Lakshmila 1st Anniversary Celebrations Begins....

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Tonight we've gathered here to commemorate the one year anniversary of the meeting of our beloved mythological couple Lakshman-Urmila, fondly known as LakshMila. If we pause and rewind exactly 365 days of our life, then most of us would immediately agree that this was the day when it all started. LakshMila's story is probably one of the loveliest and most innocent mythological love story that mostly remained untold for centuries...until people started noticing them for what they were...they weren't silent supporting actors to be cast away in the shadows with sparing mention here and there. No, their story was indeed needed to be told and heralded for being as charismatic and heartfelt as any other is.




We wrote stories as our imaginations ran wild...well they still do...(who cares!), made some beautiful siggies, gifs, video mixes as your creativity knew no bounds when it came to these two. We even vented out on numerous occasion when we thought they were being mistreated onscreen...disagreements gave rise to some very interesting and diverse topics as our love for them only grew to maximum proportions.




In this past one year, all of us became a family...and forged some undying and loving relationships that we are going to cherish for the rest of our lives...So a very big thank you for joining us today and making us feel loved...and blessed.

Their story came to the forefront even more because of the wonderful onscreen chemistry between the two young actors with oodles of acting prowess...Karan Suchak and Yukti Kapoor. Yes they were unconventional, but that very word set them apart and miles ahead of their contemporaries. The conviction with which they essayed the roles especially the romantic scenes, actually made us believe in them. They opened an angle that was never really touched upon by their predecessors. The scenes where they didn't have too many dialogues...they made their presence felt through sheer brilliance of their acting. The innocence, the initial denial but the instant attraction and later their separation resulting in pain and loss, their suffering, their tears and the final joy of reunion were ingeniously portrayed by Karan-Yukti or as their fans call them KaYu.


Lakshman and his twin brother Shatrughna, were born in Ayodhya to King Dasharatha and Sumitra. Lakshman is the incarnation of Sesha, the multiple headed Naga associated with Lord Vishnu. Lakshman marries to Sita's younger sister Urmila.

When Sage Vishwamitra takes Rama for killing the demons, Lakshmana accompanies them and goes to Mithila with them.

Lakshman and his twin brother Shatrughna, were born in Ayodhya to King Dasharatha and Sumitra. Lakshman is the incarnation of Sesha, the multiple headed Naga associated with Lord Vishnu.When Sage Vishwamitra takes Rama for killing the demons, Lakshmana accompanies them and goes to Mithila with them.
Lakshman marries to Sita's younger sister Urmila.

Lakshman left his wife Urmila and joins his brother on exile for 14 years, a great sacrifice. He is an invincible warrior committed to virtue and is devoted to his brother Rama. Lakshman served Rama and Sita during their exile with great reverence and devotion. Lakshman made home for Rama and Sita, guarded them at night, used to bring food for them and accompanied them in long tiring journeys and the lonely life of forest. All he did without complaining or cares for himself. As a younger brother he always served his elder brother Rama with a great sacrifice in all adverse condition. The life of Lakshman is an example of self-sacrifice, duties of man to his elders and superiors and teaches the value of selflessness.

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Urmila is often termed as the forgotten heroine of Ramayana. Though even Valmiki mentions just few lines on her in the book, he doesn't forget to mention that her sacrifice was unparalleled. Sita was an adopted daughter of Raja Janak and Queen Sunanya . He had found a baby Sita' while ploughing the land for a yagna. Urmila on the other hand was the biological daughter of Raja Janak and Queen Sunanya. She was younger to Sita by few years. When Ram broke the bow he immediately became the person eligible to marry Sita. Next, Raja Dasharath came to Raja Janak's kingdom of Mithila to talk about the wedding dates and time. This was the time when Rajkumari Urmila was betrothed to Rajkumar Lakshmana. Both Sita and Urmila were married to Ram and Lakshman on the same day. One the very first night of the exile, Ram and Sita went to sleep in the forest while Lakshman kept a watch on them. Next, Goddess Nidra (the Goddess of sleep) approached Lakshman. He however begged her to excuse him for next 14 years so that he could carry out him dharm and duty unconditionally without any hurdle. The goddess was impressed by his devotion and agreed to leave him for the next 14 years.

However, as per the law of the nature somebody else had to bear the share of Lakshman's sleep. This is when Lakshman requests the Goddess NIdra to go to his wife Urmila as he knew she would readily agree as she too wanted to contribute with him to fulfill his duty. When Goddess Nidra explained the situation to Urmila she at once replied, "Give me my husband's share of sleep for the next 14 years so that he can constantly stay awake without any stress or fatigue. This is how Urmila slept night and day during the 14 year exile while Lakshmana could serve Ram and Sita attentively.Ravana's son Meghnath was very mighty and powerful. In fact, nobody could ever defeat him in any sort of war but only a man who had not slept for years. This is the reason how Lakshman could easily defeat the invincible Megnath. Without the help and contribution of Urmila, it was really impossible for Lakshman to defeat Meghnath.

After 14 years when Lakshman returned to Ayodhya along with his brother Ram and sister-in-law, Goddess Nidra approached him once again reminding him of his promise. This is when Lakshman had to go to sleep and Urmila woke up from her long slumber to see Ram being crowned as the King of Ayodhya.

