New Asya ss~Mai Tera Hero~Part 10 is updated on page 128 - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Interesting Start
Enjoyed Reading It
&
Curious about what will happen next

So, Continue Soon
&
also count me in :-)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: -jass-

Interesting Start
Enjoyed Reading It
&
Curious about what will happen next

So, Continue Soon
&
also count me in :-)

Thank you dear
I am glad that you like it
next update will answer your curiosity 😉
I shall try to update soon
you are already in my pm list
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
omg
you are here with an update
I am in shocked
so asad leaves for mumbia to fulfil his and his mothers dreams
so had a feeling dilshad dreams of seeing person is zoya
and so said so done
so asad and zoya had their run in
oh boy it exploded
so he is searching gaffur his abu former friend
and the one daughter who he coincidentally crashed into or vice versa
imagine his shock
cont soon and pm plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: anopama

omg

you are here with an update
I am in shocked
so asad leaves for mumbia to fulfil his and his mothers dreams
so had a feeling dilshad dreams of seeing person is zoya
and so said so done
so asad and zoya had their run in
oh boy it exploded
so he is searching gaffur his abu former friend
and the one daughter who he coincidentally crashed into or vice versa
imagine his shock
cont soon and pm plz

Haha yes finally i am here
Yes the reason for him to coming Mumbai is to fulfill his and his mother's dream
well let's see whom Dilshad want to see and what will asad's assumptions regarding that
not only crashed but sent her in jail also and zoya is not the one to forget easily
I think I sent you pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
Hello Daljit
I am so happy that you updates this one finally...
And it was interesting... The first meeting of AsYa...enjoyed it...
Hehee...can imagine his shock as he got to know who Zoya Farooqui is whom he show the jail...
So much eager to read more...
continue soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
😃
Edited by Always_asya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Hello Daljit</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">I am so happy that you updates this one finally...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">And it was interesting... The first meeting of AsYa...enjoyed it...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Hehee...can imagine his shock as he got to know who Zoya Farooqui is whom he show the jail...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">So much eager to read more...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">continue soon...</font>

Hello Deepti
it's long time since I came here bcs of exam
thank you so much
I am glad that you like it
haha me too his expression is one thing that I am unable to forget till now 😆
I will try to update soon

p. s I need coffee and U R mine
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: GorgeousSmile

Unres!!😛

I didn't notice it is too too short!!
Want longer next time!!😛
Iss baar maaf kiya!!
Yaad rakhna!!

Coming to the story,
It was a Nice part!!
Enjoyed it!
Loved AsYa takrar!!😳
I had thought Tanveer was Zoya's younger sister...Great that she is elder!!
Gaffur is evil maybe?! was Rashid's friend!! Maybe Asad wants to ruin him!!
Want to know further!!
Try to update soon!!
As it was shorter!! NO!! The SHORTEST EVER!!😛

But Really THANKS for Updating!! Feeling nice after reading it!!😊


Haha first line pe hi complain 😆
ok I will remember
next time the length will be same
thanks
I am glad that you like it
why you are happy that she is zoya's elder sister not younger
no Asad doesn't want to ruin him
I will try to update soon
oh really bacchuu
it was not that much short

😆
well you will see whether Gaffour is evil or not
😉
again thanks for the lovely comments
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: GorgeousSmile

<font size="3" color="#0000ff">Unres on pg 9!!😊</font>

replied 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Haiii di... 😃
I'm here.
So first part up .
Good starting.
So Asad is going to Mumbai in search of some girl.
Maybe Zoya .
Asya first encounter ended in a bad note.
Zoya's very rude in this part .especially with Asad.
Zoya had a painful past nd she's like this bcz of that only.
Tanveer is Zoya's sister.
Like Seriously di .i was shocked when I read this.
Nd then suddenly Shwetu di ki yaad ayi .
Badly wants to see her reaction after reading this part 😆
She gonna kill u for this
Hope she's good nd won't turn evil in upcoming parts.
Asad got to know abt Zoya indentity nd shocked .
Many things happened in first part.
But I'm doubt is still there .
If asaad know Zoya nd was searching for her .then why didn't they recognized eachother on their first encounter 😕 .
Hope u will give the answer soon.
Continue soon .
Thanks for pm. 🤗
Edited by LuvurselF - 7 years ago
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