Distorted Lives..FOUW..Thread 2..... updtd note pg 105 - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Great part. So finally aniee shared her problems, her dilemma with maan. being a good listener and brother, he heard everything and gave her needed assurance and asked her to know what she wants. She can't get both guys so she has to think, with whom she can spend her whole life. N I guess she understood. Her behaviour in restaurant and the way she questioned arjun was really a mature act of hers.
So geet awoke in the morning and was thinking what happened last night. She was thinking all wrong but maan cleared it saying the truth. Geet still thinks that she is the reason of maan's divorce. Though maan tried to make her understand that it was sam and him who are responsible, still geet couldn't able to overcome this guilt.
Geet got so upset when dev and she informed muskaan that now they can not stay together. She was feeling like a failure as a mother. Maan tried to console her with words but it will take its own time to over come these problems.
Brij saw maneet together. He saw how maan was helping geet and he could see some kind of bonding between them. But being a brother he wants to be careful so that no one can harm his sister again. Maan could sense how brij is feeling but for now he hasn't anything to tell him waiting for next dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62
Part 21

Welcome back sweety
About the part...it was beautiful
Loved how maan handled annie...instead of sugarcoating the words...he served her the reality of life..lovely
Loved how strong maan is in his conviction that only geet was nt responsible for that night in pub...love how they have this diff bond..yet they don't seem to acknowledge that...guess thts what life is all about
Wonderful part
Lovely story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63
Part 22
Loved how annie gave arjun the taste of his own medicine
The way you choose placing of order as a significant thing to prove Annie 's point was nice...

Dev and geet and muskaan...that has become complicated but I guess its necessary for muskaan to understand their relationship now itself...as maan said it wud be helpful and less hurtful in future

Loved brij's and maan's interaction at the airport
Loved how you have kept the ending quite open...like talking about answers to questions that they dnt have...its interesting and quite intriguing to find out
Really looking forward to this story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
grt two uds
both pt was awesome
maan very sensibly answered his sister and his encouragement gave boost fr taking decision
he assured hr he's always with hr to protect hr wat ever
is her decision but it's hr right to take decision of hr life
with whom she wanted to spend hr life but it's lifetime
decision so she get to know with whom she can't imagine
hr life
geet wokeup with heavy headache she realize she in maan room she want to know wat happened last night exactly maan came in room seeing his face she guss she did blunder but maan told hr noting happened between them last night he tensed bz of his sis and he cleared geet to stop thinking low fr hr self both was equal needed that night to distract from their
worries to take decisions boths already lost their partners before that night
muskan was very disturbed after knowing about divorce
Annie gave time to arjun to prove him self but his excuse
was not satisfied Annie fr breakup if in future again he face same than he also take decision on hr behalf she's right hr life always on risk as she's Khurana's heiress too and sis of msk but hr bro never stop hr fr living hr life
so knw she need time to decide wat she want
geet was upset maan comfort hr that muskan will b alright she's giving hr better life rather than she see mummy dady fight every day and get disturb
brij saw them together and their comfort level he's not stupid to not to guess maan assured him he never hurt geet
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
welcome back! thanks 4 da pm n double superb updates! wonderfully written! Annie confused n asks Maan 4 help! Maan is right! Life is nt easy! Annie has to make her choice! he advises Annie! Geet awakens with a hangover! she thinks something n Maan clears her mu! Maan tells her he is worried abt his sister! Annie meets Arjun! she explains that Vicky fixed her fater he left her! he doenst knw her well! she gives examples! Arjun knows she is right! Maan tells Geet that she was nt at fukat that night! they both needed it! his marriage broke cos of him n Sam nt her! Dev tells Muskaan abt the divorce! Muskaan shattered! Geet feels guilty as Muskaan is hurt! Geet vows 2 make Muskaan her priority! Brij sees Maan wid Geet! he is curious n questions Maan! Maan explains they met went he went to Darjeeling! Maan assures Brij he wil nt hurt Geet! he will answer Brij's questions later! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
nice part
maan worried for ana
n he asked her to chose one though it hurts other
anis behavior towards arjun was treat
she gave him what he gave
geet que maan about the ight
n he gave explanation about their previous behavior too
poor muskan broken
knowing about hr parents divorce
maans friendly behavior with geet makes brij have lots of que
maan only promised he wont hurt geet
nice part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
Chapter 21...
Awesome... Superb...

Thanks for update...

Maan heard annie n he made her see the raw truth ...

Life is never easy... N she is the one who will have to take her own decisions ...

He will always be there for her...

He realized how she has grown up to an adult...

He so much wanted to be present with her physically at the moment...

He cleared things about their night in the club with geet...

He told her that it was not her fault ... It was something both needed at that point of time...

They both found comfort in each other's arms ... N no matter what they are never gonna look down on that night ...

Atleast he won't ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
Chapter 22...
Awesome... Interesting...

Thanks for update
...

Continue soon
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Annie went to meet arjun to give him a chance n to here him out ...

She made him see his faults... N also made him realize that he was wrong in taking his decisions alone in their relationship...

She asked for sometime to decide on things as she can't trust him so easily once again...

I appreciate n support annie in her decisions...

She is being that strong n independent adult who doesn't need anyone to be happy... The one maan had asked her to be...

Great going annie ...



Geet went to meet dev with muskaan ...

They both together broke the news about their divorce to her... Breaking her heart...

That was so heart wrenching... To see the little girl suffer ...

Geet felt more hurt n realized between her n dev ... It's muskaan who is at loss ... N the one to suffer the most...

N she decided to think as a mother first in her future...

Maaneet reached mumbai n brij came to receive geet ...

He had questions seeing them together n sharing that comfort n something he couldn't point out...

He asked them to which maan replied with half the truth not completely satisfying him...

Brij as a brother is protective of his sister wanting to save her from another heart break...n getting hurt once again...

Maan assured him that he would never hurt geet...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
thanks fr da double update...shc a touchy update da 1st one ws
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
Awesome updates..
Waiting for next update..
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