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Originally posted by: prerna1

interesting update...


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Originally posted by: lovern

hiii Aarti

Update was awesome as always just like u.

MERI NAINA haaayyy kitna sweet lagta hai na sun ne main aur woh bhi Raj ke muh se.
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Jaldi jaldi update karo. Aur plzzz muze PM karna dear.



Lotsss of Love

Priya


thanks priya
next update kar rahi hu read n comment
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***** Ek Ajnabi Rishta******


Part 17




Abhimanyu : (smiling) apka dil kabhi galat ho he nahi sakta Raj ...(teasingly) woh bhi          ""APKI NAINA"" ko le kar toh kabhi nahi ...




Raj : (giving unbelievable look) ab chup chap so jao ...bhul gaya Naveen ki shadi ki taiyariya karne hain



Abhimanyu : (becoming serious) Raj par jo hua uske



Raj :(bech me baat kate hue) jo hua usse humare khushiyo pe koi asar nahi padna chaheyi chauhan sahab bas ab thoda aur satark rahne ki jarurat hain ...




Yeh kah kar Raj waha se chala gaya ...




Next morning


KMA me sab kuch bilkul normal tha ek shanti thi pure KMA me par yeh bata pana muskil tha ki yeh tufan se aane wale phele ki shanti hain ya tufan ke jane ke baad wali shanti thi ...



Naveen abhimanyu Raj teeno ne yahi decide kiya ki woh apni investigation bohat low profile rakhe gay ...
          Naveen ka dil toh nahi tha par farz ke khatir usne Naina ke harkato pe nazar rakhne ki izzazat de he di Raj ko ...



Naina ko Naveen ne yeh kah kar shant kara diya ki koi misunderstanding ho gayi thi jo ab clear ho gayi hain toh ab Raj aur uske beche koi tension nahi hain ...
              Par Naveen ka dil he janta tha ki woh kase bardash kar raha tha yeh sab ...



Pura KMA taiyario me jut gaya dekhte he dekhte din kaha beet gayi pata he nahi chala shadi ki almost sari taiyariya ho chuki thi
              Triggers kisne churani ki koshish ki iska koi bhi sabut nahi mila teeno ko ...
                        Par hain ab toh Naveen ne bhi notice kiya tha ki Naina kisi baat se pareshan hain ...aksar khoi khoi se rahti hain woh ...uski health bhi down ja rahi thi
                        Usne baat karne ki bohat koshish ki Naina se par Naina har bar baat tal dete aur ase dekhti ki sab normal ho


Aaj shalini ki family aa rahi thi 2 din baad shadi jo hain inki

          Pura KMA chamak raha tha brig.chandok me 3 din ki chutti de thi pure Kma ko Naveen aur shalini ki khushiyo me shamil hone ke liye ...



In mess



Shalini : (nervous) oh !god sab kase hoga itna kaam pada hain abhi ... do din baad shadi hain mummy papa bhi bas aane he wale ho gay ...kahi koi gadbad na ho jaye mujhe toh bohat dar lag raha hain ...


Shalini ki baatein sunn kar mess me baathe sabhi log muskura rahe the kyuki jab se shadi ki date fix hue hain shalini har waqt bas yahi dialogue marte rahti thi ...



Shalini : (sabko muskurata hua dekh kar gussa ho rahi thi) haa haa hass lo sab mujhpar ...(roni shakal bana kar ) mujhe yaha itni tension ho rahi hain aur tum sab ho ki hass rahe ho ...



Naina : (hiding her smile) uff ...bhabhi aap bena wajah itni tension le rahi ho sab kuch ho chuka hain ab kya baki hain aap btao ...



Shalini yaad karne ki koshish karti hain par usse kuch yaad nahi aata kyuki sare kam ho chuke the kuch nahi bacha tha karne ko ...



Huda : (flirting) aare madam ji itni fikar na karo yeh huda hain na apke liye aap Bas hukum karna aur huda apke liye apni jaan bhi de dega ...




