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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rati_pandya

Very nice thread sumi and riya...

Its been a year and we all became family. Loved reading all the OS TS and FF abt LAKSHMILA...

Ramya...loved your poem...keep writing.

Manas, really liked your OS.

Sumi GIFs and Siggis and all pics are sooo goood...You are expert in that.

Riii waiting for your posts..


I may not join tomorrow...but will surely see the posts

Keep smiling😊


Thank you so much! 😳 I will. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello friends ! Happy Lakshmila Anniversary !
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Hello friends ! Happy Lakshmila Anniversary !



Beautiful madhuri Di😳


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi ramya Di your poem is too good. Their sacrifice strikes a chord with the heart through your poem.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Why is this place so silent ? πŸ˜•
OK friends , as I promised I posted few creations here ! I hope the other members like these !! 😊
Edited by Viswasruti - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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JODI MAKERS AND JODI BREAKERS




It was a couple of days after Ram and Sita's Marriage was Fixed , Rounds of Talks had roaming around the mithila palace that it was time that they started Looking for Prospective Grooms for their other three daughters as well..

Though Janak was not quite as worried about Mandavi and Shrutkirti , He was really concerned in case of Urmila . Princes of other kingdoms , though always in awe of her charm and beauty , never had the audacity to confront her and talk to her due to her ever high temper , for none would know when this canon would start firing.

Dashrath faced similar battle , finding a bride of Lakshman was no mean task , which woman after all would happily suffice with his way of living , which involved breathing every ounce of oxygen for Just his brother Ram .

Oblivous to the two kings , But Ram could see a sense of budding romance among the two Firebrands in between their constant fights and Leg pulling , and Ram and sita thought it was time that their fathers too knew about the same , and carry this possible alliance in the making even forward.

In the Courtyard

Janak : kya , Putri Urmila aur Rajumar Lakshman ek doosre ko pasand kart hain

Ram : Ji Pitashree , Humne Dekha Hai , Ek doosre se Ladhe Bagair reh nahi sakte veh

Bataao , yeh toh wahi baat ho gayi , Bagal Mein chora aur saare Sheher Mein dhindora

Sita ( In Ram's ears ) : Yeh Kaisi bhaasha ka prayog kar rahe hain aap

Ram ( in her ears ) : Kshama Sitae , Darahsal Yeh line Shatrughan ne kahi thi shrutkirti ko dekhkar , Gadha kahin kaha , Uski wajah se meri bhasha bhi bigadti jaa rahi hai .

Janak : Parantu , Putra , phir tumne yeh kyun kaha ki har waqt dono ladte rehte hain

Sita : Main bataati hoon na pitashree...

Ram ( thinking ) : Mar Gaye , pata nahi ab yeh kitna bolengi

Sita : Pata Hai Pitashree Ek din Na Urmila ne Lakshman Bhayia ke Bhojan mein dher saari Mirch daal di thi , uske badle swaroop lakshman bhayia ne Urmila ko dhokhe se keechad mein Dhaka de diya jiski wajah se uske saare wastra...( ram interrupts )

Ram : Sitae zaraa ek kshan kone mein aayei toh ...

Sita ( Innocently ) : Kya hua swami , itni zaroori vaartalaabh chal rahi thi

Ram ( sarcastically ) : Maine kaha ji ki tareef kuch zyaada nahi ho rahi unn don ki , baat bigad na jaae... Mujhe baat karne dijiye

They go back

Ram : Pitashree , Humein chaturai se dono se haan karwaani hogi , Mujhe lagtaa hai ki kisi kutil budhi ke vyakti ko bula lena chahiye , mera matlab hai shatrughan ko .

Dashrath : Putra ,shaayad tum bhool rahe ho ki Shatrughan mera hi putra hai

Ram : Haan to ?

