#7 MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE PART 203 ON PG 8 - Page 5

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assuuu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Nxt part soon dr... waiting eagerly

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manandeeplove

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Heya hiii...

first of all
Wishing u a very very very happy bday...
May ur days b filled with sugary dashing moments,delicious chocolte adventure n marshmallow gooey sweet memories!!!!!!

now coming to updates...
manan engagement n their romance...
oppa...korean..
seems like u r into korean dramas...wink..
thats new ...

ring secret is revealed...
aryamaan on nyonika's side..
bt manik got ring for his love despite of all d plans...

fab 4 n manik's banter abt nandu was funny..
liked it

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mallee

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

thank u for righting in wattpad thank u so much

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anumanan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#44

PART 203

seeing the door unlocked manik enters into washroom slowly while nandu stands infront of the mirror having her gaze down lost in her thoughts...!!!

Moving close to her manik turns her towards him and lifting her head wipes away her tears while she stares him pressing her lips inside and "am sry...!!!"

"sryyy??? kyu...!!!" and he mutters once again wiping away her tears...!!!

"tumne...kaha tha...aryaman...wo... teek nahi hain...lekin main...main tumhari bath...!!!" and she stops crying out loud closing her eyes tightly...!!!

MANIK : shhh...nandini...apne ankhe kolo...mujhe dekho...!!!

"mujhe tumhari bath sun leni chahiye thi...mujhe usse dosthi hi nahi karni chahiye thi...main...am so sryyy...!!!" and she continues crying not opening her eyes...!!!

MANIK : jaan ek baar mujhe dekho...please...!!!

opening her eyes lazily she stares him with tear filled eyes while he cupping her cheeks kisses away her tears and "tumne aryaman se dosthi karke koyi galthi nahi ki...wo sab galath karna chahtha tha ye bath tumhe patha bi nahi thi...tumne tho ek ache dosth ki tharah uska sath diya...bas...isliye tumhe sry bolne ki zarurath hi nahi hain...!!!"

"agar main usse dosti nahi karthi tho aaj ye sab nahi hotha...ayyappa hamare sath the isliye sab acha huya...ham sath hain...varna...patha nahi...!!!" and she continues with hiccups refusing to agree manik words...!!!

MANIK : listen...listen...acha ek bath batao...hamara rishtha kaise shuru huya...!!!

NANDINI : dosti se...!!!

MANIK : aur agar hamari dosti nahi huyi hothi tho kya ham ek dusre ko jaan pathe...itna kareeb aa pathe???

NANDINI : nahi

MANIK : jaan dosthi na iss duniya ki sabse khubsurat cheez hain jo har ek insan ke liye zaruri hain...har ek rishthe ko banaye rakne ke liye zaruri hain...koyi bi insan dosthi soch samaj ke nahi kartha...!!!

NANDINI : manthi hoon...lekin...!!!

MANIK : lekin kya...sare dosth ek jaise nahi hothe...ache nahi hothe... ye bath tumhe patha chel gayi na... tho bas...ye bath yaad rakke aage dostho par vishwas zara soch samaj ke karna aur ek ki vajah se dosti karna math chodna...kyuki wo sahi nahi hain...!!!

staring him for few seconds she blinks away her tears and "tum... gussa nahi ho...!!!"

MANIK : nahi...kyu...!!!

NANDINI : maine tumhari bath nahi mani tho hi ye sab hua na

MANIK : aisa kisne kaha...tumhare ayyappa kuch chahthe hain tho wo tho hoke hi rehtha hain na... aryaman ka asli chehra tumhare samne aise ana tha tho ye sab hua...meri bath sunke tum agar usse dur bi rehthi na tho bi wo hame alag karne ki koshish kartha...isliye ye sab bathe chodo aur khud pe zara dyan do...kitna moti hothi jari ho tum...dekha bi hain ya nahi...!!!

NANDINI : haan...kyaa??? kya kaha...!!!

MANIK : wohi jo tumne suna

NANDINI : main...main moti hori hoon...!!!

"haan...tum...tum moti hori ho...dekho zara...!!!" and he turns her towards mirror asking her to see herself...!!!

NANDINI : tum...tum...jao yaha se...!!!

MANIK : haan jaonga lekin diet karna shuru kar do tum aur

NANDINI : shut up...mujhe tumse bath hi nahi karni...just...just leave...!!!

"Finee...!!!" and he walks out whistling while she shuts the door on his face angrily cursing him in brain making him relax that atleast she stopped her crying...!!!