Naveen : (huda ka ghurte hue) ab tak maine socha tha shalini ko lene ghode(horse) pe chad kar jauga par ab lagta hain gadhe (donkey) pe chad kar jana padega




Naveen ki baat sunn kar sab hasne lage kyuki unhe pata tha Naveen kis gadhe ki baat kar raha hain ...par bechare huda koche samjh nahi aaya...




Pooja : (to huda) oye tu side hat...arre mam meri mano aap na bina battery ka mobile ban jao shadi tak nahi toh shadi wale din apke mobile ki light nahi chamkegi...



Shalini confuse ho kar pooja ka dekh rahi thi


Naina : bhabhi pooja ka matlab hain ki agar apne itni tension legi toh apko raat ko neend nahi aayigi aur agar raat me neend nahi aayi toh apne aakho ke neeche dark circles ho jaye gay (teasingly) socho bhabhi aap apne dulhan ke jode me dark circles ke saath kase lagogi



Shalini : (dramatically) apne kaano pe haath rakhte hue) nahhhiii...


Naveen : (apne kaan band karte hue) its ok shalu main phir bhi tumse shadi karluga (dhere se) aur koi option bhi kaha bacha hain ...


Shalini : (ghurte hue) kya kaha ..



Arre jiju ab dii ko tease karna band karo nahi toh first night me bedroom se bahar ho jao gay ...(kisi ladki ki awaz thi)



Sabne mess ke door ki taraf dekha jaha shalini ki family khadi thi ...kareeb 10 15 log the



Shalini bhag kar jati haain aur sabse milne lagti...



Naveen bhi jata hain aur apne saas sasur ke pair chuta hain ...(arre yr impression thodi kharab karna haain usse)




Phir sab andar aate hain ...


Same girl : (mischievously) btaiye jiju sona hain kya first night apne kamre ke bahar ...



Naveen : (Blushing) wase agar shalini mujhe bahar nikal bhi degi toh kya hua tum hona (teasingly) aakhir saali bhi toh aadhi gharwali hoti hain sach kaha na Raginiii ...


(Yup yup yeh same ragini h chandni ki story wali ..chandu baby maine teri story se utha kar zinda kar diya mari hue ragini ko ...Hehehe..)



Ragini : (sharmate hue) kya jiju apse baato me koi nahi jeet sakta ...




Huda : (flirting) wase aap mujhse jeet sakti hain mujhe apse harne me koi shikayat nahi hain...




Raj : (giving unbelievable look) cadet kabhi toh sudhar jaheyi ...ab tak Naveen sirf apko gadha bana raha tha ...but i m not sure ab woh apko kya bana de ...



Ragini Raj ki baat sunn kar usse dekhne lagi ...




Ragini : (raj ko dekhte hue) dii ap humsab ka intro nahi karogi...



Shalini : sure ...yeh ragini hain meri cousin yeh arjun hain mera cousin aur ragini ka bada bhai ...
Iss taraha shalini sabka aapsa me intro kara deti hain ...



Shalini's mom : chalo ab tum log apne yeh baatein band karo aur mujhe usse milao jiski wajah se yeh shadi ho rahi hain warna toh mujhe laga tha yeh dono budhape me jaa kar shadi kare gay ...(to Naveen) beta tumhari behen kaha hain ...



Phir Naveen dhayan deta hain ki Naina waha hain he nahi ...

Naina sabse peche ke kone me khadi thi shayad thoda hichkicha rahi thi un sabse milne me ...




Naveen Naina ke pas jata hain aur uska haath pakad kar sabke samne lata hain ...




Naveen : (proudly) aunty yeh hain meri behen Naina ...




Naina thoda darte hue apni nazre utha kar shalini ki mom ki taraf dekhti hain jo bade pyaar se Naina ko dekh rahi thi ...unke aakho me apne liye pyaar dekh kar naina ke dil ki hichak (hesitation) dor ho gayi ...




