Originally posted by: Senapatichandri
its beautiful chappy
Its my edit...its for this chappy which stuti wanted...tell me all that how it is??? Is it good??? Is it match to the point of the chapter...Thank youChandrima
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Originally posted by: Senapatichandri
its beautiful chappy
Its my edit...its for this chappy which stuti wanted...tell me all that how it is??? Is it good??? Is it match to the point of the chapter...Thank youChandrima
Word Count: 1
Sharif ke dimag ki baati jaliπ He deciphered the woman to be Jodhaπ and phataphat se the game about to be playedπ. Isko Sujamal badam khilata hai kyaππ Idhar Sharif ne apna pyada chuna aur udhar pyada haazirππ-Samar. Voh sipahi ko Sharif ka muah bandh karna thaππ usne apni baat toh keh diππ
Ahah jungle mei mangalπ³β€οΈ
Chandni raat hai, tu mere sath hai
Kuchh hawa sard hai, dil mein bhi dard hai
Kuchh hawa sard hai, dil mein bhi dard hai
Dard be-dard hai, lab pe koyi baat hai
From somewhere in the woods to the river sideπ, yeh kaise hua.. chalte chalte yuhi kuch mil gaya thaπ
and Cheap kurta!!πππ On stone!π²ππ really its going to be rough for bare skin, esp Jodha'sπππ ghaas mei kya kharabi thiπππ phir ghaas aa gayi, oh acha they rolling all overπ€£ very wild lovers! did they go into the river also?π
Ok, laughs aside, you have attempted to describe their love making in a very sophisticated and uptight mannerπ³βοΈ
I didnt understand why Jodha thanked Jalal?π² this was out of place.π It means that Jodha tricked him or forced him into their unisonπ
On precap, Sharif ne popat kar diya Sujamal ka, Samar is his pawn but he is not realising that he will fall too.
WHERE IS FAKHR? She is missing from last so many updates
Wow,one of the best banners I've seen!π It has everything..AkDha's passion and the witnesses to their passion..moon and water!
Wonderful job,Chandrima!ππ Who's Subhasree,BTW?
Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam
Ahah dreamy effectπ
Stuti ko Kuch toh hua hai, kuch ho gaya haiβ€οΈAccha, to update padke aapko bhi kuch kuch hota hay? π Thank you for this beautiful review. π³-------------------------------------------------------------Sharif ke dimag ki baati jaliπ He deciphered the woman to be Jodhaπ and phataphat se the game about to be playedπ. Isko Sujamal badam khilata hai kyaππ Idhar Sharif ne apna pyada chuna aur udhar pyada haazirππ-Samar. Voh sipahi ko Sharif ka muah bandh karna thaππ usne apni baat toh keh diππ
Sujamal kyu khilayega, Bakshi Banu khilati thi. π Sujamal should feed that Sipahi nut. π
Ahah jungle mei mangalπ³β€οΈ
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They are so cute. π
Chandni raat hai, tu mere sath hai
Kuchh hawa sard hai, dil mein bhi dard hai
Kuchh hawa sard hai, dil mein bhi dard hai
Dard be-dard hai, lab pe koyi baat haiWOW!!!π³π³
From somewhere in the woods to the river sideπ, yeh kaise hua.. chalte chalte yuhi kuch mil gaya thaπ
π€£ [=)))] π€£
and Cheap kurta!!πππ On stone!π²ππ really its going to be rough for bare skin, esp Jodha'sπππ ghaas mei kya kharabi thiπππ phir ghaas aa gayi, oh acha they rolling all overπ€£ very wild lovers! did they go into the river also?π
π€£ π€£ π€£
The river wala idea didn't strike me then. π Thinking to rewrite. π€£
Ok, laughs aside, you have attempted to describe their love making in a very sophisticated and uptight mannerπ³βοΈ
Thank you. βοΈ
I didnt understand why Jodha thanked Jalal?π² this was out of place.π It means that Jodha tricked him or forced him into their unisonπ
Does this mean so??? π² Of-course I didn't mean it. π It was to add melodrama. π She was thanking him for the wonderful night, and Jalal also in mind was thanking her...both were thanking each-other. π
On precap, Sharif ne popat kar diya Sujamal ka, Samar is his pawn but he is not realising that he will fall too.
Hmmm...
WHERE IS FAKHR? She is missing from last so many updates
I can't decide where I should put Fakhr in all these confusions. π But she will come. π
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Originally posted by: jasminegrewal98
The chapter we all were waiting for! It was just wonderfully written
Loved the whole update I am so curious to see what Sujamal will decide!Great work and thanks for the pm dear
Supurb chappy
Thanku
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