Urmila's contribution in Ramayana is truly praise worthy and unparalleled as mentioned by Sage Valmiki in his book. Her devotion towards her husband and family is not just praise worthy but exemplary. This is the reason why she is often addressed as the Heroine' of Ramayana.

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Important scenes of Lakshmila ... 😃😳⭐️


It's the scene where Lakshman and Urmila came face to face for the very first time, when she had come over to Sage Yajnavalkya's ashram to invite the brothers for lunch. They immediately clashed and the matter resolved only when Ram interfered... with Urmila winning round one hands down!






Their next meeting was quite accidental. When the two collided head on. One was going in search of her elder sister and the other one was carrying a pail of water for the horses in the stable. What ensued was another round insults hurled at each other.






This was the scene where the tables dramatically turned, when Lakshman saves Urmila from a giant snake Katig, who was sent to Mithila in order to exact revenge from Rajrishi janak's family for apparently humiliating the demon king of Lanka... Raavan. The snake attacked when Urmila along with her cousins arrived at the lake to fetch blue lotus. She requested Lakshman to be their chaperone.




The day would've surely ended on a horrible note had there not been Prince Lakshman at their disposal. The young prince not only saved the day and presented his potential lady love with the much coveted blue lotus but also for the first and only time showed off his "Sheshnaag avatar".



The scene is particularly memorable for this rare "darshan" of 'Sheshnaag roopi Ramanujan'.


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Their marriage is proposed by King Dasharatha. All the four brothers of Ayodhya married the four princesses of Mithila. Finally their dream of being together forever is actualised. Even though the grand wedding ceremony focused majorly on Ram-Sita yet some very beautiful moments were reserved for LakshMila too.

Their love and respect for each other overflowed through every frame and shot..who can forget their intense locking of eye during this scene?



It is true that post wedding their scenes together reduced rather dramatically...but even then they shone through within limited screen provided.




and the memorable "The Promise" Scene.


The scene that paves the way for their tumultuous future...the life that started with so many beautiful promises unknown of the future perils that lies in wait for them...the thorny path that they both have to embark upon cast no shadows till then.


Until...



The Gods decided to test their endurance and ability to stay strong in the face of adversity. Urmila's world crashes down when Lakshman decides to follow his elder brother to the wilderness for 14 years to fulfill their father's promise to Queen Kaikeyi. She stays strong and supports her husband's decision even though she dies a thousand times in between.




In the version retold in Siya Ke Ram, Urmila embraces a fourteen year long sleep like state to facilitate in her husband's mission. It is believed that she willfully agrees to take away Lakshman's sleep for the entire duration of the exile so that he can perform his brotherly duties towards Sri Ram and Mata Sita.








As the saying goes time and tide wait for none and in this case too the fourteen year of separation comes to an end too. Lakshman returns to Ayodhya accompanying his brother Sri Ram and Bhabhi Sita after slaying the demon king Raavan. As the Queen mothers welcome them to the palace that has been waiting for their return eagerly, Lakshman's eyes only searched his beloved. It their time for reunion too. Hence he goes off in search of his wife who is still in divine induced sleep and waiting just for him to wake her up from the fugue like state.


Lakshman's eyes become moist as he finds his wife on their marital bed asleep oblivious to the outside world. His reverence knows no bound when he realizes the true worth of Urmila (born of passion)- his wife. It goes beyond saying that their reconciliation was bittersweet and it brings tears to the audience's eyes every time we watch the scene unfold before us. Urmila opens her eyes at the beckoning of her beloved's voice just as the sun rays peek through the sky overcast with clouds.





Agreed that this was a rough phase for most of us...as by this time we had too many issues with the show, their over the top screenplay and implausible plot twists. The lack of genuine screen space for our beloved couple also irked us to no ends. Yet there were still a couple of scenes that shone through this apparent bleak time.




The most remarkable scene post exile was by all means this scene. The scene that brought back a lot of old LakshMila feels for us. The crestfallen and almost teary eyed Lakshman was a treat to watch especially when the reason was his beloved wife's visit to her hometown Mithila!





Who knew the mighty warrior Lakshman who defeated the likes of Meghnad has turned into such an emotional mush all because of his beautiful and intelligent Urmila! Here he has once again been outwitted by his effervescent wife once again proving why she truly is his better half in every sense of the term!

The scene is definitely heartwarming as we get to witness the extent of Urmila's influence in Lakshman's life and how much she mattered to him. This was obviously a welcome change and unparalleled in the history of Mythological Shows.



With that we come to an end to this first post...Thanks for Visiting and Reading...Enjoy tonight's celebration...Let The Fun Begin...




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A Beautiful Poem on Lakshmila Reunion through the eyes of Urmila by Ramya ... [Username : --Elara--]

In your eyes i see a million beautiful lies,
And those constant stares that make me shy.
In thy breath i hear the hushed whispers of the sea,
Of peace that knows neither beginnings nor doth cease.

I feel thy touch as the tilak i do,
Tasting the agony in thy dust-bathed shoe.
Smelling the sobs that you carefully hold, i know,
That you've just pined for me as much, just don't want to show.

Where mole hills become mountains,
Your love is that boundless fountain.
In all these years, all i've known is wait,
To be able to glance at your resplendent gait.

