Love Maya
Oh and thanks for the PM...๐ ๐
Yipee me 1st me 1st๐ฅณ
But Sry I'm late ๐ญI like the title of the FF a lot๐..read all the chapters..beautifully written..in luv with each character of ur story especially shaurya๐ณ jus can't stop admiring this caring sweet loving shaurya๐ณ๐ณI kno hw tensed t feels wen ur wedding s fixed all of a sudden nd very short tym period s left fa the wedding to happen๐..I can understand poor Mahek's feelings..Harish๐ก hope he doesn't create problems for mehrya in the future..Here also Svetlana s with the glass๐, liked the way Hw mahek gave her back..Kk nd ms chat s brilliant..Luv the way mahek calls shaurya ji๐ณ๐ณโค๏ธLuv the way shaurya makes mahek feel comfortable with him..๐ณ๐ณ๐ณU r a โญ๏ธ wonderful writer๐..nice update..๐๐ผu keep me waiting eagerly with the beautiful story๐ณ..
Originally posted by: -Thabassum-
Okay so harish Sharma..eventually wud drag SHAURYA to his empire in future...
I guess then mehrya wud face a lot of misunderstandings...right ???Mehrya chat as kk and ms...was cute...๐ณBit as shaurya and mehak was also good...I like the way u made Svetlana, hairsh's sister ..mehaks bus..Sounds different..๐Hope harish doesn't do anything stupid soon...Story is progressing very well kash...good job...โญ๏ธConti soon !!
Great story Kashish I read all the parts together.. i really enjoyed the interplay of characters .
This Mehak and Shaurya are very interesting
I already wonder what Shaurya's reaction to he the true intentions of Harish will be ..
Will it change his trust on Mehak ..
Will wait for it for it your next update ... PM me if possible
Originally posted by: vimikrao
Harish is selfish he would drag Shaurya into his side..making him ghar jamai eventually Shaurya will oppose for this, misunderstanding will creat between MehRya...Today MehRya were chatting it was cute, he knows about her but for her he is new...
Nice update & Thanks for PM
Originally posted by: Mayatwinjfan
Wow that was a nice chapter. I really like how the story is slowly unfolding. GOOD JOB! Please update the next chapter very soon.
Love Maya
Oh and thanks for the PM...๐ ๐
Originally posted by: shristi0706
Thanks alot for the pm Kashish. Definitely Harish's intentions would drive a wedge in Mehrya's relation. Loved their online chatting. since it's an arranged marriage, it will take Mehak to break the ice between them but I have full faith in Shaurya. He is going out of his way in making her feel comfortable about this alliance.
I m preparing myself for some heartbreak in future for Shaurya. I m sure u ll show him going through a lot of pain๐
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