Untold Tales Of RAMAYAN ! UPADATED-Page 8 - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Fantastic update Mohini
The conversation between three Matas and four sisters was beautiful⭐️

Thank you Didi 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shrinika13
OMG Mohini!
You understood what I have been trying to tell people for so long!
Some people feel like the Queen Mothers didn't get along, but you have brought their relationship out so beautifully! Thanks for this gorgeous piece of writing!

Hehe even I was lil confused for their relationship Di, credit goes to Madhuri Didi. A lively discussion with her brought out this piece of writing!

Am so very happy you liked it!😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: SenAnu
MOHINI MOHINI MOHINI !!!!

Awesome ! Awesome ! Really Good!

My favourite part was where the sisters ask Sumitraa Maa about the three Mothers' bond ... .So wonderfully depicted !

Do update soon! I am desperately waiting !
Loved the sisters' bond !

Anu Jaan! 🤗

Thanks dear! Their bond deserves more, this was just my sheer attempt. Glad you liked it!

Well your previous update's review pending baby... 😉

*plz do read and reply if time permits*

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Mohini!

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: SilverBell
Beautiful Story.

Thank you dear!

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Mohini 🤗

Page 1 Sita's guilt is awesome. Wow it's modernized version - but not so far from epic characters' behaviour. Lob this.

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Hi Mohini 🤗

The Bubbly Bharat on page 3

Again a modern set up with myth characters. Lively and fun bonding btw the family.

Lob it 😃 Then Hanuman came that's even more cooler and more fun.

The devoted siblings and their wives is nicely shown through your writing.😛

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Hello I'm back 🤗

Page 5 Wave Of Happiness

So nice to see all interact 😃 The trip seem fun. You added masti dialogues - enjoyed it.

Looking forward to read about older queens.

Urmila was funny haha. So cute.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Mohini 🤗

oho i lob your stories ❤️ *goofy smile*😳 😆 I'm a goofy fan too.

page 8 The 3 Queens

This one is fab. The relationship with the senior queens vs young ones were fab.
The best part was them letting the young ones sleep in their lap. 😳

So many different ways you described the affection - in mod style I would say with the classic characters.

I dunno who Shanta is - who is that. That came as surprise to me. Is that in original epic of Ramayan?
This I got confused at this point.

So nice the young queens are visiting their parents' place. 🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

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So am here Athi 🤗

Thank you so much dear!

Your detailed review filled me with great motivation to write more such stuff 😛😆

The modern touch came with the flow as I wished to portray a happy loving joint family 😳

Originally posted by: AASUS

I dunno who Shanta is - who is that. That came as surprise to me. Is that in original epic of Ramayan?
This I got confused at this point.

Dear, Shanta is said to be Ram ji's elder sister, who was given to Dashrath's best friend by him as he was child less; as told in some of the texts am not sure about the original version.

Thanks again for reading and replies sweety. Will be updating most probably in two weeks as my exams get over!

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Mohini

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