And now as i do a tear escapes my eyelid,
Off the thal of aarti my hands seem to skid.
Come, hold me close in a warm embrace,
The sky full of stars lets in togetherness chase.

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Lakshman At Athiti Grigh Mithila ~

Aaj jab Janak Maharaj ne apni charo putriyon vivah hum charon se karne ki ichha vyakt ki aur abhi tak hame yeh samaj nahi aaya hi pitaji ne haan kaise keh diya. Ek baar hum bhayion se bhi puch lete ki hum kya chahte hai. Ram bhaiyya aur Sita bhabhi ek dusrae ke liyae bane hai, Bharat ke liyae Mandavi, Shatrugan ke liyae Shruth keerthi bhi sahi hai. Par mera vivah Urmila ke saath , yeh kaise sambhav hai. Mera unke saath vivah karna unke saath uchit nahi hoga. Mujhe yeh baat untak kaise bhi pahunchani hogi.

Ram enters the room

Lakshman tum chintit prateet ho rahe ho, kuch hua hai kya??

Lakshman replies " Ram bhaiyya aap kab aaye, maaf kardijiyae maine aap ko dekha nahi. Iss waqt mein atyant vichlit hu vivah karne ki baat sun kar."

Ram replies

Lakshman Urmila bahut samajhdaar hai aur woh tumhare liyae sahi jeevansaati banegi, tum kis baat ko le kar chintit ho??"

Lakshman replies-

"Ram Bhaiyya Urmila se vivah karna koi bhi vyakti ke liyae samman ki baat hogi, par uss ke liyae mein sahi nahi hu"

Ram replies

"Mujhae aisa lagta hi ki Urmila se jyada tumhae aur koi nahi samajh sakta, Lakshman ek baar Urmila se baat karo , tumhari chinta dur ho jaayegi."


Ram Urmila ko ek sandesh patr bhejte hai ki woh pushpa vatika mein Lakshman se bhet karae."

Pushpa Vatika~

Purnima ki raat hone ki wajah se Chandrama purn hai aur uski kaanti se pushpa vatika atyant sundar pratit ho rahi hai.

Lakshman uss taraf mud kar chaand ko nihaar rahe hote hai ki itne mein piche se usse kuch awaaz sunayi deti hai. Chan Chan Chan koi aa raha hai aur aawaz toh nazdik aane par badh rahi hai. Itnae mein ek meethi swar mein kisi ne pukara usse "Dashrath nandan suniyae, aap ko mujhse kuch baat karni hai."

Lakshman turns back and is astonished to see such a beautiful person standing in front of him. He could not take eyes off her.

He stammers a little bit and says "ji hum aap se kuch kehna chate hai."

Urmila replies " ji kahiyae mein sun rahi hu"

Lakshman says " mujhe lagta hai yadi mein kabhi kisi se vivah karu unke saath nainsaafi hogi, aap sundar hai, susheel hai, achi hai mujhe lagta hai aap ko mujhse behtar var milega, meri subah toh Ram bhaiyya ki seva se shuru ho kar unhi ki seva mein khatam hoti hai, aise mein aap se vivah kar ke aap ki upeksha karna anuchit hai, iss liyae.."

Urmila stops him in between


"kshma kijiyae beech mein baat kar rahi hu, aap ko kya lagta ki vivah ek bandhan hai, aap ki kaam mein yeh vighn banegi, agar aisi baat hai toh aap galat hai, mere pitaji kehte hai vivah ki bandhan prem aur sneh se bana hota hai, aur woh aisa bandhan hai jo hamae zimmedaar banna sikhata hai, hame yeh ehsaas dilati hai ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye koi hai jo hamesha har kadam mein mushkil mein sirf hamare saath hi khada hai. Vivah takat hai kamzori nahi. Agar aap ki bhaiyya ki seva karna aap ka dayitva hai toh apni behen ki seva karna meri. Koi jyada antar nahi hai hum donon mein, mein aap se vivah karne ke liyae taiyar hu iss liyae kyon ki mein apni behnon ke saath reh sakti hu. Yadi aap ko abhi lagta ki aap ko mujhse vivah nahi karna hai mein aap ko iss vivah todne ki puri anumati deti hu."

Urmila turns to walk away and then Lakshman holds her hand

Lakshman says "mujhe kshma kar dijiyae aap ki dil ko kasht pahuchane ki koi iraada nahi hai tha mera, mujhe aap se iss tarah baat nahi karna chahiyae tha, Ram bhaiyya ne kaha ki aap se jyada mujhe aur koi nahi samajh sakta hai, ab lag raha ki unhone sach hi kaha, mein yeh bhool gaya ki aap bhi kisi ki behen hai aur aap meri dasha samjh sakti hai, aaj mere dil mein aap ki prati samman aur jyadaa badh gayi hai. Ab mein nishint ho gaya hu. Aur dhanyavaad mujhe vivah ki mehtva samjhane ke liyae. Ab aap mujhse vivah karne ke liyae tayaar hai?

Urmila just nods and run away from there. Lakshman stands there still he could hear the chan chan sound of Urmil's payal.

Iss prakaar Urmila ne pyaar ki ek nayi paribhasha stapith ki aur uss ke pashchat Lakshman se vivah kar ke Ayodhya ki bahu ban gayi.

