Manan Ss: Tere Pyar Men (chapter 12 updated) - Page 7

Feeling really sad for Nandini 😭

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He cares

She wipes her tears & opens the door, Manik was smiling at her leaning on the door, she bangs the door on his face & without locking it sits on the bed clutching a cushion...
Manik comes inside & watches her sitting on her bed, pouting and clutching a cushion, her cute face was doing nothing but instigating him to laugh out loud but he knew he has to control himself otherwise she would throw him out of the room this time. So he suppressed his laugh & took a deep breath & and came inside. He sat on bed and called her.
Manik: Nandini
She turned her face other side indicating him that she is angry.
Manik: Nandini

Saying this he held her hand she looked at their hands & glared him & turned her face away.
Manik: Okay Baba sorry I know I shouldn't have laughed.
Nandini looked at him with teary eyes seeing her in tears he was taken aback for a moment, he squeezed her hand & said
Manik: Agar mujhepata hota k tum itni si baat par rone lagogi to men kabhi nhn hansta I am sorry.
Listening to him she smiled a little. "he cares" she thought.
Seeing her smiling a wide smile came on his lips in an instant.
Manik: That's like a good girl.
He said having wide smile.
Manik: Wese ek or baat kahun? If you don't mind?
Nandini: Han bolo na.
Manik: Wo actually tumne bohat bohat bohat bura gaya, itna bura k
Nandini cuts him in between
Nandini: Manik!
Saying this she threw the cushion on him which was in her hand till now.
Manik: Arey Kia manik! Sahi to bol raha hun..
Nandini: Manik tum kabhi nhn sudhroge na? Get lost.
She got up & and dragged him out of her room, he left after saying
Manik: Chooroonga nhn tumhen!
Nandini: Han thek ha mat chorna! Go now
She was smiling to herself when he came back shocking her.
Manik: Wese nandini
Nandini: Huh!
He came close to her & whispered in her ear..
Manik: You know aj Sara din tum
He moved back without completing the sentence, she was confused & the very next moment he pulled her both cheeks while saying
Manik: Tum aj bohat cut lag Rae thi kiddo.
He left her cheeks & ran away.
Nandini: Manik! She yelled
Manik yelled back "yes kiddo"
Nandini: Arrrghhh!

Next morning
Manik was going out when dadi asked him
Dadi: Manik college ja Rae ho beta?
Manik turned back and replied
Manik: Arey no dadi won't be going to college for two or three weeks..
Dadi: Why? What happened?
Manik: Wo dadi festival week is going on that's why..
Dadi: Okay... Did you have your breakfast properly?
Manik: Yes dadi.. Okay bye see you soon..
Manik came out of home when Dhruv came
Dhruv: Bhae
Manik: Hey dhruv
Saying this he hugged dhruv..
Dhruv: How are u bhae?
Manik: I am perfectly fine.. U tell what's going on?
Dhruv: Hmm everything is fine..
Seeing his face manik understood that dhruv is tensed.
Manik: Hey buddy u look tensed! What happened?
He asked keeping his hand on dhruv's shoulder..
Till now dhruv was looking down but when manik asked he couldn't control himself, he looked up, his eyes were full of tears.
Dhruv: Bhae dad is not feeling well since few days, please come back na..
He said hopefully..
Manik: Oh so that's why u are tensed, but dhruv he'll be hospitalized if I come in front of him... Don't you know that!
Dhruv: Bhae aesa
Manik: Dhruv! Don't defend him in front of me
He said showing his hand to dhruv..
Dhruv: Bhae please
Manik: Bye dhruv take care..
He said patting on his shoulder and left..
Dhruv: Pata nhn kab dad and bhae ke beech sab theek hoga!

With this I conclude the chapter
Credit doesn't go to akhi 😆
Okthanksbye 😃

1 st comment mera yuppee

manik naughty super he tease nandini the way nice eagerly waiting into them friendship next

Finally read your update😊 nice chapter, waiting for more manan moments😳

Selfish am I?!


