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MafiaQueen

@Queen0fDarkness

Goldie

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

Beautiful os..when first time read it i cried and again i couldnt stop crying..

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tabby999

@tabby999

IF-Stunnerz

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

I am sad today and this Os made me extreme saddest

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1086521

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

Jo jee chahe woh Ho jaaye aisakab hota hai,har jeevan ,Jeevan se samjhota hai ab tak jo hona wohi hota hai ,]Jeevan kya hai chaltha phirta ek khilona hai,do aankhon ne ek se rona hai aur ek se hasna hai

I can just summaries this OS in these words ...emotional one Edited by hermosoanu123 - 7 years ago

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kuhu

@kuhu18

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

its a lovely story
i know some stories have sad endings
but for this one i dont find any reason

dont agree with Maan at all

made me sad today
Edited by kuhu18 - 7 years ago

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

this maan is a selfish idiot😡

i'm sure geet deserves better!

matlab har step me its only he himself and his problems

geet bali ka bakra hai!😲

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

IF-Stunnerz

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Oh...you posted this one too. But sad ending same. I recall you had to post one more part showing uniting them.

But you kept sad ending here. Really feel for them

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

i read this last time also...and am feeling same what i felt last time...

amazing story...but not able to accept end...please post onother part soon to unit them...i know everything is not meant to be in life...but for maaneet its just not acceptable...also if u really what something in life...u can get it...and i think same should happen to them...

please post another part as we dont wana be sad...also i was thinking why not hookup angad wit payal...she also seems to be good...this way everybody will be happy :)

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

such a sad OS...

well some stories do end and two people no matter how much they love eachother are not meant to be together...

loved it...

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757057

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#10

I guess u posted this before as well :I

Like the 1st time now also I'm feeling so sad reading it

Maan could move on with geet

There geet had always loved him selflessly

N for the last time came with hope but maan just send her out!

It could had a happy ending :(

But I guess that's the reality of real life :|

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