I read the part in the mrng before going to school and the whole day i was waiting to go home and comment
So here I am now ... firstly I don't need to tell u everytime that what a superb writer u are.
And the way this ff is going on is just wow..
The whole idea of asad taking zoya on date and giving her soo much happiness. The way he got to know that zoya loves puppies through her screensaver, her choice of food and the whole day he made zoya feel so special
And at night the way he was pacifying zoya in his arms. They r getting close to each other and have slowly started feeling special for eachother
Its nice how u write cute scenes between them as a couple mentioning every small detail in their daily life
Now very soon u r going to write abt their present life which will be also very interesting
Let's see.how asya take this
But for that u have to update soon
~JAZ~
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