Ek din ~

In Laksmila room , Ayodhya~

Lakshman comes in

"Urmila kahan ho tum, Urmila... "

Urmila comes running "kya hua swami"

Lakshman replies "mujhe aap ko kahi le jana hai jaldi chaliyae hamare saath."

Urmila gets tensed

"Swami sab kuch sahi hai na kuch hua hai kya?"

Lakshman replies "kuch nahi hua hai, tum bas mere saath chalo"

He takes her to the chariot and ask her to get in. He too gets in and ask the person to drive the chariot. Then Lakshman blindfolds Urmila.

Urmila says"swami aap yeh kya kar rahe hai meri aakhon pe patti kyun bandh rahe hai, aur kahan jaa rahe hum"

Lakshman replies "thodi prateeksha karo tumhae khud pata chalega."

As the charoit stops Lakshman asks the person to go back with the chariot. Both of them reach a temple and Lakshman rings the temple bell. Urmila smiles as she knows it's some temple. Lakshman unfolds her blind fold. It is such a beautiful temple of Shiv and Parvathi Urmila loved the place. Its so calm and peaceful as no one is present over there. Lakshman asks Urmila to perform aarti. She performs aarti and Lakshman takes the aarti, then he takes sindhoor and fills her maang. He then opens a box and gifts a precious necklace and wish her happy birthday.

"Urmila tum bhul gayi aaj tumhari janam din hai aur iss liye mein aap ko yaha le kar aaya hu." says Lakshman

He puts the necklace around Urmila's neck

Urmila smiles "swami aap ko yaad hai "

Lashman replies "mujhe hi nahi sab ko yaad hai ek tum hi ho jo bhul gayi. Yaha se jaane ke baad Ayodhya mein jashn manayengae, Sita bhabhi aur Ram bhaiyya ne saari tayyari kar di hai."

Later lakshman takes Urmila to the Sarovar behind the temple and it is beautiful with all kinds of lotuses in it. Urmila is extremely happy and hugs Lakshman,...

Later lakshman asks her to come with him , he takes her through a forest road which is a beautiful one with all kinds of flowers and green grass grown as a carpet.

Lakshman says "pata hai Urmila jab hum chote the to hum bahut shararat the. Ram bhaiyya bilkul shaant rehte the , kabhi kabhi mein, bharat aur shatrughan yahi aa kar masti karte the aur issi raste se chup kar raj bhavan jaate the,par Ram bahiyya hamesha hame pakadte the. Yeh jagah hamare liyae bahut hi khaas hai."

Urimla replies "swami ab se yeh jagah hamare liyae khaas ho gayi kyon ki mein yaha sirf aap ke saath aayi hu " smiles..

Lakshman casually lifts Urmila in his arms and stars walking.

Urmila says " swami kya kar rahe aap mujhe neeche utariyae mein chal sakti hu."

Lakshman replies "ab mein tumhae raj bhavan tak aise hi le kar javunga kyun ki mein tumhae uta sakta hu"

Both of them laugh out loud as their laughter and talks reverberate in the jungle they walk away.

Thats all folks!!!

Writing something on lakshmila after years

I hope u guys like it

Miss Lakshmila and Skr

Your Manas

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A Lakshmila OS by @goli0302941

JODI MAKERS AND JODI BREAKERS

It was a couple of days after Ram and Sita's Marriage was Fixed , Rounds of Talks had roaming around the mithila palace that it was time that they started Looking for Prospective Grooms for their other three daughters as well..

Though Janak was not quite as worried about Mandavi and Shrutkirti , He was really concerned in case of Urmila . Princes of other kingdoms , though always in awe of her charm and beauty , never had the audacity to confront her and talk to her due to her ever high temper , for none would know when this canon would start firing.

Dashrath faced similar battle , finding a bride of Lakshman was no mean task , which woman after all would happily suffice with his way of living , which involved breathing every ounce of oxygen for Just his brother Ram .

Oblivous to the two kings , But Ram could see a sense of budding romance among the two Firebrands in between their constant fights and Leg pulling , and Ram and sita thought it was time that their fathers too knew about the same , and carry this possible alliance in the making even forward.

In the Courtyard

Janak : kya , Putri Urmila aur Rajumar Lakshman ek doosre ko pasand kart hain

Ram : Ji Pitashree , Humne Dekha Hai , Ek doosre se Ladhe Bagair reh nahi sakte veh

Bataao , yeh toh wahi baat ho gayi , Bagal Mein chora aur saare Sheher Mein dhindora

Sita ( In Ram's ears ) : Yeh Kaisi bhaasha ka prayog kar rahe hain aap

Ram ( in her ears ) : Kshama Sitae , Darahsal Yeh line Shatrughan ne kahi thi shrutkirti ko dekhkar , Gadha kahin kaha , Uski wajah se meri bhasha bhi bigadti jaa rahi hai .

Janak : Parantu , Putra , phir tumne yeh kyun kaha ki har waqt dono ladte rehte hain

Sita : Main bataati hoon na pitashree...

Ram ( thinking ) : Mar Gaye , pata nahi ab yeh kitna bolengi

Sita : Pata Hai Pitashree Ek din Na Urmila ne Lakshman Bhayia ke Bhojan mein dher saari Mirch daal di thi , uske badle swaroop lakshman bhayia ne Urmila ko dhokhe se keechad mein Dhaka de diya jiski wajah se uske saare wastra...( ram interrupts )

Ram : Sitae zaraa ek kshan kone mein aayei toh ...

