Shivika FF : Fighting A Losing Battle :Chapter30 Part1 Pg144 - Page 76

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: llakshmisree

Amazing update.Emotional as well as heart touching.I think I will be as anxious as Shivaay till next update.


Shivaay's misery will end only when Anika wakes up and same is the case with all of us!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: _fati_

Carpe please please please please please please don't let her die after giving so much hope. I'll be crying then ๐Ÿ˜ญ and I know u will not let her die and when this will happen I am gonna thaaank you loads and one day if I'll meet u somewhere in the world I'll give u a tightest bear hug and gonna tell u how AHMAZING writer you are, u have an wonderful ability to hook your readers till last and last. U are exceptionally a great writer โค๏ธ



Your worry is misplaced..Anika is going to be okay..she's going to be more than okay. Looking forward to the bear hug that you've promised to give me๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ithihaas

Firstly, thanks Anu for posting 2 updates in the week.


I loved this update. I felt happy and sad at the same time. Your story always has both of these emotions equally. Loved the way Annika explained her situation with reference to Sahil.
I loved the conversation between Shivaay & Annika on the hospital bed. Its really heart breaking when you see them talking about their future when there is an every equal chance of that not happening. If it was so bad for a reader, I can understand the feelings that both of them might be going through laying on the bed in a hospital not sure about the next morning. Yet Shivaay gave her a glimpse into their future together and that might have actually have an impact during her surgery. She really could think of all those moments she wants to have with Shivaay in future and may be that will make her resolve even more to fight for them.
And that little first kiss in the end, it was both beautiful and heart breaking. Annika was worried, what if she never makes it ??? She had to have their moment right ? But Shivaay is more confident that she would return for him, for them.

Waiting for the next update !!! An emotional one .


I always look forward to your comments!! When shivvay loses hope Anika puts up a brave front and vice versa..so they really support each other well..and using sahil's reference was an improvisation..it wasn't planned. And you're right, a glimpse of the future that she can have may give her the strength to fight and win..and the kiss was her desperate attempt to take what she can because what if she doesn't make it?
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

cant comment too tense


Haha!! No problem! But you can relax..everything will be fine๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: angelshah

Awesome update
Loved it


Thank you๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: KashiTessa

I loved every single thing about this update and my most favourite part was the night when they discussed about their future, a future they are not sure they have to spend together.
Loved the update.
Waiting for next update impatiently.
Pl update as soon as you have time.


Thank you..yeah that night was indeed special!!
I've just started writing so it's going to take some time๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago
When are We getting the next update babe! Sitting on the edge of my seat here to see their happily ever after
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Carpe_diem


I always look forward to your comments!! When shivvay loses hope Anika puts up a brave front and vice versa..so they really support each other well..and using sahil's reference was an improvisation..it wasn't planned. And you're right, a glimpse of the future that she can have may give her the strength to fight and win..and the kiss was her desperate attempt to take what she can because what if she doesn't make it?


Shivaay knew that it was the current best option to go with the surgery, yet he was not able to convince himself because of the fear of losing Annika. So Annika showed him what he knew with Sahil's reference. Sometimes its necessary to show the mirror to see through your heart and mind.
Correctly said that kiss in the end was her attempt to have a part of Shivaay with her self if she doesn't make it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesummm story.
Add me to pm list pleasee
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: real12

It was sad, yet beautiful โค๏ธ. Your Shivaay gives major #boyfriendgoals. Its not about finding a perfect partner, its all about finding an imperfect who is perfect just for you. The way Shivaay is ready to change his lifestyle for Annika is just aww. The person who never believed in love and marriages is now talking about getting married and I can't help but cry *tears of happiness*. ShivIka talking about their future was plainly beautiful. Can't wait for the next update ๐Ÿ˜†


#boyfriendgoals #guyfriendgoals and maybe #husbandgoals (later)๐Ÿ˜†
True!! He tried to find the perfect match for himself but that's not the way to go about it. You cannot score or rate a person and then decide on the basis of that score. And Shivaay finally realized that. Anika is imperfectly perfect for him and he knows that and he's going to cherish that. He has come a long way but his growth is tangible unlike Anika's who has also come a long way from a girl who finds it difficult to share her problems and take a back seat while letting others helm the issue but it's difficult to measure her growth as she was already sorted. I hope i'm making sense and all i'm trying to say is that Shivaay needed more beating on the head than ANika even at the very beginning of the story.

Sorry for the long comment..i got carried away๐Ÿ˜†
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