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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Great update darlings
Eagerly waiting to read more
Pls write lamba wala update if possible
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This chapter's credit goes to Akhiawal...

Rude Manik

After 6 years
Murthy resident 1 p.m
nandu lunch is ready come here beta. Nandini's grandmother was calling her for lunch but nandini was busy at her daily work..That was staring at her love of life. Yes she loves him in these past years her feeling only grew for him. She wants to confess but is scared of his anger. Nandini thinks she is not his type, but still she has a hope that one day manik will reciprocate to her feelings But for now she can dream for him only..Manik was half laying in his bed and playing guitar. Eyes closed a small smile playing on his lips. Nandini becomes happy when he smiles.After some time he take off his vest It means he is going for a shower.Nandini close her window and sit on her chair and start writing her diary.
{NANDINI POV
hi dear diary. Yesterday it was dhruv's birthday, me my family and uncle arranged a party for dhruv. Dhruv was waiting for manik but manik didn't come. Dhruv felt hurt but But he didn't say anything. Another thing happend yesterday. Priya proposed manik in front of whole school, priya she always roams around manik tries to seduce him she is our senior just like manik She is very hot according to boys of college arrrgh!I hate her me and dhruv were standing there,i was very shocked and was about to cry but in next moment manik directly refused her. God at that moment I got my breath back. Everyone say that manik doesn't care about anyone's feelings but i don't think like that. Dadi:NANDUU!COME FAST BETAA!
Ok i have to go. Bye!
(scene changed)
Malhotra residence 8:24 p.m
Raj manik and dhruv were having dinner.
Raj: manik where were you yesterday?
manik: With my friends.
Raj: Manik do u even remember that you have a family? Yesterday it was dhruv's birthday he was waiting for you but no you don't care you only care for your friends. He was shouting now
Manik: Stop it dad he is not a kid that I will sing a happy birthday song for him he is 18 now.
Dhruv: It's ok dad bhai is right please don't be angry on him
Raj: See still he is supporting you learn something from your little brother manik. How much he loves you and u?Sara din awara gardi karte rehte ho.Parhai me to tumhara man hi nhn lagta. Sometimes I just feel like you are not my blood
manik: Just stop it. Shouts
I don't want to be like dhruv.
And dhruv i dont need your help understand? Stop forcing me for God's sake please.. Manik ran out of his house and was about to sit in his car just then nandini came out of her house and walked up to manik.
Nandini: where is dhruv? She asked him
manik was trying his best not to get angry on her
Manik: inside.
Nandini: can i meet him?
manik looks at her angrily nandini: Actually I want to take notes from him he is very intelligent.
Manik: Dhruv dhruv dhruv he shouts. Why do you keep following him everywhere don't you have any other work? Useless kahin ki. Nandini starts crying. She was very hurt. He never behaved with her like this Manik realized his mistake when he saw her crying
Manik: nan
but before he says something nandu run away from there..
(Manik pov)
shit. I should not have done this. I should say sorry. No no, manik malhotra doesn't say sorry to anyone. But she was crying like a baby. Oh god! What should i do?Let it be. Will deal with it tomorrow.


Okthanksbye 😛
Edited by StreamOfHeaven - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Character sketch after leap

Nandini Moorthy: A beautiful 17 year old girl, student of architecture. the epitome of innocence, nandini is loved by one and all because of her bubbly and friendly nature. Nandini is a person who believes in finding positivity in every situation be it a happy one or sad one her family and her love of life means everything to her. her looks are something you could kill for be it Indian wear or western this girl nails it all.


Manik Malhotra: A handsome 20 years old guy, student of architecture. Manik is singer and founder of band fab5. Manik is known for his arrogance and terrible temper. Though he is a beautiful person at heart, he chose to build walls around him due to fear of getting hurt

Cabir Dhawan: 20 years old student of architecture. Manik's soul brother, Mukhti's evil twin and the prankster of their group. Cabir, the 20 years old guy is extremely jolly person anyone would love having him around because wherever he goes he spreads happiness the drummer of fab5 having lost his parents at a very young age.

Dhruv malhotra: 18 years old. Student of Business administration Loves his bhae manik and cares for him. Attracted towards nandini and has named his attraction as love.

Aryaman khurrana: Student of civil engineering, manik's childhood friend 19 years old. Member of fab5. Rich spoilt brat A good friend of manik also his parents live in USA he lives alone.

Abhimanu thakar: 20 years old, student of Architecture. Handsome guy with clever mind. Negativity can't even touch his friends when he is around. Plays piano. Member of fab5 has a crush on mukhti. He always tries to make manik understand that his dad is right on his place but fails miserably.

