you are mindblowing man! this is an insanneee storyy!! please publish these! they are soo well written ! hats off to you for paying attention to every minute detail so intricately! you really are brilliant kashish!👏
OKay before i start my story comment one particular act of shaurya stuck on with me.. him hitting mehek with a pillow pretending its vicky! that was a special moment in so many ways.. it reflected so many things in that small incident! and you portrayed it ever so beautifully...
From the very beginning till the end.. your characters went through a whirlwind of changes, struggles, emotions, yet their fundamentals remained the same.. love understanding support. Your Shaurya is THE dreamboy in so many ways and i will definitely fall short in expressing what a profound impact he left on me as a reader. He is inspirational.. every small action of his has an elaborate thought process behind it! the way you moulded this character from a fiercely loyal employee to a brutal beast of a businessman is astounding! His love for mehek was and always will be his biggest undoing as well as strength! its beautiful the way mehek stood up for her marriage despite and inspite of her trust issues, externalities and her inner turmoil. 'We become our choices' and they decided to fight their fate and rewrite their destinies.. what a wonderfully inspiring story kashish! i cannot thank you enough as a reader cuz you gift us such invaluable treasures carrying bits of your beautiful self without expecting anything in return ! heartfelt gratitude is all i can offer..
with love.
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