Dashrath : Mera matlab hai ki yeh sab chaturai use mujhse hi toh viraasat mein mili hai , dekhna aaj pane pitashree ko , kaise inn dono se haan karwaata hoon , bulaao dono ko

Dashrath : Mahaaraj janak , aapki bhi kuch aavshyakta padegi ( he whispered something in his ears )

Janak ( laughing ) : Samajh gaya maharaj.

Just as ram and Sita were about to go and call Lakshman and Urmila , they realized they hadn't to

For the Trouble Making pair was on its way towards them themselves , quarreling bitterly.

Behind them were following the other two brothers of Ram and sisters of Sita

Bharat and shatrughan had groped Lakshman , while their nemesis had groped Urmila Tightly

Lakshman : Maine kaha mujhe jaane do Bharat bhayia , Iss Ladki ko aaj main chodhunga nahi

Urmila : Chodh do didi , isse toh main dekh loongi aaj

Bharat : Mandavi Ji , Kaskar pakde rahiyega , warna anarth ho jaaega , pata nahi kya kar daalenge ek doosre ke saath

Mandavi ( angrily ) : Aap to chup hi rahiye , kahan main aapko pakadkar rakhna chaahti thi , aur kahan mujhe apni yeh paagal behen ko pakdhe rehna padh raha hai

Shrutkirti ( holding on to Urmila ) : Didi , yahan pehle hi pangaa pada hua hai , aur aapko apni prem kahaani samudra par lagaane ki soojhi hui hai ?

Shatrughan : Shrutu , Aisa mat bolo na , jabtak Bharat bahyia ki setting nahi hoti , humaara n umber kaise aaega.

Dahsrath and Janak Interved

Janak : Yeh kya ho raha hai wahan par

Dashrath : Sab ke sab idhar aao , abhi . Dekha Maharaaj , Yeh hain mere Raghukul ke chashmo chiraag , Umar vivaah ki ho chuki hai aur harkatein dekhiye.

Janak : Meri Putriyaan kaunsi Kam hain maharaj ...

Dashrath: Who toh mai dekh hi raha hoon...( Uh...oh)

Janak( shocked ) : Jeee...

Dashrath : Laksmhan , Urmila Kyun Jhagadh rahe tum dono

Shatrughan ( to bharat's ears ) : Lagi Bhayia 100-100 ki , inn dono ko yaad nahi hogi ladaai ki wajah

Bharat : Chup Karo

Lakshman And Urmila : Woh Main ... Woh... Woh... Yaad Nahi Pitashree

Shatrughan ( to Himself Proudly ) : Wah Beta shatrughan , shart jeetne ke Karya mein to tum nipun hote jaa rahe ho

Dashrath and Janak Give Jaw dropping astonishing Expression towards the fact that they didn't even remember the reason of fighting , as Lakshmila stood there with their heads down in emberrasament.

Dashrath ( In ram's Ears ) : Ab dekho kaise inko apni baton ke jaal mein gol mol phansata hoon

Dashrath : Haan toh Lakshman Aur Urmila , Jaisa ki tum dono ko pata hi hai ki Ayodhya Aur Mithila ke beech ab ek gehra sambandh banne jaa raha hai

Lakshman : Ji pitashree , Gyaat Hai

Janak : Toh Humne socha ki Rishta aage badhe , usse pehle 2 sabse mehetvapoorn vyaktiyon se pooch liya jaaye ki unka iss rishte ke bare main kya khaayal hai

Urmila : Sachme Pitashree , aabko aisa lagtaa hai ki hamaare vichaar iss rishte mein sabse adhik mehetvapoorn hain

Janak : Bilkul Putri

Dashrath : To Lakshman , Vivaah Pashchaat Humaare Parivaar mein jo sadaysa aaega , tum Uska Poorn tarah Khayal rakhoge

