Okay, I wrote a short drabble, warning: it's short 😆
"M..Ma...Mama.. Bolo na, mama!"He heard her voice before he saw her.It had become a habit of theirs, Ayna brought the kids down to the lounge right around the time Mohsin was to come home from work. And so, the first sight he would see as he walked in was her playing with their kids. their kids. their. her.She'd smile at him and lift her eyelashes to peek at him before asking him "Aaj aapka din kaise tha?" And then she'd hand him whomever was in her lap, more often it was Asher than Tabi or Raania, grab his briefcase and walk over to the kitchen to get him a glass of water.When she was finally gone from his view, Mohsin would admit that he loved his kids, they were his kids, of course he loved them with all his heart and soul but what he craved and the only thing that would soothe his heart was her quiet question of "Aaj aapka din kaise tha?".But today was different.Today, he heard her voice say softly " "M...Ma...Mama.. Bolo na, mama!" She was encouraging the twins, who had began to murmur and make weird noises and words that only she was capable of understanding, as a mother would.So he had stopped himself from opening the door entirely and coming in, pausing in the doorway to see for the exchange between probably Ashar and Ayna continued." Anni!" Tabi squealed and just like that the moment broke. He saw as her face fell and was quickly but back in place."Yes Tabi beta...theek hai, abhi aap kay baba will come home, and we'll ask him..."She focused her attention back on the baby boy and encouraged him " A...An...Anni...Bolo Anni."Feeling something inside him drop, Mohsin opened the door fully and walked in." Aaj Aapka din kaise tha?" She moved to pick up Ashar so that she could hand the boy to him when she heard him say," Very bad. I have a headache. I'm going to go take a shower, please make me some chai."With that he dropped his briefcase and walked away.-----Finished 😳How was it, I wrote it fast, so maybe not so good? Also, the ending, I wanted to make it sweet but then i thought about it and seriously, this is mohsin we are talking about so ? 😆😉
Originally posted by: Fobby_FoSho
I wonder what Emmad's next starring role is. Hopefully his newfound fame will garner him some big attention and a leading role in a massive production.
^^ I did one on that, but Idk which thread or where it is now 😆
Edit: Posted below:I think there's a typo, and his last statement to Aina should be, "I have a headache. I'm going to take a shower. Please join me while khala makes tea ".:-)PS-Please forgive my almost raunchy day dreams!!!!!!!!!!! What's an over-stressed gal gotta do if not day dream about these two :-D
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Originally posted by: Fobby_FoSho
Why didn't KnK get the same treatment? Is mona not a forever wali story? 😭
HUM recently had a twice weekly show called "Deewana" that aired every Wed and Thurs. It started off well, but it was also a 40+ episode series, and I kid you not, the last twenty or so episodes were so boring, and in those last twenty episodes, maybe the last 2 weren't fillers. It was such a bore to watch...we should be thankful that the episodes still hold our attention and do try to advance the story."
OMG. Yes!!!!!!!!!! I loved Shehroz (?) and IQra in that show. And the soundtrack was so, so stunning!! And I so wanted a great end, and for a while, things looked like they were on track, but right after the two confessed their love to each other, it is like the writers and makers thought they could just phone-it-in. From episode 24-39, I think, we had nothing worth watching. It reached a point when I just had to tune into the show playing in my mind rather than the actual one. And once I'd quit the show, I suddenly found out about the last episode; had it occurred 15 episodes before, I'd have loved the entire series. Anyhow, yes, fillers abound on TV which is why I like watching entire seasons on Netflix, and just not watching the filler episodes. When you watch them as they are being transmitted, one episode at a time, you have no way of going around the filler episodes, which makes it a greater bummer in my opinion :-)
Originally posted by: -RisingAsh-
JNam
FQ and Ushna did another show together ? Whaaat :o which show ?
@Fobby,
on a serious note tho, I love KNK because its rooted in reality.No matter how many "dreams" we have and hope for that fairytale love, it's not real...( atleast I think so) ...that's part of the reason I am such a big reader/viewer, It makes the romantic in me happy 😆but I have a special place for reality based love stories...they make me hopeful, ya know? Makes you realize that love is not a one faceted story. and I may not ever have a fairytale lovestory but that doesn't mean love doesn't exist at all...Aina-Sajal, Sister's love.Aina-kids, Motherly loveI mean MoNa love each other, but it's not a "fairy tale" or a "forever and more /Romeo and juliet" wala love. it's much more concrete and solid. And tbh, sometimes that is better.( i hope that made sense and wasn't too serious) 😆
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