Shalini mom : (cupped her face n kissed on her forehead) bohat pyaari bachi hain ...bilkul pari jasi

Shalini ki mom ki baatein sunn kar sab smile karne lagte hain



Tabhi ragini bol padi


Ragini : (excitedly) oh my god yeh wahi ladki hain na jiske bareme apne btaya tha dii ... jiska gang rape hua tha ... {yeh sunn kar Naina ke chahre ka rang he udd gaya }
                   (Naina ke ek aur kadam pas aate hue) tum kafi waqt tak thi na unke pas kafi torture kiya tha unhone tumhe (making sad face) poor girl ...          
              actually main medical student hu so i want to study on you ...
                    Woh kya hain na tum kafi intersting top ho ... itne time tak gang rape ki victim rahi ho aur servive bhi kiya hain ...toh bas isse wajaha se mujhe thodi study aur kuch test karne hain ki tumhari body ne itna pressure or pain kase jhela ...



Isse phele woh kuch bolti usse apne gaal pe ek jordar chata pada ..


            Pure mess me khamoshi cha gayi ...ragini apne gaal pe haath rakhe khadi thi



Ragini : (totally shocked) dii???

Shalini : (with full anger) haa dii... Tumhari himmat kase hue Naina se ase baat karne ki ragini ... (With disgusting face) chii sharam aati hain mujhe tumhe apne behen kahte hue ...ek ladki ho kar dosre ladki ka dar samjhne ke bajaye tum usse aur taklif pucha rahi hu ???? (Holding her form shoulder) kya kaha tumne study , test ??? Naina tumhe koi subject lagti hain ya pinjre me band janwar jispe tum test karna chahti ho ...
                                  (Controlling her anger) say sorry to her



Ragini : (with tears) dii mera isse hurt karne ka irada nahi tha ...its just i was to excited to meet her for my subject...



Naveen : (low danger voice) subject???? Tumhe mere behen sirf apni study ke liye subject nazar aati hain ???
          (To shalini mom haath jodte hue) aunty please isse phele ki main kuch asa kar jau jo mujhe nahi karna chaheyi ragini ko yaha se lekar jayeyi




Ragini : (irritated) come on jiju maine sorry kaha toh ab iss baat ka itna tammasha banane ki kya jarurat hain ??? (With attitude) wase bhi iske saath yeh sab hua hain maine kuch galat toh nahi kaha na ...




Naveen : (almost ragini ko thapad marne he wala tha par woh apna haath bech me he rok leta hain) shukar mano main ladkiyo me haath nahi uthata ragini warna ...



Arjun : (ragini ke aage khada hote hue ) warna kya Naveen??? Mujhe pata hain galti ragini ki hain usse ase baat nahi karni chaheyi thi par asa bhi kya galat kah diya usne ki tum uspe haath uthane wale the ... Trust me Naveen tumhari behen sirf bojh (burden) hain aur kuch nahi ...          
        wase bhi tumhari behen (looking toward Naina ) ne kuch galat he kiya hoga jo uske saath asa hua ...issi ne unn sab ko apni taraf ...

Tabhi ek jordar punch pada uske muh pe par iss bar na toh shalini thi aur na he Naveen iss bar arjun ke aage woh khada tha jo kisko izzazat nahi deta "Apni Naina" ko chot puchne ki yes woh koi aur nahi Raj tha ...


Raj ek aur punch marte hue


Raj : {angrily Holding his collar) himmat kase hui Naina ke bare me asi bakwas karne ki ...

Raj ki aakhe dekh kar arjun ki halat kharab ho chuki thi aasa lag raha tha mano raj ki aakho me khoon utar aaya ho ...


Naveen : (with stern face) chod usse Raj ... (Shalini ki taraf dekhte hue) aagr aap sab ki yahi soch hain meri behen ke bare me toh (shalini ke mom ke aage haath jod kar unki aakho me dekhte hue ) mujhe yeh shadi he nahi karne hain (sab yeh sunn kar shocked ho jate hain) looking toward arjun n ragini) meri behen mera gurur hain abhiman hain woh mera koi bojh nahi ...
                          (Proudly) ab aap sab jaa sakte hain yaha se main aur meri behen bohat khush hain ek dosre ke saath hume kisi tesre ki jarurat nahi ...