Lakshman ( thinking talks are about Sita ) : Ji avashya

Dashrath : Usse sadaa prem poorvak baat Karoge

Lakshman : Ji

Dashrath : Uski har baat maoge

Lakshman : Ji

Dashrath : Usse Kabhi Mithila ki yaad toh nahi aane doge

Lakshman : Ji... Mera matlab Ji nahi , kabhi nahi aane doonga

Janak : Urmila , Jinka rishta vivaah pashchaat tumse jud raha hai , Unka hamesha sammaan karogi

Urmila : Ji pitashree

Janak : Unke Liye swaadisht bhojan bhi tayaar karogi

Urmila ( Thinking it to be ram when he visits mithila again ) : Ji pitashree

Janak : Agar Kuch hansi mazaak tumhaare saath kiya , toh rooth ke baith toh nahi jaaogi

Urmila ( again thinking to be Ram ) : Nahi pitashree , Vivaah pashchaat toh rishta hi aise ho jaaega unke saath ki mazaak toh chalta rahega naa.

Janak and Dashrath together : Toh Matalab Mudde ki baat yeh hai ki tum dono iss vivaah se Kaafi prasann ho , aur kisi ko koi aappati nahi hai

Lakshmila together ( thinking to be ram sita marriage ) : Ji Nahi , appati ka to koi sawaal hi nahi hai , Yeh vivaah se badhkar humaare jeevam mein kuch nahi

Dashrath gets up and Embraces Janak Tightly : Mubaarak ho Maharaaj , Rishta Pakka Ho gaya

Dono Maan Gaye , Ab ram aur sita ke Saath Lakshman Urmila ka vivaah bhi sampan Hoga

Lashman And Urmila : Haainnn... Yeh Hamaari baat ho rahi thi...( both faint )

Bharat ( folds Hand ) : Maan Gaye Pitashree Aapko , bahut Kuch seekhna baaki hai

Shatrughan Holds Kirti's hand and rushes towards the 2 emperors

Shatrughan : Pitashree , main kya soch raha tha , Shrutu aur Mujhse bhi yahi sawaal kar li jiye , hum bhi tayaar hain... Promise Lakshman bhayia waale hi jawaab doonga.

Suddenly Sita Gives an angry expression and tries to walk away from there

Ram rushes to her

Ram : Kya hua sitae

Sita : Swami , Humein pata chal gaya , Jinme ladaai hpti hai , unhi mein prem adhik hota hai

Ram : toh

Sita : Aap humse ladte hi nahi , iska arth aap humse prem nahi karte

Ram : Hey bholenath ... Ab yeh vichaar kahan se aa gaya mann mein

Sita : Abhi shatrughan Bhayia hi mere kaan mein mujhe bata rahe , jis waqt pitashree Lakshman se baat kar rahe the

Ram : SHATRUGHANNN... NALAAYAK AADMI ... Ruk iidhar . Main yahaan rishte judwaa raha hoon aur yeh mera hi rishta tudwaane par tula hua hai ( shatrughan runs away )

Everyone Else their Laugh their hearts out at their innocence and disperse away

Edited by goli030291 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aww, what a sweet OS, Goli! Even though the dialogues were in hindi, I was able to understand some of it, and it's hilarious! You write subtle comedy so well. πŸ‘ Especially loved how Ram and Sita became matchmakers for their siblings.

I can totally imagine princes being scared of Urmila and princesses being scared of Lakshman. They both are truly formed for each other. πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..

Aww, what a sweet OS, Goli! Even though the dialogues were in hindi, I was able to understand some of it, and it's hilarious! You write subtle comedy so well. πŸ‘ Especially loved how Ram and Sita became matchmakers for their siblings.

I can totally imagine princes being scared of Urmila and princesses being scared of Lakshman. They both are truly formed for each other. πŸ˜‰


Thanks Janaki

That was the only downside i couldnt write it in english , otherwise i coudnt create comic momentsπŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Hi Janu Di. How are you?πŸ€—
Hi goli bhaiya πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago
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A well written OS Bhayya !😊
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