Mukhti Dhawan: Mukhti is same as she was in kyy. She is student of Mechanical engineering 20 years old.
Edited by StreamOfHeaven - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice chapter akhi and Neha .Now waiting for manik's pov😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Dear amazing part Neha & Akhi
Well written
Waiting for Manik's POV
Pls update soon
Thanks for pm
Eagerly waiting to read more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice chapter dear...I loved it. Cont soon. Thanks for pm.
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Originally posted by: pn_92

Nice chapter akhi and Neha .Now waiting for manik's pov😊



Thanks pooja 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: aseelashah

Dear amazing part Neha & Akhi
Well written
Waiting for Manik's POV
Pls update soon
Thanks for pm
Eagerly waiting to read more



Thanks aseela 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: manancraze

Nice chapter dear...I loved it. Cont soon. Thanks for pm.




Thanks swarna 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This chap credit goes to akhiawal

Guilty Manik

Next morning at dinning table: Raj: dhruv, where is manik? Dhruv: Dad he is in his room getting ready for college.
Meanwhile Manik comes out of his room and without looking at them he left for college.

At college:
Manik goes to jamming room and see his one friend already there.
Manik: Hey buddy what's up?
abhi: Hey Manik, so what happened in your home?
Manik: How do you know something happened?
Abhi: You came early so I thought something must have happened! Manik smiles on his understanding friend.
Manik:puch mat yaar! Mogambo is again on his angry mode.
Abhi: hahaha, what happened now?
Manik: Nothing, again that old boring lecture learn something from your brother concentrate on studies blah blah. Acha where are evil twins?
Abhi: Don't know must be fighting in some corner,
and they enter the room while mukhti shouting on cabir.
Cabir: Dekh mukhti bohat bol Lia tune ab Chup hoja or else!
Mukhti: Or else what?
She shouts and pics up a drum stick ready to beat him.
Abhi: There they are
manik: Stop it guys what happened?
Mukti: Manik I was so hungry and that bhukar ate my pizza. She said while glaring cabir.And on top of that he is not saying sorry even!
Cabir: Why should i say sorry? I was hungry so i ate it. Tu bhi to kitni bar khati hain mere cheezen. On hearing the word sorry manik remembers his misbehavior with nandini
Manik: Ok ok quiet, I am also hungry so I will go get something from canteen.
And he left from there without listening to anything.
Nandini was in garden of their college.
{NANDINI POV}
I shouldn't have gone there. No one has behaved with me in my whole life not even teachers.
POV ends.
Manik see nandini standing alone so he calls her from behind.
Nandini gets scared and starts walking away, she was pretending that she hasn't listened to him. manik understands her trick and comes in front of her. Nandini becomes shocked.
Manik: Why did you run hearing my voice? He says confusingly Nandini: I didn't hear you.
Manik: Chal jhooti! Acha listen. I am so--- sorry about yesterday's incident. Nandini was surprised She didn't expect a sorry from The Manik Malhotra.
Manik: Look I am saying sorry because ummm
manik doesn't know himself that why is he saying sorry
Because you are my brother's friend and and you are a kid yes you are kid that's why and I don't fight with kids.
Nandini who was blushing till now, pouts and says
nandini: I am not a kid
She says while making a cute face.
Manik: Then what are you?
He says this in a teasing way nandini: I am cute 17 years old will turn 18 in few months like dhruv.
Manik: Okay then first turn 18 then talk to me. KIDDO
He emphasizes on word kiddo and pulls her cheeks. After earning a glare from her Manik leaves from there smilingly. Nandini start blushing.
BG music
Tu aata hain cheene me, jaab jaab saase bharti hoon. Teri dil ki galliyo se, main har roj guzarti hoon. Hawa ki jaise chalta hain tu, main ret ki jaise urhti hoon. Koun tujhe you pyar karega jaise main karti hoon. Haa..Haaa,aaah,haa

nandini see manik while he is laughing with his friend's and smile at him. Nandini in classroom and thinking about manik and her childhood. Meri nazar ka safar, tujh pe hi aake ruke Kehne ko baaki hain kyaaa, kehna tha jo keh chuke

nandini remember the time when she was 5 year's old and was crying for her mom and manik give her his chocolate

meri nigahe hain, teri nigaho pe, tujhe khabar kya bekhabar, main tujhse hi chup chup kar teri aankhein parti hoon

she remember the time when she wanted to play with manik but his friend say no.Manik keep her for bringing ball.They hit the ball and it fall on mud.Manik was upset but little nandu jump in the mud and bring manik's ball,he was happy
koun tujhe you pyar karega, jaise main karti hoon...


Next chap will contain manik pov

Okthanksbye 😛
Edited by StreamOfHeaven - 7 years ago
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