Yeh kah kar Naveen Naina ka haath pakad kar lejata hain ...

Par jane se phele woh ek bar bhi shalni ki taraf nahi dekhta kyuki woh janta tha ki agar usne uski taraf dekha toh woh kamzor pad jayega jo woh kis bhi kemat pe yeh nahi chahta tha ...




Naveen ke jane ke baad Raj bhi gusse me waha se chala gaya ek ek karke pura KMA waha se chala gaya sirf shalini aur uski family thi waha ...



Shalini : (without emotions) maa aap sab bhi ab yaha se jaa sakte hain ...jitna tammasha hona tha ho chuka ab koi shadi nahi hogi



Mom : (crying) beta yeh sab kya ho gaya ...(angrily looking towards ragini n arjun) dekha kya kar diya tum dono ne apne bachpane me ... Aur jo bhi hua uss bachi ke saath usme uski kya galti thi jo tum dono ne itna kuch kah diya usse
        (Apne aasu puchte hue) main Naveen se khud baat karugi woh meri baat nahi talega maaf kardega woh in dono ki galti



Shalini : please maa ab kuch nahi ho sakta main janti hu Naveen ko aaj jo bhi hua Naina ke saath uske baad woh mujhse kabhi shadi nahi karega ...
                 Isliye ab aap apna time barbad mat karo jao yaha se




Yeh kah kar shalini bhi waha se chali gayi ...
       Kuch der baad shalini ki family bhi wapas chali gayi ...

Par insab me ek baat thi jis par kisine dhayan nahi diya ... Sabne apne dil ki bhadas nikali kisne haath utha kar toh kisine chila kar par jo insab baato se sabse jada prabhavit (effect) hua tha usne he kuch nahi kaha ...
          Naina ne bilkul bhi react nahi kiya na ladi na dari na hasi na royi ...kuch nahi kaha usne




Naveen apne room me baitha tha Naina bas Naveen ki godh me ser rakh ke lati thi aur Naveen uske baalo ko sehla raha tha ...
                     Naina ki tabyat thodi kharab hone lagi isliye kisi taraha Naveen ne usse dawa de kar sulla diya ...


Raj abhimanyu aur pacho cadets Naveen ke kamre me aate hain ...



Raj : kasi hain woh



Naveen : (with heavy voice) koi usse chanse jene kyu nahi deta Raj jab bhi woh khush hoti hain kuch na kuch ho jata hain uske saath koo na koi uske zakham kurad kar chala jata hain ... (Silently crying) agar asa he chalta raha toh mar jayegi woh ...




Alekh : (angrily) saale ko jaan se mar dena tha usse jane he kyu diya apun logo ne



Tabhi andar room se nikal kar waha Naina aa gayi


Naina : usse kya hota alekh ...(with sad smile) kuch bhi nahi ...kuch nahi hota usse mar ke kya sach badal jata ???? Nahi na toh jane do kuch toh log kahe gay logo ka kaam hain kahna ( Naina bohat ajeeb tarike se baat kar rahi thi asa lag raha tha mano jitna woh apne dard ko daba rahi ho woh utna he ubhar ke bahar aa raha tha)



Naveen : (little bit shocked) gudiya ????


Par Naina react he nahi kar rahi thi jase usse kuch suni he nahi de raha ho ...



Naina : (lagata bole jaa rahi thi) bhai maine socha hain na ki hum aaj sirf mast karte hain sare function kal kare gay sangeet haldi mehndi ... Apko kya lagta hain ...wase shadi wali din na hum ...



Naina ase he bina kisi ke jawab ka inzar kiye kabhi kuch toh kabhi kuch bole jaa rahi thi jise dekh kar sab ko dar lag raha tha asa lag raha tha mano Naina pagal ho gayi ho


Ali : (tensed) inhe kya ho gaya hume dar lag raha hain inke liye ...




