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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Wow nice story 
All 4 parts are good 
continue soon 
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Part 5
While having dinner door bell ring
teji said i go any see who has come

Teji open the door and saw a little girl name hinaya ...
Teji are hinaya beta aap ...aap itni raat ko aur vo bhi akele
hinaya : badi maa mujhe heer didi se milna hai 
teji : ok beta chalo under aajo ...heer didi khana kha ri hai 
hinaya : ok badi maa
hinaya lives in nearby house of maan's house
teji : heer dekho kaun aaya hai
heer : kaun maa
heer looks and see hinaya ...and rush to her to pick her in her arms
heer hinaya ...kaisi ho tum 
hinaya : mei aap se naraz hu 
heer : mujhse meine kya kiya ab 
hinaya : aap mujhse milne kyu ni aai do din se
heer: oh soory bacha vo mei busy thi na isliye
heer : tumne khana khaya 
hinaya : no 
hinaya : di mujhe aapse baat krni hai
chalo phle khana kha lo phir bat krte hai 
all look towards hinaya 
lalit ask : balu yeh nanhi c pari kaun hai 
balraj : yeh hinaya hai pass ke ghr mei rehti hai ...
heer ke saath iski bahut bnti hai ...
heer chalo hinaya sabko hello bolo
hinaya : hello everyone m hinaya ...heer didi ki fav.
prem : ok hinaya aur hum sab ke liye
hinaya : herer didi kehti hai ajnabio se baat ni krte
heer : hinaya ab to aap mere ghr par ho ...aur yeh hamre relatives hue to yeh ajnabi kaise
yeh bhi sab apne hai
hinaya : ok
chalo ab khana khao
while eating the food hinaya face was sasd and heer has noticed her
heer : hinaya ap khana kyu ni kha rhe ...acha ni bna kya
hinaya : khana acha bna hai di but mera man ni hai ...
heer : kya hua hinaya sab thik hai
hinaya : heer didi ek baat bolu
heer : ha bolo
all r listening to them 
hinaya : while her tears flow down ...
heer didi aapne juth kyu bola ki sauteli maa achi hoti hai ...sauteli maa yashoda ka roop hoti hai ...meri maa kyu achi ni hai ...vo mujhse bahut nafrat krti hai ...mei manhus unke liye kya ...apke kanha ne meri maa ko kyu le liya mujhse ...
heer drop her food : hinaya tum yeh sab kya bol ri ho 
hinaya : mujhe sab pta hi heer didi ... aapne sabne mujhse juth bola ...
heer : hinaya meine aapse koi juth ni bola bacha 
hinaay : bola hai meri sauteli maa kabhi meri sagi maa ni bn skti ...mei jitna bhi acha krti hu vo mujhse nfrat krti hai 
heer : hinaya beta while removing her tears ...hinaya sauteli maa yashoda ka roop hoti hai ...vo bhi apne bacho ko utna hi pyaar krti hai jitna ki ek sagi maa krti hai ...
prem recollects her moments with her mom d both r having tears...
acha phle tum apna face wash krke aao meher ja hinaya ko lekr ja aur fir hum hinaya ke ghr chalte hai 
while hinaya went 
balraj : heer yeh sab kya hai ...hinaya yeh sab 
heer : bauji hinaya sach keh ri hai 
meine hinaya ke dil mei uski maa ke liye nafrat na ho isliye kha tha ...
but sach to yhi hai ki vo use kabhi bhi uski sagi maa jaisa pyaar ni degi 
but aj ni aj uhne sab sawalo ke jawab dene honge ...
balraj : mgr heer tum karogi kya ...
heer : pta ni bauji ...mgr aj agr ek bache ke dil se yeh baat nhi nikli ki sauteli maa bhi sagi maa hoti hai to koi bhi sauteli maa lane se darega ...aur maa ke pyaar se dur ho jayega ...aur aisa hum kabhi ni hone denge ...
bauji hum hinaya ko uske ghr tak chokr aate hai aur uske parents se baat krke aate hai 
balraj : heer tum akeli ni jaugi hum bhi saath chalte hai 
heer : nhi bauji aap tension mat lo mei aa jaugi jaldi 
balaraj : acha thik hai but tum prem ko saath mei lekr jao ...hum tumhe akele nhi jane denge
heer : mgr bauji ...thik hai jaise aap kehte ho ...
lalit : ha prem tum jao heer ke saath 
prem : thik hai bauji 
prem while thinkng yeh heer ka nazriya har chz mei alag hai ...sab ko ek jaisa hi dekhti hai ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
wow new update - will read tomo. ty 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
wow awosome part
love it
waiting for the next part
Heinaya is soo cute
and abhi henaya ke har par prem Heer kay kahe ge
waiting
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi Chanchan

I read all 5 parts 😃 wow so interesting. Hinaya is sweet. So sad she has been treated really badly by her step mother. Heer is sweet. Fun siblings. Preet and everyone. Woohoo.