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RAJ : manik..manik..!!!

MANIK : jee papa..kahiye..!!!

RESHMA : shadi ek saal baad hain beta...mubarako...!!!

MANIK : kyaaa...!!!

RAJ : reshmaaa

RESHMA : arey sahi hi tho bolri hoon

MOHAN : hahaha

MANIK : papaaa...!!!

MOHAN : kyaa

MANIK : kuch nahi...maa aap boliye...kya kehre the...!!!

RAJ : manik tu pehle bait...main bathatha hoo...!!!

MANIK : hmm kahiye

RESHMA : teri aur nandu ki shadi ki muhurath ek saal baad hain

MANIK : ek saal baad

MOHAN : jaldi hain na...do saal baad rake...!!!

RAJ : reshma thu chup bait aur mohan kya tu bi...!!!

MANIK : papa aap kahiye na ye log kya bolre

RAJ : manik darasal hamari bath pandit ji se huyi aur unhone kaha ki aage abi ache din nahi hain

MANIK : ek saal thak???

RAJ : nahi matlab hain lekin wo tere aur nandu ke liye teek nahi hain

MANIK : ohh

MOHAN : abi iss hafte kuch muhurat hain aur phir ek saal ke baad

RESHMA : abi ham shadi nahi kar sakthe isliye

MANIK : kyuuu

RESHMA : haa???

MANIK : abi ham shadi kyu nahi kar sakthe

MOHAN : do din ke baad ka muhurath hain manik ham

MANIK : teek hain

MOHAN : kyaa teek hain

MANIK : do din ke baad ki muhurath teek hain...ham kar lenge shadi...!!!

"kya din agaye...bado ke samne... nahi matlab...tch..!!!" and kabir utters walking close to them along with dhruliya,mukbi and navya...!!!

MANIK : tu chup kar...maa papa aap kuch kahiye na...!!!

RESHMA : do din main

RAJ : manik shadi koyi mazak nahi hain

MANIK : jantha hoon papa...please...!!!

RAJ : tujhe main mana kaise kar saktha hoon

MOHAN : raj ye tu

RAJ : mujhe koyi problem nahi hain manik baki inki marzi

MANIK : maaa...!!!

RESHMA : kyaa maa...ham yaha shadi ki bath karre hain...kitne sare kaam hothe hain...kitne sare logon ko bulana hotha hain...sari rasme...sari thayariya...sab...kaise hoga...!!!

MANIK : sab ho jayega maa aap bas haan keh dijiye

RESHMA : lekinnn

MANIK : pleashhh

RESHMA : ye chehra banake mana letha hain..teek hain..!!!

MANIK : yeyyy thank u thank u so muchhh

MOHAN : beta main bi hoon yaha

MANIK : ohh haan mubarako dad do din main bahu ane vali hain gar pe

MOHAN : maine haan nahi kaha

MANIK : mujhse zyada khush aap hi hain dad tho kyu bekar ki acting karre hain

MOHAN : formality ke liye bi meri permission nahi leni hain tujhe wahhh

MANIK : jab jawab patha ho tho formality ke liye bi puchna kyu dad

RESHMA : vaise aap sabko kya ho gaya

KABIR : kuch nahi...ham jare hain...karlo aap ko jo karna hain...!!!

MANIK : aye ruk...jare matlab kaha jaoge tum log...!!!

MUKTHI : kayi bi jayenge

ALIA : lekin yaha nahi rukenge

ABHI : aur na hi tere shadi ka koyi kaam karenge

MANIK : very funny

KABIR : no it's not

DHRUV : tu tho aram se sab order karke chela jayega

ABHI : aur sab karke karke hame marna padtha hain

ALIA : kayi compromise nahi hona aur sab perfect chahiye

MUKTHI : lekin khud kuch karoge nahi

MANIK : drama bandh karo itna bi kaam nahi karvatha hoon main tum logon se

RESHMA : correct

KABIR : kya correct aap chup rahiye apko kya

"kabirrr" and hearing nandu voice everyone turn towards her while she walking close to him stands beside him and "tum sab kiske side ho"

KABIR : ofcourse tumhare side hain shona ye bi koyi puchne vali bath hain

NANDINI : tho itne pareshan kyu hore ho...meri shadi ke time pe tension lo na...!!!

