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Posted: 7 years ago
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Marble Meadow
Part1


Rk looked at bittuji s paper face.
"Bittuji don't fear.feel the thrill.."rk
"No thrill...Just fear"bittuji
Rk laughed.they saw a big grass land.the grasses were grown up to a height to hide the building .There was a small road in between.rk drove his car into the road.suddely he stamped on the brake and the car stopped with a screech.bittuji cried out of fear.
"What is it bittuji,y r u shouting...It's just a cat crossed the road.i braked to save it.nothing else"rk
"A cat?Black one?"bittuji
"Yes..."rk
Chief..It's a bad sign...Black cats are believed to be ghost.in morning they will be in cat form
And at night to the real form"bittuji
"Wow ..Bittuji you had got so many info about ghosts.do u had any ghost friend"rk laughed
"It's not a joke chief...My Nani used to say it and she once witnessed it."bittuji
"Oh really..Then y the ghost didn't attack her?"rk
"She used some holy bracelet"bittuji
"Bittuji...U are such an idiot...Holy bracelet..."rk
Rk started the car and drove .The black cat licked his paw and looked at the car with a strange expression.
"Here we reached bittuji"rk.
The rusted iron gate was closed and it was entwined by some plants giving it a terrified look .
"Bittuji...Go and open the gate"rk
"Chief...Me?"bittuji
"Oh.. ho..OK I will open"rk
Rk get out of the car and opened the gate .It made a loud sound."damn."..He wiped his finger with his kerchief.
"Chief...What's it?"bittuji went out of the car and asked
"Just some thorn"rk
Rk get inside the car and started the engine.he saw a black cat in the middle of the road looking at them.
"Chief...That black cat.i told u na"bittuji
"Shut up...It's another one "rk
He horned loudly.the cat moved from the road slowly and satiin the side looking at them
Bittuji glanced it.he felt like it is staring at him
."today I will be his feast"bittuji thought
They saw the mansion...It was fully faded giving it a ghostly look.
"Chief...It's really look like a Bhoot banglow"bittuji
"Yes...Nice look...Perfect for the story...I think bittuji we should shoot the film here."rk
"Here?"bittuji
"Yeah..."rk placed his hands like shooting."look...The first scene...Hero and his assistant reached the banglow...Now they are going to knock on the door...Before that... kr...The door opens by itself...And.."
Before he completed .The door opened by itself making the sound.
"Chief...The door"bittuji
Rk got startled.bittuji jumped towards him and hold his hand.they heard sound of anklet moving away .
"Chief..Sound of an anklet ..I told u."bittuji
"Let's go inside and check"rk
"No.. Chief.. Please let's go back"bittuji
Rk carefully walked towards the door and went inside .Bittuji followed him.
The room was neat and clean.Scent of fresh flowers were there.he saw some candles were lightened...
"Bittuji...There is nothing inside...May be an automatic door"rk said."something strange here"rk thought
"No... Chief..Who cleaned this room and those fresh flowers and candles.i feel like it's here..The ghost"bittuji
"But...Bittuji how did the ghost got all these...And is it welcoming us warmly?"rk
"It is gonna have a great feast to night.so y won't it welcome us"bittuji
They heard the clicking sound of a door knob and looked around and saw nothing."
"Chief..."bittuji was shivering in fear.
"Hello...Who is that...Come out...I don't believe in any of these ..Don't try to play with me.."rk shouted
His sound echoed in the room.no one came out .
"OK...If you r a ghost...We will have a friendly talk...I am here to write a story ...So let's don't disturb each other.what do u say?"rk
There was only silence except echo .
"Bittuji it may be some cats...And the caretaker may have cleaned it."rk
"Do cats wear anklet chief?"bittuji
"Forget it...I will call sultan to ask about the caretaker"rk took out his mobile
"Damn...No connection..Bittuji give me your mobile"rk
"No connection for my mobile too.we are trapped chief"bittuji
"Let's found a room to rest...I have to freshen up."rk
"I am also coming with u"bittuji
They took a tour of the house and found out the bedroom.
The bed was nearly covered.fresh duvet was theresome fragrant candles were lit in the room.
They entered and saw a beautiful bouquet of red roses and a card tug on it.
Rk took it and read."welcome.. Mr Rishab kundra."
"Chief..The ghost know your name and attracted you here"bittuji
"No...Bittuji it's by some human..May be that care taker.i am going to have a bath"rk
Rk entered the bath room and he saw the tub is filled with warm water and rose petals in it.the whole room was adorned with red roses and fragrant candles.
Rk took bath and went out of the room.he saw bittuji staring at something.
Rk followed bittuji s gaze and saw a family photo .A man with his wife and two children.
"Chief ...I think he is shamsher Malik."bittuji
"May be.."rk
"Where did they disappear?I think they became ghost and now haunting us."bittuji
"Bittuji..Do u want to share this room or else use the other one?"rk.
"No chief...I will stay in this room"bittuji
"OK...Then take a shower ...I will find something to eat.."rk
"Eat...In this Bhoot banglow?"bittuji
Bittuji went to bath and rk searched for the kitchen.he went to the dining room and the food was kept ready on the table.he opened the lid
"Wow parathas and dal,chicken kabab"rk
"Chief u made food in minutes?"bittuji
"Not me someone else"rk
"Ghost?"bittuji
"Whoever it is I am very hungry...I gonna take it.iff u want it you can join or else go and sleep"rk
"No ..I am hungry too"bittuji
They served food and began to eat
"Wow...Very delicious.anway our ghost is a good cook"rk
"Chief ghost possess supernatural powers.it is making us attracted to it.so that it can have us in ease"bittuji
They heard a vague laughter and sound of an anklet.Bittuji and rk stood up and looked at each other



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aishu007 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
superb update chechi..
waiting fpr madhu's entry..
update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
Awesome update.I feel as I am watching a horror movie.perfect setting.fragrant candles,fresh flowers ,warm water n delicious food n sound of anklets.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
👏👏👏 excellent part, very well written and absolutely humor that too within a ghost story...

very well written.. ❤️ 🤗

Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
Awesome update dear
I m really curious to know who did all this ??
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Rach loved the update, it's fantastic
RK reached the mansion and everything is neatly arranged, waiting for Madhu's entry.
Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
Super update ka.
Comedy horror story..
Loved it ..
Rk is so brave..Who is in there?
Bittuji is so weak .He is going to faint..
Update soon..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
superb update
rk is in full mood to face this ghost
but seriously who is doing this?
its a ghost or someone else?
thanx for pm Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Awesome update..
Madhu's entry is on the way..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
😛hi thank u for the pm...lovely narration...the whole scene was running in view ...that fantastic...waiting for the next ...👏⭐️
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