Hey!
So I am in a daze right now! What a beautiful story.👏👏
As a writer you do complete justice to the characters and how they have developed in the story and I love it.
The fact is I watched the entire series of Ishqbaaz in the last three weeks. So as you may realize, I am in Shivika zone and completely mesmerized by the strength of their characters. Moving on, I cannot believe my luck that this is the first FF I read about them, just for the reason of this being so beautifully portrayed. I read all the chapters in one go and went through so many emotions in one go. I would really like to appreciate a few of the many things I like about this story. So please allow me to go over-board in my appreciative monologue, because you deserve it.
1. I really really like the way you have maintained the essence of Shivika in this story. I mean agreed it is a completely different plot and they have different backgrounds as compared to the show, but something about their interactions in this story oozes the magic of them!
2. I like how level-headed the story is. Drama is an essential part of any story, a romantic one for sure but it makes sense because as a writer I think you have explored the emotional as well as the logical part of all the interactions. I absolutely love that about this story. It makes it easier to get connected to the stories when the flow of the story, specially reactions to a certain situation make sense. For example, the part where Anika comes to say goodbye before leaving for New York, I read the entire dialogue at least four times. It was beautiful. I realize the part about her hiding it all along was essential for the premise of this story, but I liked how you progressed with it. Clearly, I care about this story a lot😆
3. The other characters of the story hold their own ground as well. Sahil is the cutest. I am actually amazed, how much I like the idea of him running away from home at night. That bundle of cuteness. Maybe its because how Shivaay keeps going back to the wrinkled shirt and pajamas that were so ordinary for him.😉Tia was brilliant. 😃 OmRu are love! ❤️
I can probably say more. But it wouldnt do justice. So like I am sending all the applauses your way. This story has me hooked. Please continue writing. Waiting for their happier times. Also, did I mention I love your story😆?
Love
Pankhuri
P.S. - I like how much meaning Anika's OKAY has in this story. love love love it! Okay, I promise I am going to stop. 😳
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