DHRUV : pari shadi do din baad hain

NANDINI : kiski

NAVYA : manik ki aur

NANDINI : shadi uski hain tho aap log kyu itna hyper hore ho

ALIA : baby tu

NANDINI : uski shadi hain wo kuch na kuch manage kar lega

RAJ : uski shadi matlab

NANDINI : papa mujhe office main thoda kaam hain...main shaam thak athi hoon...!!!

RESHMA : papa kuch puchre hain tujhse

NANDINI : guys aap log aram kijiye...shadi meri nahi hori hain aur jaise ki apne kaha ki aap mere side ho tho apko manik ki shadi ke liye tension lene ki zarurath nahi hain...!!!

KABIR : oookkk...!!!!

RESHMA : ye kya bolri hain tu

MANIK : maa relax...kuch nahi hain...!!!

RAJ : par

MANIK : that's ok dad...chodiye...!!!

MOHAN : tu ne phir se kuch kiya???

MANIK : tch nahi dad

NANDINI : ye kabi kuch kartha hi kab hain papa...huhh...main chelthi hoon...byyy...!!!

MOHAN : haaa...byyy...!!!

without turning back nandu walks out while FAB 4 jump on manik all ready to kill him...!!!

KABIR : kya kiya tune

DHRUV : pari ki mood teek karna tha tujhe

MUKTHI : usse aur pareshan karna nahi

ALIA : ab bolo bi kuch why are you smiling

MANIK : areyyy kuch nahi...usse rone se rokne ke liye kuch aur kiya maine...thoda gussa hain wo bas...!!!

MOHAN : rone se rokne ke liye...matlab...!!

"wo actually" and manik narrates entire story of arya stealing nandu ring...!!!

RESHMA : wo aise kaise kar saktha hain

MANIK : aaahh please...abi kisi ko bi uske bare main bath karne ki zarurath nahi hain...do din main shadi hain so just concentrate on it...!!!

ABHI : tho tu kiske sath shadi karra

MANIK : kiske sath matlab tu

ABHI : arey abi nandu khud kehke gayi na ki wo tujhse tho shadi nahi karne vali hain

KABIR : point

"shut up...shadi tho MANAN ki hogi hi...madam ki na haan main kaise badal na hain wo mujhe ache se patha hain...!!!" and manik smiles smirking while everyone sigh knowing something was cooking in his mind for sure...!!!!

Happyyy diwaliii...kaise ho???? main kisi ko yaad hoon???? na kahoge tho bi koyi problem nahi hain kyuki galthi meri hi hain...am so so sryyy guys...I know aap ye story se kitna connected ho but i had some issues aur jab update karna chaha tho account main kuch problem ho gaya...leaving it aside am here to give a happy ending to manan and nooo main ye kahani bech main kabi nahi chod sakthi hoon...will hopefully update again soon...so yeaa that's it for now...agar main aur ye story abi bi apko yaad hain tho thanks a ton for that...!!!

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Tiara115

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Posted: 6 years ago

#45

Happy diwali

Amazing update

I love this nok jhok of manan

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yatigupta234

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Posted: 6 years ago

#46

best Diwali gift...thank you for updating

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Vandyandy

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Posted: 6 years ago

#47

Happy Diwali Anuuu .

Awesome update ...

I was missing this story Anu ... THKS for updating it ...

Eagerly waiting for Manan marriage ...

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sneha_glamarous

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Posted: 6 years ago

#48

Happyyy Diwali to you too Anu...!!

Thank u so much for updating it...

I logged in IF today only after the gap of so many months n look what I get to see...an update from you... wohoo...

U toh made my Diwali more happening...

I kinda lost the continuity of the story thatswhy I had to recaptulate it by reading previous chapter...

This was very good chapter..

Love of kabir n dhruv for their pari is incredible... The way u hv shown their bonding is very sweet n so is of rest of fab4 with their princess...

Hawww manik ne nandu ko mota kha..lol... Lagta h mota kehna bhaari pad gya... Ab bahut saare papad bael ne padenge shadi jo karni h do din mein...

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Mjrocks

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Posted: 6 years ago

#49

Want previous thread link too

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Sid

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Posted: 6 years ago

#50

Thank you for updating even after ages.. u remember us and thought to give a logical ending to the much loved MaNan FF. I used to like this story a lot.. u know y because u used to write big big updates very frquently... u never bothered about people commenting or not.. initially ur updates were more than the comments and u have come a long way.. I still read all ur FF in WA.. This is ur first and my fav amoung all ur FF's

Coming to the update.. Manik and his ways of convincing her.. always pull her legs.. OMG finally marriage is fixed.. just two days... super happy for them... nice update..

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