now
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