Sita ( Innocently ) : Kya hua swami , itni zaroori vaartalaabh chal rahi thi

Ram ( sarcastically ) : Maine kaha ji ki tareef kuch zyaada nahi ho rahi unn don ki , baat bigad na jaae... Mujhe baat karne dijiye

They go back

Ram : Pitashree , Humein chaturai se dono se haan karwaani hogi , Mujhe lagtaa hai ki kisi kutil budhi ke vyakti ko bula lena chahiye , mera matlab hai shatrughan ko .

Dashrath : Putra ,shaayad tum bhool rahe ho ki Shatrughan mera hi putra hai

Ram : Haan to ?

Dashrath : Mera matlab hai ki yeh sab chaturai use mujhse hi toh viraasat mein mili hai , dekhna aaj pane pitashree ko , kaise inn dono se haan karwaata hoon , bulaao dono ko

Dashrath : Mahaaraj janak , aapki bhi kuch aavshyakta padegi ( he whispered something in his ears )

Janak ( laughing ) : Samajh gaya maharaj.

Just as ram and Sita were about to go and call Lakshman and Urmila , they realized they hadn't to

For the Trouble Making pair was on its way towards them themselves , quarreling bitterly.

Behind them were following the other two brothers of Ram and sisters of Sita

Bharat and shatrughan had groped Lakshman , while their nemesis had groped Urmila Tightly

Lakshman : Maine kaha mujhe jaane do Bharat bhayia , Iss Ladki ko aaj main chodhunga nahi

Urmila : Chodh do didi , isse toh main dekh loongi aaj

Bharat : Mandavi Ji , Kaskar pakde rahiyega , warna anarth ho jaaega , pata nahi kya kar daalenge ek doosre ke saath

Mandavi ( angrily ) : Aap to chup hi rahiye , kahan main aapko pakadkar rakhna chaahti thi , aur kahan mujhe apni yeh paagal behen ko pakdhe rehna padh raha hai

Shrutkirti ( holding on to Urmila ) : Didi , yahan pehle hi pangaa pada hua hai , aur aapko apni prem kahaani samudra par lagaane ki soojhi hui hai ?

Shatrughan : Shrutu , Aisa mat bolo na , jabtak Bharat bahyia ki setting nahi hoti , humaara n umber kaise aaega.

Dahsrath and Janak Interved

Janak : Yeh kya ho raha hai wahan par

Dashrath : Sab ke sab idhar aao , abhi . Dekha Maharaaj , Yeh hain mere Raghukul ke chashmo chiraag , Umar vivaah ki ho chuki hai aur harkatein dekhiye.

Janak : Meri Putriyaan kaunsi Kam hain maharaj ...

Dashrath: Who toh mai dekh hi raha hoon...( Uh...oh)

Janak( shocked ) : Jeee...

Dashrath : Laksmhan , Urmila Kyun Jhagadh rahe tum dono

Shatrughan ( to bharat's ears ) : Lagi Bhayia 100-100 ki , inn dono ko yaad nahi hogi ladaai ki wajah

Bharat : Chup Karo

Lakshman And Urmila : Woh Main ... Woh... Woh... Yaad Nahi Pitashree

Shatrughan ( to Himself Proudly ) : Wah Beta shatrughan , shart jeetne ke Karya mein to tum nipun hote jaa rahe ho

Dashrath and Janak Give Jaw dropping astonishing Expression towards the fact that they didn't even remember the reason of fighting , as Lakshmila stood there with their heads down in emberrasament.

Dashrath ( In ram's Ears ) : Ab dekho kaise inko apni baton ke jaal mein gol mol phansata hoon

Dashrath : Haan toh Lakshman Aur Urmila , Jaisa ki tum dono ko pata hi hai ki Ayodhya Aur Mithila ke beech ab ek gehra sambandh banne jaa raha hai

Lakshman : Ji pitashree , Gyaat Hai

Janak : Toh Humne socha ki Rishta aage badhe , usse pehle 2 sabse mehetvapoorn vyaktiyon se pooch liya jaaye ki unka iss rishte ke bare main kya khaayal hai

Urmila : Sachme Pitashree , aabko aisa lagtaa hai ki hamaare vichaar iss rishte mein sabse adhik mehetvapoorn hain

Janak : Bilkul Putri

Dashrath : To Lakshman , Vivaah Pashchaat Humaare Parivaar mein jo sadaysa aaega , tum Uska Poorn tarah Khayal rakhoge

Lakshman ( thinking talks are about Sita ) : Ji avashya

Dashrath : Usse sadaa prem poorvak baat Karoge

Lakshman : Ji

Dashrath : Uski har baat maoge

Lakshman : Ji

Dashrath : Usse Kabhi Mithila ki yaad toh nahi aane doge

Lakshman : Ji... Mera matlab Ji nahi , kabhi nahi aane doonga

Janak : Urmila , Jinka rishta vivaah pashchaat tumse jud raha hai , Unka hamesha sammaan karogi

Urmila : Ji pitashree

Janak : Unke Liye swaadisht bhojan bhi tayaar karogi

Urmila ( Thinking it to be ram when he visits mithila again ) : Ji pitashree

Janak : Agar Kuch hansi mazaak tumhaare saath kiya , toh rooth ke baith toh nahi jaaogi

Urmila ( again thinking to be Ram ) : Nahi pitashree , Vivaah pashchaat toh rishta hi aise ho jaaega unke saath ki mazaak toh chalta rahega naa.

