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Posted: 7 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

its beautiful chappy



Its my edit...its for this chappy which stuti wanted...tell me all that how it is??? Is it good??? Is it match to the point of the chapter...

Thank you
Chandrima



Beautiful! ⭐️


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Posted: 7 years ago
#82
The chapter we all were waiting for! It was just wonderfully written
Loved the whole update I am so curious to see what Sujamal will decide!
Great work and thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83
Ahah dreamy effectπŸ˜‰
Stuti ko Kuch toh hua hai, kuch ho gaya hai❀️

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Sharif ke dimag ki baati jaliπŸ˜† He deciphered the woman to be JodhaπŸ˜› and phataphat se the game about to be played😎. Isko Sujamal badam khilata hai kyaπŸ˜†πŸ˜† Idhar Sharif ne apna pyada chuna aur udhar pyada haazirπŸ˜†πŸ˜†-Samar. Voh sipahi ko Sharif ka muah bandh karna thaπŸ˜†πŸ˜† usne apni baat toh keh diπŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Ahah jungle mei mangal😳❀️

Chandni raat hai, tu mere sath hai
Kuchh hawa sard hai, dil mein bhi dard hai
Kuchh hawa sard hai, dil mein bhi dard hai
Dard be-dard hai, lab pe koyi baat hai



From somewhere in the woods to the river sideπŸ˜‰, yeh kaise hua.. chalte chalte yuhi kuch mil gaya thaπŸ˜†

and Cheap kurta!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ On stone!πŸ˜²πŸ˜†πŸ˜† really its going to be rough for bare skin, esp Jodha'sπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ghaas mei kya kharabi thiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† phir ghaas aa gayi, oh acha they rolling all over🀣 very wild lovers! did they go into the river also?πŸ˜‰


Ok, laughs aside, you have attempted to describe their love making in a very sophisticated and uptight manner😳⭐️


I didnt understand why Jodha thanked Jalal?😲 this was out of place.πŸ˜• It means that Jodha tricked him or forced him into their unisonπŸ˜’


On precap, Sharif ne popat kar diya Sujamal ka, Samar is his pawn but he is not realising that he will fall too.


WHERE IS FAKHR? She is missing from last so many updates

Edited by RamSiyaRam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84
Beautiful banner, wonderful job Chandrima.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85
Wow,one of the best banners I've seen!πŸ‘ It has everything..AkDha's passion and the witnesses to their passion..moon and water!
Wonderful job,Chandrima!πŸ‘πŸ‘ Who's Subhasree,BTW?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Wow,one of the best banners I've seen!πŸ‘ It has everything..AkDha's passion and the witnesses to their passion..moon and water!

Wonderful job,Chandrima!πŸ‘πŸ‘ Who's Subhasree,BTW?


Subhasree is Chandrima Di's ID name. πŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

Ahah dreamy effectπŸ˜‰

Stuti ko Kuch toh hua hai, kuch ho gaya hai❀️

Accha, to update padke aapko bhi kuch kuch hota hay? πŸ˜† Thank you for this beautiful review. 😳

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Sharif ke dimag ki baati jaliπŸ˜† He deciphered the woman to be JodhaπŸ˜› and phataphat se the game about to be played😎. Isko Sujamal badam khilata hai kyaπŸ˜†πŸ˜† Idhar Sharif ne apna pyada chuna aur udhar pyada haazirπŸ˜†πŸ˜†-Samar. Voh sipahi ko Sharif ka muah bandh karna thaπŸ˜†πŸ˜† usne apni baat toh keh diπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Sujamal kyu khilayega, Bakshi Banu khilati thi. πŸ˜† Sujamal should feed that Sipahi nut. πŸ˜†

Ahah jungle mei mangal😳❀️

πŸ˜‰

They are so cute. πŸ˜†

Chandni raat hai, tu mere sath hai
Kuchh hawa sard hai, dil mein bhi dard hai
Kuchh hawa sard hai, dil mein bhi dard hai
Dard be-dard hai, lab pe koyi baat hai

WOW!!!😳😳


From somewhere in the woods to the river sideπŸ˜‰, yeh kaise hua.. chalte chalte yuhi kuch mil gaya thaπŸ˜†

🀣 [=)))] 🀣

and Cheap kurta!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ On stone!πŸ˜²πŸ˜†πŸ˜† really its going to be rough for bare skin, esp Jodha'sπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ghaas mei kya kharabi thiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† phir ghaas aa gayi, oh acha they rolling all over🀣 very wild lovers! did they go into the river also?πŸ˜‰

🀣 🀣 🀣

The river wala idea didn't strike me then. πŸ˜› Thinking to rewrite. 🀣


Ok, laughs aside, you have attempted to describe their love making in a very sophisticated and uptight manner😳⭐️

Thank you. ⭐️


I didnt understand why Jodha thanked Jalal?😲 this was out of place.πŸ˜• It means that Jodha tricked him or forced him into their unisonπŸ˜’

Does this mean so??? 😲 Of-course I didn't mean it. πŸ˜› It was to add melodrama. πŸ˜† She was thanking him for the wonderful night, and Jalal also in mind was thanking her...both were thanking each-other. πŸ˜†


On precap, Sharif ne popat kar diya Sujamal ka, Samar is his pawn but he is not realising that he will fall too.

Hmmm...


WHERE IS FAKHR? She is missing from last so many updates

I can't decide where I should put Fakhr in all these confusions. πŸ˜† But she will come. πŸ˜‰

Word Count: 1

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Posted: 7 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: jasminegrewal98

The chapter we all were waiting for! It was just wonderfully written

Loved the whole update I am so curious to see what Sujamal will decide!
Great work and thanks for the pm dear

SO glad to see you loved it so much. πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: piya58

Supurb chappy
Thanku
Update πŸ‘

Thank you. πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90
U gotta really enchanting banner..
Its sooo magical.. Nd bold...
Awsmmm... 😳
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