Can't wait to see what will happen at Hinaya's house with her father, step mom and Heer Prem. hmm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
Woww chanchan awesome story yr love hinaya so much want to read more plz update soon ...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 6
Hinaya comes from washroom 
Heer : hinaya Chalo phle Khana kha lo phir hum tumhe ghr chod denge 
Hinaya : nhi heer di mujhe ghr ni Jana ...Vo mra ghr ni hai 
Heer : acha thik hai to hum KHI bhr chalte hai 
Teji: here is samye bahr 
Heer : while through eyes keep her mom to be quiet 
Heer : hinaya acha phle apne fav. Rasgule to kha lo 
Hinaya : humhe ni khana
Heer : Sachi nhi khana 
Hinaya : nhi 
Heer : thik hai mat khao 
Vaise yha par jitne bhi bache hai na hum sab ko rasgule bahut pasand hai ...Tum mat khana thik hai 
Member: ha hinaya tumhara share bhi hum hi khaa lenge 
Vaise heer Didi aage se aap Air bhi jayda rasgule banana
Lalit : heer yeh tumne banaye hai 
Heer: ji Chachu
Lalit: lao phir to hum bhi khayege
Heer : hnji zarur
Gaytri: lalit aap bache hai Kya ...
Heer: koi baat ni chachi ek plz
Gaytri: thik hai phir Tum hi hum sab ko khilao
Heer: thik hai
Heer went all of the elders d gave rasgula by her own hand
She comes to youngsters
First Preet : wao heer di ...Kya rasgule hai ...Aise to Canada Mei bhi ni milte the 
Heer : acha to lo AUR kha lo 
Vaise is me about bahut Kam reh gye hai ...Dekho kis kis ke nasib Mei aate hai ...
Heer said this while looking towards hinaya
Hinaya was moving her tongue ...
Now comes prem turn 
Heer moves her hand towards prem ...Suddenly hinaya comes a snatch bowl from heer 
Yeh rasgule mere hai .
Aur Koi ni khayege
All laugh at her cuteness 
Heer kha lo
Prem was looking towards heer hand ...As she has one rasgula
Heer : lo prem yeh rha tumhara share
Prem: heer Tum Kya khaogi
Heer: koi baat ni Tum kha lo 
Hinaya: of ho heer di Tum kha lo ke chkr mei Sara Ras niche gir rha hai ...
Hinaya : heer di half aap kha lo half prem bhaiya kha lenge ...
Preet : best idea hinaya
Prem was looking towards Preet 
As he know why he was saying this
Heer : prem r u OK with this
Prem: ya sure no issue
Prem in thoughts 
Prem was some how happy don't know the feeling 
He ate the rasgula half while heer ate rest of it ...
First time heer look into prem eyes 
Heer was so immensed into prem eyes ...So charm was in his eyes 
Sudden hinaya call her d she came out of her world 
Heer: ha hinaya 
Hinaya: Chalo heer di ...Mujhe ab ghr Jana hai 
Heer: ha Chalo Mei tumhe chod kr aati hu ...
Lalit: prem Tum bhi Jao 
Heer: Chachu iski koi zarurat ni hai 
Prem: looking towards heer d then his bauji
H wants to go with her 
Lalit: no heer u r not going alone 
Prem u go
Prem was happy 
Prem ji bauji
Heer: chale hinaya ...Chalo prem 
Prem : after u 
Preet come towards prem and said ...Good walk pb
Prem smiles d went 


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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
awosome part love premeer scean kay wo aab hinaya ke ghar gaye nahi?? plz continue
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Posted: 6 years ago
#19
Love this part... Love premeer sharing half half rasgulla n loved Heer looking into prem eyes.. Excited for further story..prem Heer Aur hinaya ke saath.. Plz update next partEdited by Trisha510 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20
Part 6 page 4

Cool update and Hinaya cute kid.
Heer' trick to get her to have sweet worked hehe 😆
Lovely scene with family 🤗