Manan Ss: Tere Pyar Men (chapter 12 updated)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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*Prologue*
(Dhruv POV)
Today on diwali I am gonna tell nandini about my feelings. Almost everyone has left what if nandini too no no I should go and check on her. With this thought dhruv left from his room towards hall but stopped in mid way watching the scene. He saw that nandini is collecting her fallen purse's things from ground but she is bending down in a way that her dupata is not covering her bare back. Manik is standing behind her staring her bare back and smiling like a fool. And then he started clicking her pics in that state. Watching that druv became furious.
{Dhruv} how can he do this? He is watching nandini with lust!! Since many days i am noticing that he is trying every possible way to be near Nandini. Nandini is so innocent, I have to keep nandini away from bhae.
Dhruv: What happened nandini? Still here?Manik hides his phone.
Nandu: I was just leaving
Dhruv:ok come I will drop you.
Dhruv takes nandu away from manik.
Dhruv:nandu stay away from bhae.
Nandu:why dhruv what happened?
Dhruv: Bas mene bola na
Nandini: Ok
She said confusingly...

Okthanksbye
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting ๐Ÿ˜ณ waiting for your next update๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Aww .. Druv .. Gentleman ..manik.. Prevert??
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Posted: 7 years ago
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@soothu: no! Dhruv gadha. Aage batayenge..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKHIAWAL

@soothu: no! Dhruv gadha. Aage batayenge..




Tu reh nhn payi na reply kar hi Lia akhir ๐Ÿ˜†
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Sach neha.Mujhse raha nehi jata..
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Character sketch
manik malhotra: 14 years old..After his mom's death he became reserved.. He doesn't share a good relation with his dad because he hates music.


Dhruv malhotra: 12 years old. sweet boy good in studies his neighbor is his best friend.. He has a secret crush on her.


Raj malhotra: a business tycoon Very strict father.. Loves his both sons but doesn't share a nice relation with manik because he wants to become a singer and he hates music because of a dark secret.

Nyonica Malhora: died when manik was 8 years in an accident.


Nandini murthy: 12 years old dhruv and manik's neighbor and dhruv's classmate also. She has a secret crush on manik but is scared to tell him..


Anurag Murthy: owns a news channel Nandini father lives with his mother and nandini. He loves nandini so much.

Sanjana Murthy: nandini mother died after some days
of her delivery..

Other characters will be introduced after leap ๐Ÿ˜›
Okthanksbye
Edited by StreamOfHeaven - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oppss..eita actually k likhse? Akhi na neha? But je likhuk amr sei lagse. Manik to manik...nandini k dekhbe r suru hoye jabe ๐Ÿ˜†
Dhruv ๐Ÿค“
Loved it.
cont soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: manancraze

Oppss..eita actually k likhse? Akhi na neha? But je likhuk amr sei lagse. Manik to manik...nandini k dekhbe r suru hoye jabe๐Ÿ˜†

Dhruv๐Ÿค“
Loved it.
cont soon.
PM me for next.




Yaar tum Bengalis bhool kun jate
Ho k hamen bangali nhn ati.
Mujhe ek word bhi samajh nhn aya
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Originally posted by: StreamOfHeaven




Yaar tum Bengalis bhool kun jate
Ho k hamen bangali nhn ati.
Mujhe ek word bhi samajh nhn aya

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