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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
nice update manik and nandini friends bonding super then manik in jealous awsum
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Great update Akhi
Finally Manik ko bhi kuch kuch hone laga hai
Pls update soon
Thanks for pm Neha dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Mein kya kahun
I didnt commented to the story yet
Because i just read it now.
I read thirdchapter to tenth chapter in one go
That means story is very very interesting
First manik nsndu se gussa hoghaya
Phir sorry.then he came to her house to stay
Poor manik no one wished him in birthday.
Phir usne druv and nandu are made for each other🤣
Nandini was so angry
Nandini s silly plans to make him come close to her
And how could i forget ? She cookd food for him.
Sab druv ne hi bata diya tha usko😆
Akhi neha really gud work guys
Your story makes me laugh so much
Nandu s silly antics
Finally manik ko jealousy bhi aagays
I loved it
I hadnt time to read it before because of my studies
Isliye comment nahi kiya
Sorry


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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
So cute love story continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
@Jackvijay:hi.I will write it but neha is not here to post.Dont know where is she
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#76
friendship day 😛

Nandini: What happened?Why did you stop the bike?
Manik: to kya sab ko dikhau ke manik apne saath larki ko leke ghumta hain.Kya kya baate honge pata hain?Ab itna to tum chalke jaa hi sakti ho.Utro.
Nandini gets off from his bike and said thanks and start walking but manik stop her.
Manik:kaha ja rahi ho?Meri baat abhi tak khatam nehi huyi.Kal se ready rehna.Main tumhe roz apne saath college launga.Understand?
Nandini was super happy and nods is yes.
Manik:ab jati kyun nehi.
(scene changed)
manik's friends are back in town.
Manik:seriously abhi,sab aagaye bas tune hi late kiya.
Abhi:sorry bro.Hum nehi the jab tujhe hamari zarurat thi.
Manik:it's ok.Sab theek hain.My neighbor's family is very nice.I enjoyed their company...
Abhi:waise abhi tere dad ke saath kaisa chal raha hain?
Manik:theek hain..
Abhi: really? Sab theek hogaya?Koyi problem nehi? Woww.
Manik: oye!! Jeyada mat khush ho.Hum lar nehi rahe iska matlab yeh nehi sab theek hain.We are still the same.Dont expect more than that.
Abhi:but..
Manik: no ifs and buts..Dismis. You all rehearse,i'm going outside.
cabir:kaha jaa raha hain.Canteen?Please mere liye kuch khane ko lana.Pizza,kuch samosaa aur... Manik:tu chup kar bhukkar kahi ka.Nehi ja raha main canteen.Tu practice me dhyaan de.
Manik come out from there and start walking but stop seeing someone sitting on a bench near garden. It looks like nandini.
He start going near her and put a hand on her shoulder. She look up. He saw tear in her eyes.But why? Manik sit beside her.
Manik:what happened?Why are you crying?You were ok some time back.Kya kisine tumhe kuch bola?
Nandini nods in no.
Manik:then what?
Nandini did not say anything. Manik shout to scare her.
Manik:TELL ME OR ELSE...
Nandini:i have a test today.And i forgot about that.
Manik:how?Tum to class me 2nd aati ho,aur tum study karna bhul gayi? Hawww!
Nandini start crying more.
Nandini:stop making fun of me.Dhruv ne bola tha woh help karega par ab woh nehi hain.Itna sab ho raha tha tum logo ke saath,main parhai me dhyaan nehi de payi.
Manik got serious.
Manik:what.Mere liye?Naduuu!Ok main tumhe help kar deta hoon.
Nandini:tum?Tum kaise karoge!Tum to khudh hi...
Manik:main khudh hi parhai me week hoon,yehi bolna chahti ho na?I know main itna accha nehi hoon parhai me but main yeh sab pehle solve kar chuka hoon.Bohot baar to main help kar sakta hoon.Acche number na sahi,fail to hone nehi dunga.Bolo chahiye help?
Nandini nods,