Yudi : dude mujhe lagta hain hume shalini mam ko bulana chaheyi ...


Yudi ki baat sunn kar Raj ne yudi ko shalini ko bulane Ka ishara karta hain ...

Pooja aur yudi turant shalini ko lene chale jate hain



Alekh : (Naina ke shoulder pe haath rakhte hue) yeh Naina tere ko kya hua ase kaiko baat kar rele hain ...pagal mafik



Naina : (pagalo ki taraha haste hue) pagal main ???? Main pagalo ki mafik harkate kar rahi hu sachi me ...
Yeh kah kar Naina table ke uper rakh kach ke glass ko utha kar zameen me patak deti hain ... Naina ase he lagatar chize tod rahi thi sab usse rokne ki shant karne ki koshish kar rahe the ...ki achanak woh raj ki baho me behosh ho gayi...




Naveen : (panicked) bacha ??? Isse kya hua ...


Itne me shalini aa jati hain




Shalini : Raj please isse infirmary me le chalo mujhe iska checkup karna hain ...




Phir Raj Naina ko apni baho me utha kar infirmary le jata hain ...



Naveen ke toh jase kadmo ne uska saath he chod diya ho woh aage badh he nahi raha tha ...abhimanyu uska haath pakad kar zabardasti usse infirmary le kar gaya ...




Aaj phir kuch wasa he hua jase phele hua tha ..aaj phir Naina andar infirmary me hain aur yaha bahar sabki saase ruki hue hain uske liye ...Naveen aaj phir kahina kahi usse mod pe khada tha...
                     


Kafi der tak shalini bahar nahi aati aur har badhte pal ke saath intzar karna muskil hota jaa raha tha



Kafi der baad shalini bahar aayi ...


Shalini : (Naveen ki taraf dekhte hue) woh thik hain ...yeh sunn kar sirf Naveen he nahi baki sabke jaan me jaan aayi )



Raj : shalini par Naina ka behavior??? Kuch samjh nahi aa raha ...



Abhimanyu : haa asa laga ek pal ke liye ki woh apna mansik santulan kho bathi ho ..



Shalini : abhi woh thik hain par sirf bahar se ...abhi kuch he waqt hua hain usse apne depression se nikle hue uske andar ka dard tadap chirchirahat yeh sab kisi taraha toh bahar nikalna he tha tph aaj ase nikla hain ...
               inn saalo me jo bhi kuch hua hain uske saath uske yaad abhi bhi kahina kahi dafan hain uske dimak me aur aaj jo bhi hua usse uska baad uska asa react karna normal hain ...
                             Par ...


Naveen : par kya ????




Shalini : (taking Naveen hand in her) Naveen ab Naina ko tumhari sabse jada zarurat hain ...
        Iss waqt jo uski halat hain usme sirf tumhara pyaar he hain jo uski himmat ban sakta hain ...




Naveen : shalini saaf saaf bolo tum bolna kya chahti ho ...gudiya thik toh hain naa ????


Shalini : (nazre churate hue) woh Naveen




Raj : (losing his temper) for godsake shalini speak up ...



Shalini : pregnant hain woh ...(slowly ) maa bane wali hain woh ...


Raj : (in blurred voice) "PREGNANT"


END OF PART 17




Arti



Part 18 page 13





Edited by RNforever - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
awesum
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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gr8 part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Thanks allot MERI ragini ko zinda Karne k liye
But MERI ragini achhi Thi AUR yeh
N now pregnant I hate u for this
😭
Upar se Itna chhota part 😭
Plz next part post kr do
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Yeh kya ho gaya phirse naina ke saath..😭
Abhi abhi wo teek ho gaya
Ragini s just😑
So yahi baat itni dino SE naina sab SE chupa rahi hai
Plz continue soon
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#48
Wow what an update

Interesting

Pl update soon.
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Ye shocking twist..
Please update soon. Soon soon
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Superb update, what is this twist dear?
Naina is pregnant. That's the reason for her behavior
Hope all's well.
Waiting for next update
Take care