Janak and Dashrath together : Toh Matalab Mudde ki baat yeh hai ki tum dono iss vivaah se Kaafi prasann ho , aur kisi ko koi aappati nahi hai

Lakshmila together ( thinking to be ram sita marriage ) : Ji Nahi , appati ka to koi sawaal hi nahi hai , Yeh vivaah se badhkar humaare jeevam mein kuch nahi

Dashrath gets up and Embraces Janak Tightly : Mubaarak ho Maharaaj , Rishta Pakka Ho gaya

Dono Maan Gaye , Ab ram aur sita ke Saath Lakshman Urmila ka vivaah bhi sampan Hoga

Lashman And Urmila : Haainnn... Yeh Hamaari baat ho rahi thi...( both faint )

Bharat ( folds Hand ) : Maan Gaye Pitashree Aapko , bahut Kuch seekhna baaki hai

Shatrughan Holds Kirti's hand and rushes towards the 2 emperors

Shatrughan : Pitashree , main kya soch raha tha , Shrutu aur Mujhse bhi yahi sawaal kar li jiye , hum bhi tayaar hain... Promise Lakshman bhayia waale hi jawaab doonga.

Suddenly Sita Gives an angry expression and tries to walk away from there

Ram rushes to her

Ram : Kya hua sitae

Sita : Swami , Humein pata chal gaya , Jinme ladaai hpti hai , unhi mein prem adhik hota hai

Ram : toh

Sita : Aap humse ladte hi nahi , iska arth aap humse prem nahi karte

Ram : Hey bholenath ... Ab yeh vichaar kahan se aa gaya mann mein

Sita : Abhi shatrughan Bhayia hi mere kaan mein mujhe bata rahe , jis waqt pitashree Lakshman se baat kar rahe the

Ram : SHATRUGHANNN... NALAAYAK AADMI ... Ruk iidhar . Main yahaan rishte judwaa raha hoon aur yeh mera hi rishta tudwaane par tula hua hai ( shatrughan runs away )

Everyone Else their Laugh their hearts out at their innocence and disperse away


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In Love and Sickness

-An OS by Riya

Lakshman hated being cooped up in a bed that took up half of his bedchamber. He has always despised the feeling of having to lying down just because of a mere bout of fever. Ever since Ram, Sita and he came back from their fourteen year exile, their mothers started fawning over them especially him as they had never done before...to the point where Lakshman felt like screaming his lungs out for some respite. Who knew excessive filial love could actually make one wary of the term itself and to top it all...there was no sign of her! You would think that a wife would be the most soothing balm for a parched human like him. He had missed her so much all this time being away from her, that the mental agony of being parted from her almost became a physical one... and after reuniting with his beloved wife after a decade, the thought of being apart filled him with dread. His head was a dizzy but Lakshman was quite sure that the last time he had caught a glance of Urmila, was three days back when he started feeling queasy. He is almost certain that he had heard his devil of a twin smirk at him "Now what have you gotten yourself into brother? The mighty Lakshman who defeated the likes of Meghnad, couldn't withstand the changing of seasons! Lakshman didn't have the strength to smack his twin's head even though he was itching to. How the hell did this happen? And why exactly is he all alone in this huge chamber? Don't they know that whatever he has in him can't be cured by any medicine procured by any physician in the whole wide world? Why was he being denied of one the one thing that he needed to be all better? Does he sound like a whiny kid? Well he supposes that he does. After all he is sick, he is entitled to be all crabby and whiny. Hah! Anybody who could see him now wouldn't help but wonder, "how the mighty have fallen... and all because of a woman. But if you think about it...it's always because of a woman. Thought Lakshman wryly. They twist your insides up and then leave you to die...or in this case, when you have blessed fever! Urgh! Time went on but Lakshman continued to feel even more wretched. True, being a prince himself and on top of that a Raghuvanshi, he was being tended to by the best of all; and the vaidji and the nurses attended to his every single whim but Sumitranandan Lakshman remained a sulk-pot... He even tried to throw some child-like tantrums which amused his mother Sumitra largely however it was Queen Kaikeyi, mother of Prince Bharat who really diagnosed his ailment correctly.


She slowly moved to the right side of his bed and shook her head at the restless figure lying down on it. It was quite evident from the constant turning and tossing around on the bed that the patient wasn't fooling anyone. She silently sat next to him and put her affectionate hand on his forehead. It was truly burning up. Why wasn't the medicine working? The royal doctor was someone they trusted blindly and wholeheartedly...then could THAT be a real reason for his not recuperating at all.

She called for the royal doctor, "Why isn't Rajkumar Lakshman getting well vaidji?

The doctor was equally stupefied as he too was at a loss of proper words. "We-we are trying our best and the sickness is not serious but somehow Rajkumar Lakshman seems restless and sleep continues to elude him. We've tried all the different methods known to me to induce sleep but he simply won't. Kaikeyi dismissed him and turned around to find a fake-asleep Lakshman. She shook her head in merriment as she walked up to his bed and sat down yet again in the same place which she had vacated only a couple of minutes earlier. "But even if you do not know Vaidji, I've the exact remedy for the sickness of Prince Lakshman and I'll make sure he takes it and gets better. She laughed lightly, kissed the feverish forehead of the ailing prince, and went out of his chamber in search of the perfect medicine.