manik:ok ab dikhao kya samajh nehi aa raha.
Nandini shows him books. Seeing all this manik got scared.He was not at all good in all this.But he doesn't want nandini to know it,
manik:Yeh, yeh to bohat asaan hai. Kya yaar tumhe yeh nehi aata.I'm dissppointed with you.
Nandini lowered her head like a kid.
Manik:it's so simple.
Nandini:tum mujhe sikhao.Main jaldi sikh jaungi.
Manik gulps. He doesn't know what to do now but suddenly he got an idea.
Manik:milgaya.
Nandini:kya milgaya?
Manik:ab abb a woh woh mere apne music ke liye ek tune mil gaya.Tum yaha ruko.Main thori der me aata hoon.
Nandini:kaha?Main bhi aau?
Manik:no no.Tum yehi pe ruko.Main abhi aata hoon,kahi mat jana.
Nandini:par book leke kyun ja rahe ho,suno.Kaha gaya
(scene changed)
manik was searching someone from his class.
Manik:beta manik,larki ko promise to kardiya par poora kaise karega?Pehle jo parha tha woh to bhul ke khaa gaya?Jo bhi ho,uske samne apne izzat ka faluda mat kar.Usko to pass karwa na hi hoga.Bas woh kameena mil jaye.
Manik notice his classmate.Who is topper of their class.A complete nerd.When he noticed manik he start walking fast.Because manik always bully him.
Manik:OYE!RUK.BHAG MAT.
he rund faster behind him and caught him by his neck.
Manik:saale.Bohot fast chalne laga hain aaj kal.Mene bola tha na rukne ke liye.Bhaga kyun ha? Boy:mujhe jane do.Mene khuch bhi nehi kiya.
Manik:chup.Ab mere paas tere liye waqt nehi hain.Tu mujh yeh samjha.
Manik shows him the book.
Manik:jaldi sikha.
Boy:ha sikhata hoon.
He teaches manik everything.
Manik:samajh gaya.Sab samajh gaya.
Manik star pulling that boy's ear
manik:wah bohot hoshiyar hain re tu..Chal jaa.
That boy run away.
Manik:ab jake nandu ko samjha deta hoon,kahi main phirse na bhul jau.
On the other side nandini was restless there.
Nandini:kaha hain manik?20minute hogaya.
Manik:here i am.Chalo let's start.
Manik start making her understand everything which he learned from his classmate.
Nandini:wow manik.Tum to sach me bohot acche se samjhaya.Ab to pass ho kar rahungi.
Manik smile.
Nandini looked around.Everyone was wishing happy friendship day to each other.
Manik notice nandini's face.She was sad again.
Manik:now what?
Nandini:you know,har friendship day pe dhruv mere saath tha.Ham ek saath bohot maze karte the.Ab jab woh nehi hain,i'm just alone.I don't have any friend other then dhruv.
Manik could not see her crying anymore.He wipe her tears and forward his hand in front of her. Manik:nandini,will you be my friend?
Nandini was surprised but very happy.Nandini accept and handshake with him.
Nandini: Of course I will be lucky to have friend like you.
Manik take a chocolate from his pocket and give it to her.
Nandini remember their childhood memories.
Manik:i'm forgetting something.OH SHIT.My friends.I have go.Good luck for your test my new friend.
Manik leave from there.Nandini was lost in her dream land but soon have to come back because of her test.She also run to her classroom.

Next:
Dadi:hello manik.
Manik:ha dadi boliye!
Dadi:tum ghar pe ho?
Manik: ji ha.
Dadi:jaldi hamare ghar me aao.
Manik:dadi kya hua?Aap gusse me kyun hain.
Dadi:tum jaldi aajao.Aaj to faisla hokar rahega.Bohot sun liya.Ab aur bardaasht nehi hota.Aaj to is matter ko main finish karke rahungi.
She cuts the call?
Manik what have you done now?Oh God save me.

Next update after 9th may.. Okthanksbye 😛
Chapter credit goes to akhiawal
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
manan friendship super and manik teaching to her awsum
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
Awesomeee...thnx for pm me...manik ne phle sikha phir nandu ko samjhayea...lovd it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Wow superb update
Now why Dadi is so angry?
Will be waiting for the next part
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
eagerly waiting for next update asap
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