9:10 pm
nandini was very tensed for manik nandu peeps in manik's room but manik was not there so she start searching for him she hears guitar tune from terrace she start going there and see manik was playing guitar manik's eyes was close and he start singing..
tujhse naraz nehi zindagi_hairaan hoon main..hairaan hoon main.. teri masoom sawalo se pareshaan hoon main_ho pareshaan hoon main. jeene ke liye,socha hi nehii_dard samhaal ne honge.. muskuraye to_muskurane kee_karz utaarne honge... muskuraa kabhi_to lagtaa hain.. jaise hotho pe_karz rakha hain..
(nandini sit beside him) tujhse naraaz nehii zindagi_hairaan hoon main... hoo hairaan hoon main.. manik open his eyes and look at nandini who was smiling at him..
manik:what? aise kya dekh rahi ho..
nandini:tum apne dad ke liye pareshaan ho mujhe pata hain.
tumhe apne emotions unse chupane nehi chahiye..they love you.
manik: no they don't. i'm just a burden for dad..
nandini:aisa nehi hain woh bas tumhare harkato ke waja se pareshaan hain...
manik gets angry hearing this.. manik: what did you just say?harkate?aur kya hain meri harkate?
nandini:manik relex main main to tumhare bhale ke liye bol rahi thi.ab dekho,tum apne chote bhai ke birthday pe bhi nehi aaye.unko kitna bura laga tha.. manik:unko bura laga?unko kabhi yeh nehi laga ke mujhe kitna bura larta hoga jab mere birthday pe koyi mujhe wish tak nehi karta..aarrey haa,main kaise bhul sakta hoon ke mere birthday ke din meri mamma ka death hua tha..yaad hain na woh accident,jab mamma zaroori kam ke liye apne dost ke paas ja rahi thi aur woh accident hua. nandini looks down.. manik:isiliye na mujhe apne birthday se koyi lagav hain,aur na hi kisi aur ke..koyi nehi samajhta mujhe,koyi nehi..
nandini:main samajhti hoon tumhe..
manik look at her and then smile..
nandini:manik kam se kam tum apne ma ke bareme jante to ho,mene to apni maa ko dekhi bhi nehi..
manik:par tum nehi samjhogi.tum apne maa ke saath rahi bhi nehi.to tumhe unke na rehne ka jeyada dard bhi nehi hota,par main, meri mamma mujhse sabse ziyada pyar karti thi,main har waqt unke saath hi rehta tha.unke jane ke baad main kabhi pehle jaise nehi ban paya..aur yeh baat dad kyun nehi samajhte..
nandini dont know what to say nandini:ab bas chalo so jao.baad me baat karte hain.
manik: oh god.har waqt so jao so jao..hitler..
nandini laugh.they both went back to there room.
Next day at 6:30 pm
manik and anuraag were talking randomly when door bell rang. Nandini opens the door and was surprise seeing raj in front of her.
Nandini: uncle aap? Please come inside.
Anuraag: aarrey raj bhai sahab.
Manik was silent Raj was looking at manik.
Raj to anuraag,
raj: sorry,aap ko bina bole aagaye.Main..Main woh..Manik ko ghar wapas le jane aaya hoon. Everyone was happy except manik.He was still angry. Raj:manik beta ab ghar chalo.Tumhe jaise rehna hain tun rehna,main kuch nehi kahunga. Manik didn't listen to him and left from there to his room.Rajeev feel's very sad.
Anuraag:aap chinta mat kijixe.Main usse baat karta hoon. Anuraag goes to manik and sit beside him.
Manik:mujhe unke saath wapas nehi jana.Koyi value nehi hain waha mera.Aur na hi woh mere liye chinta karte hain. Anuraag:tumhe kisne bataya.Manik tumhe pata hain woh tumhare liye kitna pareshaan ho rahe the.Mujhe bar bar phone karke tumhare bareme puchte hain.Woh to pehle hi tumhe lena aana chahte the. Par mene mana kiya tha.Maaf kardo. Manik was in tears.Manik hug anuraag.
Manik:thanks for helping me.Uncle aap nehi hote to pata nehi main kaha jata.I'm ready to go.
Anuraag:yeh huyi na baat. Nandini!
Nandini come running to there room.
Nandini:ha papa?
Anuraag:beta manik ka bag pack kardo,woh ja raha hain.
Saying this manik and anuraag come out of there room. Nandini:arrey waah.Manik aur uske dad ke beech sab theek hojayega.Ab manik wapas chala jayega.
And nandini got alert. Nandini:manik chala jayega?Ab woh mere paas nehi rahega. And she starts crying.
Manik come to take his bag,but stop seeing nandini crying like that.
Manik:nandini.What happend?Why are you crying like someone is dead.Bolo.
Nandini try to stop her cry.But she could not stop herself and start crying loudly.
Manik:ruko main uncle ko bulata hoon.
Nandini: No no.Bolti hoon.Mere aankh me kuch chala gaya.Tum jao abhi.
Manik:take care of yourself.Manik take his bag and start going with his dad.

After manik gone,nandini was in her room still crying. Nandini:ab manik phirse mujhe pehle jaise behave karega.Kya hamari love story shuru hone se pehle hi khatam hogayi. She look at his window.It was still close. Nandini get a call.It was dhruv. Nandini:dhruv itni raat ko kyun phone kar raha hain?Woh to aisa kabhi nehi karta.Phirse kuch galat to nehi hua na?
Nandini:hello dhruv:kya hua?Is every thing alright? What she hear made her shocked.

Credit goes to akhiawal 😛
Okthanksbye...