In Queen Sumitra's chamber

The huge four-poster bed couldn't do much to bring much needed rest to Princess Urmila's sleep eluded eyes. She too like her husband tossed and turned and heaved but unfortunately couldn't manage even a few hours of sleep. Three days...it's been three days since she had seen him last. The moment the royal physician diagnosed Prince Lakshman was fever, the first thing her mothers in law did was to remove her from their chamber...why ???...because she is pregnant! The decision was made in order to ensure her and the unborn baby's safety but she knew better. There was no way in the world that her husband could get better without her being near him. She tried in vain to make them understand without being improper and blatant...but all her pleas fell into deaf ears. Kausalya and Sumitra reasoned with her that her husband was in excellent hands and that he was a son to them...etc et-cetra. After a point Urmila realized there was no way she could win the losing battle and stopped protesting altogether. However three days have passed since and yet there was no news of Lakshman recuperating. She was worried since she knew quite well that her husband was just upset with her and was testing her patience and resilience. Oh Lord Shiva! How she longed to be with him right then. To take him in her arms and soothe away his burning forehead with her healing touch and insurmountable love. She finally got up from the bed that she was currently sharing with her loving mother-in-law and walked over to the huge window looking over the great Shiva temple. Urmila jumped a little as the huge gold filigreed and paneled door opened ushering in a visibly nervous Kaikeyi. "Mother, is everything okay? Why aren't you in bed yet? Kaikeyi looked at her daughter- in law and smiled, "How can a mother rest when her children are unhappy and spending sleepless nights? Urmila looked at her feet as a treacherous tear fell from her left eye. Kaikeyi continued, "Darling daughter, I've seen a lot of couples in my life some quite celebrated like Ram and Sita but never have I never seen a more attuned couple as you two. Here you're standing in front of the window missing him, worrying about him and in your chamber your husband does the same. Kaikeyi took the trembling hands of Urmila who seemed too distraught to form a coherent answer. "Tell me what do you want to do? Asked Kaikeyi kindly. "I just want to be with him" was the instant answer the queen was greeted with as soon as she finished asking her question.

"So you shall be...my dear. Watching you two, I've learned one thing that being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own...come with me. Kaikeyi took Urmila out leaving behind a sleeping Sumitra oblivious to the entire exchange of dialogues between them.


Urmila and Lakshman's bed chamber

As soon as kaikeyi entered Urmila and Lakshman's marital chambers, she dismissed all the nurses and said to Urmila, "Only once in your life, I truly believe, you find someone who can completely turn your world around. You tell him things that you've never shared with another soul and he absorbs everything you say and actually want to hear more. You share hopes for the future, dreams that will never come true, goals that were never achieved and the many disappointments life has thrown at you. When something wonderful happens, you can't wait to tell him about it, knowing he will share in your excitement. He is not embarrassed to cry with you when you are hurting or laugh with you when you make a fool of yourself. Even if he ends up hurting you, he will never hurt your feelings or make you feel like you are not good enough, but rather he builds you up and show you the things about yourself that make you special and even beautiful. There is never any pressure, jealousy or competition but only a quiet calmness when he is around. You can be yourself and not worry about what he will think of you because he loves you for who you are. The things that seem insignificant to most people such as a note, song or walk become invaluable treasures kept safe in your heart to cherish forever. Memories of your childhood come back and are so clear and vivid it's like being young again. Colours seem brighter and more brilliant. Laughter seems part of daily life where before it was infrequent or didn't exist at all. A quick visit or two during the day helps to get you through a long day's work and always brings a smile to your face. In his presence, there's no need for continuous conversation, but you find you're quite content in just having him nearby. Things that never interested you before become fascinating because you know they are important to this person who is so special to you. You think of this person on every occasion and in everything, you do. Simple things bring him to mind like a pale blue sky, gentle wind or even a storm cloud on the horizon. You open your heart knowing that there's a chance it may be broken one day and in opening your heart, you experience a love and joy that you never dreamed possible. You find that being vulnerable is the only way to allow your heart to feel true pleasure that's so real it scares you. You find strength in knowing you have a true friend and possibly a soul mate who will remain loyal till the end. Life seems completely different, exciting and worthwhile. Your only hope and security is in knowing that he is a part of your life. He is everything to you that you are to him. He is your best friend as you're his; he is your anchor just as you are his shore, you're soul-mates; he is your husband and you're his wife. You've every right to be in this chamber and tend to him. Now go to him as I am sure he is eagerly waiting for you even if he's pretending to be asleep...I bet he has heard every single word that I said to you. Kaikeyi held Urmila's face and kissed her on her forehead before leaving the couple alone and silently closing the door on her exit.

Urmila glanced at the apparent sleeping form of her sick husband and knew instantly that he was faking...and under no circumstances was he asleep. Her heart surged up at the thought as she slowly went over to their bed, quietly crept in, and silently lay on her side of the bed and almost instantly she felt an arm securing her in and pulling her to his firm chest. Urmila softly smiled at her husband's antics. "Took you three days to find your way to your sick husband! Urmila shivered as the sleep addled voice murmured in her ears. She turned to his side and smiled, "You know I couldn't...I so wanted to be here beside you but mothers wouldn't allow. "I understand...and they are right, you shouldn't be here it's not right for the child. Lakshman said even though emotions betrayed his voice. Urmila shook her head and even in the dark she knew Lakshman was feeling guilty. She slowly touched his face and kissed him softly, "I am exactly where I should've been. No one can take me away from you even for a second. She said resolutely. "Wh-What about our child? Asked an unsure Lakshman.

"Their parents love each other so much that they can't possibly live without one another...tell me is there a better condition in the world that a child could've asked for? There's a saying that an unborn child is happier when its mother is happy and YOU...sir make me the happiest. It's a win-win situation if you ask me. Lakshman looked at her dazed, full of emotions; still quite unsure as to how he was so lucky to have her as his wife...He surely wasn't THAT deserving...was he? He chuckled and thought of lightening up the emotionally charged up moment. He pulled his wife closer to him, if that was even feasible, "I think you're plain lucky to have me as your husband. Even in the comparative darkness, as a sliver of moonlight peeked through the heavily drawn curtains, Urmila could hear the quiet laughter in Lakshman's voice as her eyebrows raised up involuntarily. "Is that so?? Somehow I always had the thought that it was the other way round. Lakshman was yet again reminded of his wife's quick wit and intelligence. "Well I think you're right but let me tell you, I don't like to sleep alone in this huge chamber without you by my side... Suddenly to Urmila her husband sounded like 6 year old child and her heart overflowed with fondness. She took his warm slightly feverish hands in her and asked, "...and why is that? And what will you do when Pitashree takes me to Mith...?

"I won't let him... came the instant reply...even before she could complete her question. Urmila's giggle resonated through the room, as Lakshman looked quite agitated. "What are you giggling for? You think I am scared of your father?

"Aren't you? asked an equally amused Urmila. "No...coughed Lakshman... "...may be a little ...well that is only because I get a little tongue tied in front of a stalwart person like him. He sounded a little chagrined and a whole lot more honest. "But...what will happen, if you go away and I fall sick all over again?

"Well you won't...but even if you do, you'll still have the royal physician and his nurses to look after you and the Queen mothers will be there too to look after you... Urmila tried to reson with him, simultaneously trying to find out the reason behind his distress. "Well none of them are YOU...and I don't like the nurses...I feel they have some evil intentions toward me. At this point, he was ready to try out any and every lousy excuse under the sun if that ensured his wife's presence beside all the time. Under normal circumstances Urmila would have laughed aloud at the ludicrous explanation but she did not...she knew he was probably a little befuddled with all the medicines coursing through him. She shook her head fondly as she suddenly realized that if their children inherited their father's trait then she was in for one hell of a ride but she also knew at the moment that she would trade that for anything in the world. "Well...then they are in for a heartbreak I am sure...and I am sorry for them... she smirked. "How do you know I won't succumb to their wily ways? asked Lakshman curiously. Urmila chose her words carefully...she wanted him to know that the implicit trust that she had on him was based on mutual love and tremendous amount of respect for each other. "Because I know you...better than you know yourself...just as you know me the best. People may not compose paeans on us in future...but our love is so much more than a just a few couplets or sonnets written down in a book somewhere. Lakshman stared at his glowing wife and for the umpteenth time that night thanked the Gods above for sending her to him or rather him to her. Only he knew the magnitude of pain and loss he had felt for fourteen long years when each and every solitary night was full of the beautiful memories they had had once created or of her tears that she had desperately tried to suppress. Somehow being away from her for so long had made him immensely more appreciative of her and sometimes even downright needy. "I've never really thought of myself as someone who would be interested in opposite sex...until I met you...for the very first time it felt like I had been struck down by a lightening. Suddenly nothing else mattered, things that were my priority until then didn't seem as much crucial anymore and there was always an uncomfortable feeling with queasiness...All that mattered to me then was to catch a glimpse of you and talk to you in any way I could...don't I sound like a desperate person and too clingy? You can be honest and I won't judge. Urmila softly kissed the hands of her husband.. "Never...and where is this even coming from? And who am I to judge you when I am on the same boat. Lakshman nuzzed his wife's neck which earned him a mock glare. "We're a hopeless pair...aren't we? Urmila smiled wildly as she cuddled more into her husband's warmth... "Yes we are...and don't worry I will not let any nurse come near you.

The couple slept off soundly with a faint smile on their respective faces cuddling together; relief quite evident on both their faces. And that is exactly how Queens Kausalya and Sumitra found our beloved couple sleeping blissfully oblivious to the outside world. It is a given that after getting his wife back to him, Prince Lakshman recuperated rather remarkably swiftly earning sniggering comments from his twin which he took in surprisingly well. After all he was a husband who was irrecoverably in love with his young wife and to his extremely good fortune she reciprocated those feelings with equal intensity...and trust me...he couldn't have asked for more.

Edited by Riya_16 - 7 years ago
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Our favourite LakshMila !!
I will put up something special for them .. surprise !!
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The thread is looking so beautiful! Waiting for the surprise...
The poem is absolutely awesome and breathtaking!
The edits are also pretty
Great job Sumi and team :D
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