Manik & his Dad's issues sort out ho gayi
Par phone pe kon se baat ho gayi jo Nandini shock ho gayi
Poor Nandu she is waiting for Manik's attention & love
Par Manik ko tho iska koi khabar hi nahi ya wo pretend kar raha hai Kya?
Pls update soon
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Care, jealousy eagerness

Nandini was shocked because it was non other then manik.Who addressed her as darling.
Manik: what happened sweetheart?
Nandini: manik.Tu_tum? This is dhruv's number right?
Manik: Yeah actually I don't have your number that's why called from dhruv's number. Any problem darling?
Nandini:no no... I have no problem
Manik: Were u crying? Eyes are burning still?
She wipe her tear and says
nandini:no..I'm fine now. So why did you call?
Manik: Why? Do i need to call you after finding reasons? Main aise hi phone nehi kar sakta? I called you to say thanks.
Nandini:thanks?
Manik: For taking care of me. For making me understand, for cooking tasty food for me.and most important.. For entertaining me with your silly acts
Manik laugh.Nandini pout.
Nandini: Don't make fun of me I'll cry.
Manik:no.Please aur mat rona.Tumhara rona dekh ke mujhe rona aa jayega.
They laugh.
Manik: Ok its too late I have to return dhruv's phone also. Take care sweety
After manik cut the phone nandini scream in happiness and start dancing on her bed. Nandini:darling,sweetheart,thank you,take care.Does he feel the same for me?Kya usko mujhse pyar hogaya?Yayy.After this she sleep.
One week later: this week was very boring for manik and nandini.They didn't talk to each other.Or should i say they didn't get any chance.Nandini missed him.And this time manik also missed her.But he himself don't know why.Dhruv is going on world tour for 1 month.He was taking raj's blessing.Manik was playing games sitting in sofa.
Raj:khane peene ka dhyaan rakhna.Phone karte rehna.
Dhruv:aap dono bhi apna dhyaan rakhna.Larai mat karna bhai se.Bhai aap mujhe bye nehi bolenge?
Manik who was not giving attention to this, jokingly said
manik:ha take care,jaldi mat aana,aur ho sake to wapas hi mat aana.
Raj:*sigh*.
Dhruv laugh at this and hugged manik.
Dhruv:mujhe pata hain bhai,you will miss me.
Manik:miss aur tujhe?In your dreams chote.Accha koyi problem ho to mujhe bolna
dhruv:ok bye
Nandini come in their house with kheer for dhruv.
Nandini:may i come in?
Dhruv gets happy seeing nandini.Manik was super happy.Dhruv come in front of nandini,
dhruv:main tumhare paas hi jane wala tha.Yeh kheer tum mere liye layi ho na.
Nandini:ha,tumhare liye hi banayi hain.
Manik become sad and jealous also.
Nandini:i will miss you very much*crying*.
Dhruv:me too.
He get's emotional too.They hug.
(manik pov) again those two crying like they will never meet each other again.Main bhi yaha hoon.I also love kheer.Mujhe ek bar bhi nehi puchi kheer ke liye.Aur hug to aise kar rahi jaise mele me bichar gaye the.Mere bhi dost out of town gaye the.Par main to kabhi aise nehi roya.I wanted to talk to her.Par mujhe farak nehi parta ab.
(pov end)
manik:dad ab late nehi ho raha?
Dhruv stop this emotional drama. Dhruni broke there hug.
Dhruv:bye nandu.
Dhruv left from there.
Nandini:manik tumhe kheer khani hain kya?Aur bhi hain.
Manik become happy but control himself and said
manik:agar tum itni zid Kar rahi ho to lao.Bacha hua mere liye to nehi layi na?
Nandini:no.Alag se rakhe the.
Manik:good.
Manik was eating.
Nandini was sad so she left from there.
Next morning nandini was getting late for college.
(nandini pov) ufff nandu tu bhul kaise gayi dhruv nehi hain tujhe apne bike me le jane ke liye.Subha papa ke saath car me chale jana chahiye tha.Ab late ho jaungi.Auto bhi nehi mil raha. Manik come there with his bike.Nandini smile seeing him.
Manik:lift chahiye kya?
Nandini was shocked.
(Nandini pov)omg.Manik mujhe apni bike me baithayega.Usne kabhi kisiko apne saath baithne nehi diya.Apne dost ko bhi nehi.Haa bolu ya na.Jeyada bhao khayi,to kahi chala na jaye.
(pov end)
nandini sit behind him. nandini hug manik from behind and closed her eyes.Manik was surprise but did not stop nandini,in fact he felt good.They enjoy the bike ride.Manik stop the bike out side of their college.Nandini become confuse.
Precap:manan's friendship on friendship day

Chap credit goes to Akhiawal
Okthanksbye 😛

Nice update👏finally manik ko kuch hone laga 😳